Copyright © 2015 Naoko Smith
My dear reader,
I've been posting these chapters in the hopes of some feedback. I've had very few comments, votes or even anonymous messages via the feedback form. (I am extremely grateful to one person who let me know that the way I use the names in this novel is confusing so I should do some work on that.) The number of views on recent chapters has dramatically dropped, making me wonder if this story is maybe too old-fashioned? I did start writing it a long time ago, when FemDoms and women warriors were rare and wonderful beings, maybe it's not such a big deal today.
If you managed to get as far as this chapter, you are a serious fan, and I owe you something for that. I'm going to post a couple more chapters so you get a little bit of closure on this bit of the story, then I'm going to edit the novel some more and come back and re-post it later on. Please please, if you have any suggestions I should take on board, please let me know. I do have the whole novel written up, and you may have a pdf copy of it all for free if you can't bear to wait while I tidy it up and repost the earlier chapters. Just drop me an email with your address; I love to think people are reading my stories so I will be very glad to hear from you.
Thank you so much for staying with the story. I'm determined to write it up better - for you. :heart:
Vadya found Pava in the inner courtyard. He was dozing on a rug and some cushions, in the flickering light shade of a pear tree. Two cats had curled up beside him. He had a romantic novel loosely held in his long hand.
"Which is my room," Vadya asked the footman who had been showing him to a bath.
He walked past the nodding flowers around the mossy fountain and jabbed Pava in the ribs with the dusty toe of his boot.
"Ow!" Pava groaned but he did not bother to open his eyes.
"Get up!" Vadya said angrily.
"Dearest Vadya, let me be," Pava said lazily, opening his sleepy green eyes and smiling up at the glowering Commander above him. "I promise not to tell anyone slepts't in the same bed as Tashka at the Ship Inn."
Vadya went hot and then cold at this reminder of an occasion when in a drunken stupor he might have kissed his junior officer, not realising she was a woman and that very member of the high nobility whose hand he was going to have to ask for in marriage. "Holy Angels!" he hissed. "Get up, traitor! Snake! Pink-fingered scum!"
Pava sat up at this, raising his eyebrows. "I prithou pardon me," he said. "Of course I would not tell. On any road I made sure I slept in the room too so no one could say ..."
"Will you get up?" Vadya hissed at him, seizing the beautiful bird-embroidered silk of Pava's shoulder and hauling him to his feet. Pava swayed and stood, running his fingers through his longish fair hair. He made a deprecating grimace, attempting to look into the brown eyes of the big-shouldered Commander in front of him. Vadya's hair was dusty, his eyes glowered past dirt-lines on his face. There was blood on his kerchief where it hung out of his sleeve.
"Is ... is Tashka alright?" Pava asked anxiously.
"I am sure he will live!" Vadya snarled. "That pretty-eyed lying ... thing! Put up your fists."
"Vadya, come come," Pava said with an idle grin. "Ar't surely not going to beat me for faults as if I were a common trooper in Sixth H'las."
"It is you I can give thanks to for my betrothed, puh," Vadya spat neatly into the flowers, "in my troop. Come on, skinny-shanks."
"Really," Pava said in an annoyed tone of voice, casting a quick look down at his calves (which he was proud of). "It is hardly my making that he has been betrothed to you or that he is how he is. What is it ar't so cross about? There are worse people mights't have been asked to take, was't a mad fool to get into Maive's bed and lucky the el Statens did not rush to pin you for it. Loves't Tashka well, is it not?"
"What in Hell are you talking of?" Vadya shouted. "He is my junior officer! Hell and the Angels of Hell, what kind of commanding officer do you think I .... el Jien, you are a butterfly-wits! He is no woman, that the sworn Lord of a region could consider as a Lady wife. You of all people should understand, you were betrothed to him yourself! How did you like it?"
A look of absolute disdain crossed Pava's face. "Tashka was my baby Lieutenant," he said in an unusually cold voice, his hand slipping negligently to the gloves in his belt. "There was no question that I could ever have walked the little lamb to the altar. I knew him as a scrawny kid and he slept years in my tent on the summer manoeuvres, his honour mine to give the glove for. Even my parents came to understand that there would be no securing the succession with someone whose honour was under my eye even more than is my sister's. But although he is your junior, darling Vadya, he was not a baby under your command. Does't not love him in the way I do."
"And how do you think I love him?!" Vadya cried. "I am no man-lover and look at him! Anyone who marries him will have a guard-house to an home, he might embroider me a sword-belt but he is more likely to throw 's glove in my face if I ask for it! That creature. What kind of Lady wife would he make? I can just picture him giving me ten days on station for coming in the house with muddy boots, oh yes!" Pava laughed but Vadya threw such a savage look at him, strung with angry tears, that he bit the laugh back in his throat. He looked into Vadya's dusty angry brown face with his green eyes puzzled. "Bloody Angel of Baya!" Vadya snarled tearfully. "I would have done my best by any pleasant woman, were she stupid or ugly, and I am to be thrown into the arms of that creature, my own junior officer! Sweet Hell, he has even defended my honour,
mine
, on Lieutenant-Sir Vaian's body!"
"Come Vadya," Pava interrupted, trying to put a hand on Vadya's arm but Vadya shook it off. "What is all this nonsense? Woulds't fight with any silly woman who tried to tell you not wear your sweet old dirty boots in your own house ..."
"Well but most Ladies care a little about ... about the house, or sewing," Vadya put his big hands up and covered his dusty brown face. "They wear a dress, not the uniform of their husband's troop!"