Halloween Story Contest 2022
Story
This story is a dark mystery, a horror story full of evil acts, and a woman's journey to regain memories of her life while trying to remember what happened on October 31
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, ten years earlier. Thanks to servant111 for reading it and giving me some valuable advice. Another lesson added to my 'learning to write' education.
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I awaken.
I'm lying on a reclined bed with guard rails, in a one-room cabin I've been in several times before.
Dust particles dance in the light of an oil lamp on an old desk as drafty air currents sweep through the cracks in the old wood walls. I roll over and stand up, wearing only an ankle-length hospital gown.
I do not feel hot or cold.
The old wooden floorboards creak as my bare feet slowly move across to the only door in the room. A small dusty chalkboard is hanging on the wall by the doorway, displaying strange chalked lines. Instinctively I pick up a piece of chalk and add one more line.
Upon completion, I look at the peculiar heiroglyphic lines written on the chalkboard:
///// /////
Ten lines! What does that mean? Is that how many times I've woken up here?
Where is here?
I look around the room. A picture of a man in a suit and a woman in a wedding dress sits on a desk.
Looking at myself in a mirror on the wall, I saw I was the woman in the wedding picture.
But who am I?
As I picked up the picture frame, memories of white sand, warm breezes, and palm trees raced through my mind. I remember that the man in the picture made love to me on a towel lying on hot white sand.
Were we on our honeymoon?
What is his name, Larry, Lenny?
My name is, arggh, damn it, I can't remember my name.
Another memory surfaces, a photo of a boy, a girl, and the man. Were they my children?
In a daze, I walk around the room. I pick up a doll from a small table and hold it. An image of a little girl sitting on my lap while I brush her hair startles me, and I drop the doll.
I look down and can't see it on the floor. The dark gray floor seems to swirl around my feet and vanish from sight.
I look up, and the doll is back on the table. Next to it is a baseball, and I pick it up. I see the man playing catch with the young boy. What are their names?
Louis? Lois? Lois Lane?
LANE!
My husband's name is Lane. Somehow, remembering his name seems essential, but what are the children's names?
Am I dreaming, or am I in hell? What brought me here?
I creep to the door and push it open. I see a gray trail with brick walls on both sides. As I step onto the path, I hear a soft noise that sounds like Whoosh, clink, clunk. The sound repeats over and over.
Looking up, I can see light overhead but not the source, hiding behind swirling gray clouds.
As I moved forward, the gray trail changed to a green carpet. The walls on both sides felt smooth and were also green. A chair sat by a door, with a candy-filled bowl on the seat.
I remember it was Halloween, and this was my living room.
A masked man with evil red eyes grabbed me, and I screamed. He tied my hands behind my back and pushed me to my knees.
Whoosh, clink, clunk, and now a new sound; children yelled, "Trick-or-treat."
A second masked man with dead black eyes appeared before me, startling me. He ripped open the top of my gown, exposing my breasts.
"Tell me what I want to know."
"I don't understand; what do you want?"
A woman's hatpin appeared in his hand. He jabbed the pin through my left nipple and smiled.
I was so stunned I couldn't open my mouth to scream.
"Give me the numbers."
"Ow, what numbers do you want?"
He plunged the needle into my right breast.
"Tell me what I want to know."
I screamed, "I don't know, please stop; what do you want to know?"
He repeated the torture over and over with a deranged laugh, repeating his two demands.
Every puncture of my breasts made me scream uncontrollably, and tiny streams of blood dropped from my breasts to the carpet floor.
"Give me the numbers."
I closed my eyes, sobbing, and numbers began appearing in my mind. I screamed them out at him.
"8 1 6 5 4 2." These were the numbers we punched on the LED pad to open our safe.
He plunged the needle through my other nipple before disappearing into the wall.
"Why, owwww. Why are you doing this to me? I'll tell you anything you want to know."
The red-eyed monster was drooling, and his breath smelled like a sewer.
"Of course, you will. As many times as we want you to. Now shut your ugly mouth."
A woman in black was at the door handing out candy. When she turned toward me, her eyes were yellow and hypnotic and she paralyzed me with a glare.
I closed my eyes, hoping I could wake up from this bad dream.
Whoosh, clink, clunk. "Trick-or-treat."
A strange voice spoke, "Open your eyes."
I was alone and no longer tied up when I opened my eyes. I was back on the path, and my gown was undamaged.
The walls, ceiling, and floor were now white metal and looked strangely familiar.
I had to crouch down as I walked. The floor had ridges parallel to the path ahead of me. I could feel the floor vibrating beneath me. I felt the sensation of forward motion and movements to the left and right.
The metal floor bounced up and down every four or five steps, knocking me off my feet.
Whoosh, clink, clunk. "Trick-or-treat."
Time passed. It felt like hours before the motion stopped, and hands pulled me forward into a dark void.