Author's foreword:
I wrote the first part of "Revenge" in January 2023 as my first story ever. Since then, I've delved into other genres, other types of stories, but "Revenge" was the first and I continued writing further episodes.
In December 2023, I published the first episodes on Lit and got a lot of feedback. Reads, votes, some comments, and direct messages. While I was blown away by the way, my work was received, it also became clear what had bothered me about it: "Revenge" was not so much of a story, it was a kind of report - the husk of a story. When you are told, some things become obvious - if you have to figure them out alone, it may take a very long time to understand.
After long exchanges with Djmac1031, I decided to follow his suggestion and rework "Revenge" from scratch. The result is not a new story, but perhaps it could be called "Revenge Remastered." The main content remains the same, but I added a lot of detail to the stories of the characters and background information to transform the old report to a thrilling story. Whether I succeeded, is up to you to decide. I'm looking forward to your feedback.
To provide a clear difference between the old and the new stories, then new version is called "Vindicta", adopting the Latin word for "Revenge". After catching up with the already released "Revenge" parts one to three, I'll continue to rework the others in part never released ones.
@Djmac1031: My deepest thanks for the helpful suggestions and the time you took to edit the reworked stories. Check out Djmac1031's work on Lit, if you like mine, you'll love his!
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Bonding
February 2023 / Eugene, Oregon, an abandoned factory cellar
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"How dare you?" she exclaimed.
"Well, my parents were killed twenty-four years ago, and I was looking for the most worthy prey deserving my wrath. Guess what: that's you!" I replied.
"I will..." she started.
"...not do anything." I completed her sentence, "You have none of your powers here, and you won't remember anything after returning to your domain."
"Anyway. I've used the best part of my life until now to get you here, now I have to make sure, that I can get you back here on easier terms anytime I want."
"What?" she asked, irritated.
"Enough chit-chat," I said, stepping towards her, and removing some leather utensils from my belt. Throwing her to the ground and pulling her hands to her back, I whipped the wrist straps above her hands and connected the two. I did the same with the ankle straps and her feet.
"I will rip the soul from your body, you worthless piece of shit!" she screamed, wriggling in her bonds.
"Yeah sure." I played unimpressed, pulling a large ball gag out of the box behind me. She was in no position to prevent me from gagging her.
I took a moment to reflect on my situation: "I did it," I thought. "Here she is, and now I'm going to make sure I can control her. Calm down, Jack." Taking a deep breath and exhaling consciously slow, I focussed. "No mistakes! You know what happened to father."
"Two rings to enslave her," I said, pulling out two golden rings covered in runes. "These are the pinnacle of my work. Kept near to your body, they will allow me to call you here upon my will."
Annoyed, she squinted at the runes, a questioning expression on her face.
"The cloaking spell layered over the binding spell is pure genius," I thought. "The cloak will make sure nobody will understand the true purpose of the rings - so she's not going to become suspicious when she's back in hell."
"It took me a while to find a solution for the near-to-your-body requirement, but I've come up with a perfect idea: I'll be piercing them to your nipples."
Her eyes widened in terror. She managed a muffled "Noooooo" through the gag.
"No worries. I have devised a plan, how we can manage professional handiwork despite the rings being nearly twice as thick as the usual nipple-piercing."
Grabbing her red mane, I pulled her over to the gynecologic chair in the corner of the room.
"Let's lose the unneeded clothes." Pulling down her g-string, I exposed her nicely shaven vagina; then went the bra. I let her keep the thigh-high boots and the elbow gloves, though. Nothing is more appealing than an otherwise completely naked woman with these still on. I couldn't help a warm tingling in my groin. After all, she was simply perfect. I could imagine men killing each other for her - and women, too. Shaking my head, I concentrated on the task at hand.
Seating her on the chair, I opened the wrist straps, pulling her arms to the lower sides of the chair's back and reconnecting them behind it again. I opened the ankle straps and put her feet on the leg-rests, using velcros to pin them in place.
Tipping the chair to the back, I put her in a near-lying position with her feet in the air and her legs wide apart. I finished by taking her arms and arcing them under her to put them at a nearly 90-degree angle to her back. I fixed them with a rope and appraised my handiwork: her breasts were pointing upwards in a most beautiful way, her wide-spread legs fully exposed her vagina and allowed her enthralling scent to fill the room.
To my annoyance, my dick twitched. I tried to clear my head by walking around a bit.
Returning to the chair, I said, "Now to the bad news. As the rings are thicker than usual, the piercing needle needs to be a lot thicker, too. This might sting a bit. --- Just kidding, to be honest: this will hurt like hell."
"As we can't have you wriggle around all the time, I had to think of a way to divert your attention from my piercing. We will be making some huge holes and there's not so much flesh to push through."
"This should help a bit." Putting two ropes above and below her breasts and tying them together behind her backrest to pin her upper body to the point.
"To provide enough distraction, I needed this special chair. You might have wondered why your legs are spread wide apart, though I'm going to pierce your nipples..."
"Did you know that electricity is conducted best by liquids?" I presented a metal wand, consisting of ten intersecting metal balls with roughly an inch and a half of diameter. In total, it was 10 inches long. An electric cable was hanging from the end of the piece.
Lubing the ball-dildo heavily, I grinned at her irritated expression, taking my thumb and pointing finger to spread her already exposed butt-cheeks even more, I put the first ball of the dildo softly against her sphincter. Then I commanded: "Brace yourself!"
I pushed the full 10 inches of the dildo in one fluent movement up her ass. She screamed into the ball gag, eyes wide open, while the ten balls went into her, ball by ball, stretching her ring to the limit with a funny flopping noise. Seeing this from so close, I felt an erection building up. "Damn, this is gorgeous," I thought.
"Good. So much for part one. Now to part two." Producing a second metal object, sized and shaped similar to a lemon. Having lubed this one as well, I shoved that piece into her exposed pussy without further explanation. The cold metal sure wasn't feeling too good up there, but this time she didn't give any discomfort away.
