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I am looking for an editor for the novel, I know I need to do some work on it so feedback is highly valued. Just to mention that I sometimes have to cut the paragraphs about. Ch. 13 was initially rejected as Literotica editors asked me to make the long passages of monologue shorter for readers on small screens.
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Arianna opened her eyes and stared at the exquisitely painted bowl full of hot chocolate hovering in Lisette's hands in her eyeline. She sat up with a dreamy smile. Lisette put the bowl on the bedside table and began arranging her pillows behind her for her to lean into, ignoring her half-hearted protests.
Lisette was asking if she wanted to get dressed yet, saying the boys were already breaking their fast with Clair. She relaxed back in the pillows, she would take a few moments at leisure. As Lisette went to pull open the heavy painted curtains and let light drift in through the muslin curtains of her windows, she was already reaching for a scroll on the bedside table.
Her bowl of chocolate was half finished when she heard steps running up the stairs by her room and a hurried tattoo on her door. Clair's voice was coming up to whichever of the boys it was, scolding. Her wide red mouth curved in her smile.
Her door burst open and they both tumbled in, laughing. She held out her arms; they scrambled up onto the big bed, rolling in the quilts and embroidered covers. Arkyll pulled a pillow out from behind her and tried to put it over Hanya's head, Hanya shoved him back in the bed. They rolled up against her body, giggling and struggling, she giggled too as she pushed their kicking little limbs away from her.
"I have said it, you must not disturb your mother, let her rest!" Clair's voice expostulated. Arianna hurriedly shoved her scroll under her pillows, trying to make it look as if she had been enjoying a quiet well-earned doze before the boys came tumbling in. She lifted her head to see him standing in the doorway: tall and lean in some old jodhpurs and riding boots, a white cotton shirt unbuttoned at the throat and a green woollen cardigan. He was resting one tanned hand on the door jamb, his expression apologetic. The boys were snuggling close to her and wrapping their arms about her neck, pretending that they had wanted a kiss not to bounce in the big bed. Their small bodies pressed affectionately to her, shaking with giggles.
"Kiss your mother, your aunt," Clair said. "If you make us late for school, I will not take you to learn riding later. Is it understood?" They made cries of anxiety, rushing to press their soft little mouths to her cheeks and scramble from the bed. He was trying to ask above their shouting that
it was not fair, there was not time
, while they fell off the bed and rushed to the door, would Arianna be content to spare the boys for the afternoon to have a riding lesson. It would be a pity to spend such a fine day so late in the summer indoors. She pretended to hesitate but her heart leapt. An extra couple of hours in the library!
"I have some correspondence I ought to attend to," she said, leaning back in the pillows with her lids half-closing on blue eyes already veiled over some other matter she was considering.
Before turning to the anxiously calling boys who were already halfway down the stairs, he paused, unable to resist the temptation of letting his eyes drift over her. The soft light fell on the flaxen and cream shades of her big body lounging back in the white linen and silk of her pillows and nightdress, her blue eyes veiled in the abundance of pale sweet curves she was offering to his vision. His eyes narrowed up, he forced them to her eyes. She was smiling so contentedly but her blue eyes were covered by half-closed lids - there was something on the go. Who was it she liked to write to? Firmly he pulled the door of her bedroom on the latch as he went down the stairs after the two boys. He could hear two of his menservants joking with the boys as they came up the stairs.
Later as he ran up the stairs, he saw her door still latched and he knocked casually on it, thinking she must have gone about her morning's business but her voice called out to him. When he went in, she was still lying about in the pillows in her heavy silk nightdress, some scroll in her fingers. She blushed when she saw it was him, hurriedly rolling up the scroll and putting it on her bedside table. Who could she have imagined would come knocking at her bedroom door? The servants would not have knocked. Her breasts heaved in the lace and silk of her nightdress. Clair turned his eyes to the side, unable to repress the thought of putting his mouth to the big soft breasts he could see the shape of, his cock started swelling softly in his breeches.
"Um, I was wondering ... I noticed you had commissioned some report from an Iarvian merchant," he said huskily. Sweet Hell, look at the deep cleavage between her breasts but she had no idea what an effect she had on people. He knew how annoyingly innocent she had been brought up, they had taken great pains to assure him of it when he was obliged to marry her. So why had she blushed? Just to see her own husband in the doorway of her bedroom halfway through the morning?
"What time is it?" she asked, seeming to become aware that the light falling about him was bright and clear. He laughed and said, "that must be a famous novel you are reading, for you to have been so absorbed in it that Lisette has been twice to try to get you up and dressed and you sent her away both times."
"Twice?" she said in surprise, looking to see a tray with a plate of crumbs and a second bowl with the dregs of some hot chocolate in it by her bed. She put a long finger across and pressed it into the crumbs which she lifted to her mouth. Clair watched her wide red mouth closing around her long pale finger to suck on it. He felt his cock stirring harder in his breeches and stood further back out of the doorway, saying, "I will send her to you now. I only thought ... you wanted me to meet you and the merchants. I wondered if the report you commissioned might explain to me why you wish me to meet with some cloth merchants."
Her finger was arrested at her mouth. (Her breasts heaved softly in the folds of her nightdress as she took a deep breath in.) "No," she said slowly. "Probably not." Her eyes swung round on him, her face was harder. He knew there was something to do but he was desperate to shut the door, he could hear someone coming up the stairs.