Note: With many thanks to Dazmine for excellent editing. Any flubs and faults that remain are my own. And all feedback is welcome.
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It all started with a woman in a bar.
The bar was a dive of a place. The service was slow and sloppy, and every bit of furniture had seen better days. I was only in there because I was new to town, I had a thirst, and this was the first place I'd passed.
Still, it was kind of fitting. The down-at-heel bar matched my mood because my life had been turned upside down in the previous couple of months. I'd lost my job, my girlfriend and my house one after another in quick succession. Having failed to find work swiftly, I'd moved to a cheaper town and rented a tiny, dingy flat. I had no friends to call on, a near-empty bank account and dwindling hope.
So I sat at the bar and ordered a beer, mentally subtracting it from the small stock of beers that I could afford. And I thought it was going to be just another empty evening that would fade from memory because it contained exactly nothing different from all the other empty evenings. A sad contemplation of everything that had gone wrong, a good deal of scrolling through the internet on my phone and then a hangover the next day.
But then she walked in.
I realise that makes her entrance sound overly dramatic. There was no fanfare, no blinding light, no sense at that moment that this woman was important. But hindsight means I can't see that moment any other way.
She was a young woman, probably in her late twenties, wearing a figure-hugging black dress. And she had something about her. Apart from anything else, she was very much my type: flowing red hair, big boobs and curvy hips.
But I knew I didn't stand a chance with her in the state I was in, so I went back to nursing my beer and my sorrows. And believe me, I'm not the type of guy that has women flocking to him. I don't really stand out from the crowd. Sometimes I don't even need the crowd.
So it was a huge surprise when, having ordered a drink, she approached and asked if she might join me.
"Of course. If you'd like to. I mean, I think you might like to because you asked. But... um," I said. Cue inward cringes as my brain played those words back to me. But she didn't seem to mind. She took the stool next to mine at the bar and smiled at me.
Her smile was captivating. And her eyes were entrancing -- a deep tawny colour. So entrancing that I almost failed to enjoy the sight of her cleavage in front of me. Almost. The combination of that black dress and the pale skin of her breasts, with ringlets of strawberry hair framing them, was really something. I tried to suppress the horny thoughts that were already popping up in my head.
"Thank you," she said. "I'm Mina."
"I'm Jonathan," I replied. "It's nice to meet you. To tell the truth, it's nice to meet anyone right now."
And that started the outpouring of my recent history. Evidently I'd been keeping things bottled up. Remarkably, Mina just listened—instead of making her excuses and hurrying away to find someone less depressing to talk to.
I tried not to sound too bitter about what had happened, even if the truth was that once the money stopped rolling in, my girlfriend couldn't move on fast enough.
"You've had a rough time," she said. "It happens to us all, but it hits you hard when you're in the middle of it. Thing can change, though." She smiled again, and a thrill raced through me. Was fate finally dealingl me a good hand?
We spent a while talking, getting to know each other. I suggested ordering shots; Mina demurred, saying: "I don't usually drink...whisky." So we had another round of beers. The time flew past. There were none of those awkward silences that can happen when strangers meeting for the first time suddenly run out of conversation.
I almost thought I was dreaming when Mina asked me to walk her home at about ten o'clock. We strolled through the streets and -- amazingly -- I found her hand in mine. It felt good. It felt really good.
And so, twenty minutes later, I found myself standing in the porch outside her house as Mina looked in her bag for her keys.
"Well, Mina, I've had a really great evening," I said. "Thank you so much for listening to my rambling. I hope I didn't impose on you too much. I do have a tendency to go on and--"
She put a finger to my lips, stopping what was about to become another gabble of words filling what seemed like an awkward moment.
Mina leant towards me, her lips slightly parted, her eyes shining, her red hair catching the moonlight. My heart pounded in my chest and I tilted my head to one side as the distance closed between us.
And then she bit me, and the world went dark.
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Clouds chase across a suddenly storm-whipped sky, obscuring the moon. I feel a savage tearing and burning sensation in my neck. There is something in my blood now, changing it. Pouring into me an unquenchable hunger that I cannot satisfy. I will never feel fulfilled again.
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"Wake up, Jonathan."
The words came to me from far, far away, sliding through a spinning tunnel to reach my brain. My head was pounding, my mouth dry and foul-tasting. I could feel air moving over my skin. Was I naked? Had I fallen and hit my head?
"Wake up."
My arms and legs jerked involuntarily as my body entered panic mode, flooding me with adrenaline. Uselessly, because my arms and legs were bound.
"Open your eyes."
No. That was something I didn't want to do. But the voice was compelling and seductive. It was Mina's voice.
I felt my eyelids twitch, then open. The world was dark and blurry. Slowly, my surroundings swam into focus, along with Mina, looking down at me. She was smiling still. I was no longer smiling. And yes, I was naked.
Her smile showed off her teeth: perfectly white and unusually pointed. I had a momentary vision of her incisors suddenly growing out of her gums, becoming needles dripping with glistening liquid.
"Shh. You don't see me like that," she said. And once again she was the Mina I'd met in the bar: the curvy girl who had listened to my troubles and held my hand. She leant forward further and the curve of her tits came into view, hanging forward over my face and chest.
I felt another kind of twitch. Some part of my brain tried to tell me that this was no time to be thinking of that kind of thing. But I was not in control. I managed to lift my head to look down at my body. I was strapped to a trolley of some kind.
And then I felt Mina's hand on my cock. Slowly, she began to stroke me.
"Now that I have your attention, there are some things I need to tell you," she said.