+++++ Redeemers of the Fallen +++++
The following is my entry for the 2019 Halloween Story Contest. This is of course
the sequel to the First Place winner from the 2016 contest
, Sisters of the Fallen
. While not strictly necessary to enjoy this new tale, I highly encourage you to read
"Sisters"
first so the personalities, histories, and motivations of the principal characters can be placed in their proper context. While whenever possible I try to recap some of the events from the prequel I also want to avoid bogging down the narrative with clumsy exposition. I realize that recommending you read a short novel in preparation for reading another short novel is asking quite a lot. But after all it did win the whole damn contest last time so maybe it's sorta good :) This story is a bit more action-packed and not quite as moody or atmospheric as its prequel so I can't guarantee if you loved
"Sisters"
that you'll automatically feel the same about its sequel. But I've been working hard these last several months trying to write a proper sequel to
"Sisters"
and would love to know whether you think I've succeeded in following up one of my most popular stories on this website. Please send me your feedback, leave a comment, and also remember to vote the full five stars if you liked my story.
DISCLAIMER: This story contains material that some readers might consider too dark or disturbing. It is in essence a horror/adventure tale with several erotic sequences. The horror elements include vampirism, references to the occult, gore, body horror, extreme violence, genital mutilation, torture, and associated sexual imagery. The sexual elements include heterosexual, homosexual, and transexual couplings (F/M, M/M, F/F, T/F), oral sex, anal sex, group sex, fisting, male/female ejaculation, interracial sex, nonconsent/reluctant sex, nonhuman (demonic) sex, and more. This story also features a consensual and loving incestuous relationship between the two main characters. If you are offended by any of those topics, I recommend you skip this one and find another tale more to your liking instead.
+++++ Chapter I: Taming the Beast +++++
Setting: a remote desert in the kingdom of Jordan, 2016 A.D.
More quiet than the wind whispering over the desert tides, the Beast stalked its hunted prey. Scorching and unforgiving beneath the unrelenting sun of daytime, the shifting sands of these ancient dunes turned silent and mysterious once night fell. A waxing gibbous moon, only a few nights away from bursting full with light, shone brightly from above with no artificial illumination within a hundred miles to dull its strange lunar power. The lizards and venomous snakes of day had since been coopted by the more craven predators of evening. The usual spiders, scorpions, and wild dogs hunted along these night sands along with an infernal presence that lent a disquieting sense of wrongness to this natural desert habitat.
A desert warrior kicked his camel in the belly to urge the recalcitrant beast to more urgent speed. He wore long, clean robes of purest white that swayed around his sand-crusted boots as he rode the reluctant ungulate hard on the heels of his target. He carried a pathetic gun and an ineffective sword at his sides with the proud bearing of a doomed man. The bearded bedouin mistakenly thought himself the hunter tonight but he would discover tragically too late that he was the Beast's intended quarry for this evening. The Beast revealed her presence to the holy warrior from a distance before concealing herself and masking her scent. She led the brave but foolhardy warrior on a futile chase across miles of desert all while she slyly doubled back around and flanked him from the south.
The hardened warrior wore his black beard and hair long and unkempt to conceal handsome, almost feminine features that proved a constant and unwelcome distraction before he converted and became a religious man. His face and skin were tanned dark brown after years spent beneath a harsh desert sun surviving in sparse, unforgiving conditions. Despite the wear and tear of the arduous life he'd chosen, the warrior's eyes were so dark and beautiful and his facial structure so delicate he sometimes appeared to be wearing the makeup of a painted woman.
The holy man belonged to an ancient religious order that with the blessing of several generations of Jordanian monarchy had claimed this desert as their home for centuries upon centuries. The sect spent all their hours working and praying day after scorching day in one of the most inhospitable environments known to mankind, fervent in their belief that suffering and hardship would lead to ultimate salvation. This warrior had been sent by his mullah to investigate dread rumors of a fell beast that stalked the sands of their ancestral homeland during the night.
Recently, livestock owned by peasants living in the impoverished villages nearby had been slaughtered indiscriminately but strangely they were never consumed. Not even the many scavengers of the desert dared to pick at the dessicated corpses of these shredded goats and sheep. The strewn-apart bodies left behind deep, claw-like gashes and bite marks that originated from some creature unknown. Innocents had disappeared from their homes without a trace as well and anyone caught alone in the desert after dark was never seen again. Despite his strict religious beliefs, Abdalrahman al-Saqit was not a superstitious man. Normally he would have dismissed these stories as the baseless fears of a poor, primitive people but this case aroused his suspicion for reasons he couldn't quite express to the other peers in his sect.
Abdalrahman hopped gingerly off his camel and tucked the pleats of his robe back while he spent a moment of rest. He gulped a long drink of water from the bladder hanging at the pommel of his beast of burden's saddle before replacing the stopper. While he drank, al-Saqit's sharp eyes scanned across the endless hills of sand with sight aided by the blessed moonlight.
Abdalrahman was certain he saw something moving out there earlier, prowling obliviously amongst the still dunes. The shape he glimpsed hiding in the shadows was dark and monstrous yet still vaguely human in appearance. Al-Saqit was renowned amongst his order for being able to track a hare across miles of desert but whatever this thing was, it had thrown Abdalrahman off its trail.
When he heard a noise from behind, Al-Saqit spun around quick as a desert cat and lifted his aged AK-47 from his hip with his finger the merest twitch away from depressing the trigger. The sighing voice he heard was little more than a whisper on the wind but it almost sounded like a woman plaintively calling his name. But when he turned and aimed his weapon, Abdalrahman found nothing there. No sound except the pounding of his heart against his chest. Despite the day's lingering, oppressive heat which still refused to surrender to the relief of night's chill, Abdalrahman shivered.