I have finally gotten a editor to go over and check my stories. As of chapter twelve they have been gone over and hopefully together we have corrected everything! While some may delete all past comments I am going to be leaving them to remind myself of how badly my first chapters sucked. Still any and all comments are wanted.
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Brian sat paying attention too the mountain in front him or at least ATTEMPTING to do so anyway, he kept getting slightly distracted at all the giggling that was going on in the back seat. Tina, sitting in the passenger seat of his Jeep Grand Cherokee, just smiled knowing the strain on his pants that the presence of herself her sister and their cousins were causing but she really did get as much amusement as any of them at causing him a bad case of blue balls. Chuckling, she laid her hand on his thigh. "Don't worry, we'll be there soon horny and when we get rooms for the night we'll deal with your 'BIG' problem." The giggles in the back abruptly changed to hysterical laughter.
Brian just grinned. By the end of the night he would have made a couple of female's butts and crotches so very sore and he was looking forward to hearing the complaining tomorrow about having to sit for the additional hours that they would have to be sitting till they got to their destination. He caught movement in his peripheral sight that he grabbed at so that it wouldn't hit the rear view mirror, not that he had been able to make much use of it for that last day considering that it was all but blocked with the girl's stuff.
As he realized what he had grabbed he couldn't help but whimper as he handed it back . "All right Brianna, put them back on we do NOT need the fucking highway pigs pulling us over and having a under-aged girl's bra being thrown around the jeep." As he reached back to hand the bra back he hit bare knees. "Also pull your pants back up, I've got twelve days, six and half hours to go before you're legal and I am NOT about get in trouble about nailing a minor this close to her being fair game! Anyway for a girl that's been paralyzed from the waist down for the last seven years you get around better than most people."
"OH alright." Came the reply from the seventeen year old with a pout. "Hey sis? How did you come across all this 'cheap' land?? I mean what you described is prime land right next to the Rockies and right next door is a high scale horse ranch that teaches the little rich bastards how to ride."
"Well." Brian piped up. "At least that three hundred million jackpot that Tina won was put in annuity and then put in in nice stocks." A comment that was second by everyone in the jeep. "So when do we try for the next jackpot, because honestly is it really POSSIBLE to have to much money?"
Laria laughed. "You're money hungry Brian, but that's a question that's open for argument because there are lots plus and minuses to having a lot of money. Most people including us for the most part agree with you, with the cost of living skyrocketing thanks to the ignorance and incompetence of our government, having to much money two weeks ago means nothing now, except that you're middle class."
"Hey Michelle, so what are your thoughts on leaving our good old beloved state of Kansas BEHIND?" Brian asked when he felt the gloom coming from that side of the backseat.
Michelle sighed and kept looking out the window. "There was no choice in our moving, if we didn't move the parasites would have bled us all dry." Brianna immediately objected to family being called parasites though, when she tried to argue, she only managed to prove what they all knew to be more of a fact than death and taxes being the only things that could be depended on.