I wrote part 1 of this story for myself and posted it just for the hell of it. I didn't expect so many people to like it, especially since there's no sex in it. There's been a high demand for part 2 and some people even left insulting comments because I haven't posted the next part fast enough to suit them.
Writing is work. It doesn't always just flow. It takes time and effort, especially since I want it to be good. I also have no one I trust to proofread my work, so the writing and editing process is time consuming and tedious. Also, I have a life and writing doesn't always fit neatly in it so there may be long periods of time when I don't have the opportunity to bang away.
For the record, I really like this story. The idea of a smoking hot girl, a fat old hermit, and a demonic evil infected living in this zombie world I created is exciting and interesting to me. It'll be a while before I work on part 3 so be patient.
For now, here's part 2.
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Faith in the Apocalypse
Part 2
by st0rmbringer
-- Faith --
Faith waited in the parked vehicle with her little brother and sister. They watched the old man inspect the gate, cursing under his breath.
She turned her gaze to the cabin, expecting to see movement inside, but it was dark and silent. Ominous in the deepening gloom.
"Stay in the car," said the old man. "I'll let you know when it's safe to come out."
She refused to think of him as "Scorn," as he'd first introduced himself to her earlier that day. It didn't seem right... didn't fit.
She watched him close the gate and get back in the cargo van. He edged it in until its nose was tight against the gate doors, effectively sealing them shut since they could only open inwards.
He fed shells into his shotgun as he walked towards the cabin. He pumped the handle, chambering one, and fed one last shell into the magazine tube.
Faith turned to the kids.
"Stay in the car," she said.
She grabbed her new Benneli pump action shotgun and followed behind the old man as he carefully made to enter the small wooden cabin with the butt of the weapon tucked into his shoulder.
He turned to her with a frustrated expression on his worn, white bearded face.
"I said stay in the car, goddammit!" he growled.
Faith ignored him and edged close, pointing the weapon's muzzle away from the old man but still towards the house.
"I know what you said," she replied stubbornly.
He stared down at her for several seconds, looming over her like a giant, but she didn't budge. She stared right back at him fearlessly.
With an irritated grunt, the old man turned back to the house.
"Fine. Follow close."
He paused a beat, glancing down at her.
"And don't fuckin' shoot me," he whispered hoarsely.
He paused at the threshold... waiting, listening, sniffing the air.
The door was smashed in. It rested crookedly on twisted hinges. The doorknob, shards of wood, and bits of the lock mechanism lay scattered on the worn wooden floor.
Faith waited behind him. She couldn't see beyond his massive broad bulk. He completely filled the doorway.
They could hear the refrigerator's steady electric hum and faint groans and clicks as the small house shifted in its foundations, the way most houses did.
There was no movement. No out-of-the-normal sounds came from the inside, but the reek of a vile unclean human body and the sickly-sweet stench of rotting meat lingered in the air... the man in the gray suit. It was his stink.
Faith remembered that smell clearly from her nightmare run through the forest with the monster keeping pace behind her, whining and reaching out to her with jagged-nailed, clawlike hands.
She shuddered and waited behind the old man, glancing around the glade.
"Keep an ear out," the old man whispered to her over his shoulder. "If the insects stop singin' that fucker's around."
The crickets chirped. Nothing but normal forest sounds.
But that didn't mean there wasn't anything in the house.
The sun was nearly down, and the house was as dark as a pit.
Faith heard a faint click, then a bright light speared into the house like a lance... a nice new flashlight from the gun store.
The old man leaned forward and aimed the bright beam into every nook and corner, sweeping it slowly back and forth, pausing here and there.
The front living space was a disaster.
The fiend in the gray suit, the Ravager, had rampaged through the living room, ripping the two recliners into shreds and smashing the low coffee table into wooden shards.
The doors to the bedroom and bathroom were still shut and the kitchen was untouched. From the look of it, the monster hadn't been there long enough to cause more damage.
"Stay here," the old man grunted. "Don't follow me. You'll just get in the way."
Faith stayed put and watched as he stepped warily into the house. He held the flashlight in his left hand which also held the weapon's forestock. His hands were big enough that he was able to hold both comfortably at the same time.
Back and forth, the light swept, illuminating every corner. Wherever the weapon's muzzle went, that's where his eyes were.
Eyes... muzzle.
The old man walked carefully around the house, grunting angrily at the ruined furniture. There were no infected or undead anywhere.
Faith leaned in, looked around the edge of the doorway at the wall and flipped the light switch.
The overhead lights came on, flooding the cabin with soft artificial light.
The old man flinched in surprise, turned to glare at her for a beat, flipped off the flashlight and lowered the muzzle of his weapon. He looked around his destroyed living room, his face flushed with anger.
Faith heard him mutter, "Motherfucker!" under his breath.
The house was empty.
Except for the creature's vile stench, its fading aura of evil, and the broken furniture, the house was the same as when they left it earlier that day.
"Alright, let's unload," the old man said tersely, satisfied there was no danger.
He slung the shotgun and Faith stopped him as he made to brush past her.
"Wait," she said, stepping in front of him.
"What's your name? I know you introduced yourself this morning when we first met, but I don't remember it."
He stared at her for a moment then hesitantly thrust out his hand, unsure if it was the right thing to do when introducing himself to a young woman.