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Countess Crimson The Vampnatrix 01

Countess Crimson The Vampnatrix 01

by dicninja
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The vampire goddess Countess Crimson Von Payne has awakened after 1000 years with one thing on her mind: To dominate, torture, humiliate and enslave all men. Can vampire hunter Jeff Knight and his team stop her or will they join her long list of slave drones?

Sheriff Richard Dangles has never seen a crime scene like this one before. He can't believe his eyes. Two men dead in a downtown apartment, except the way they died has Sheriff Dangles and his team completely sickened. They have seen sex crimes before but this was on a different level.

The 2 deceased men were Frank Jones and Jim Lobbs. Frank was in the corner laying dead with his dick in his hand. The doctor believed it was from a heart attack. Jim was in the bathtub, from the looks of it he drowned but not in water, in his own cum! Sheriff Dangles and his team are stumped on what happened. No signs of a break in, no signs of a struggle, no nothing. Just a lot of blood in the kitchen but the only thing both of these guys have in common are two bite marks on their penises.

"I have a feeling they were doing some kind of drug you shoot into your dick, it sounds weird but this is the world we live in now, that is the only explanation I have for the bite marks on their dicks." Says Sheriff Dangles.

"That isn't it at all Sheriff!"

Sheriff Dangles and his whole team turn around and see the man who just said this.

"Who the fuck are you" Ask Sheriff Dangles.

"The name is Jeff Knight and these 2 men behind me are my team. We are vampire hunters. What we have here are the results of one Countess Crimson Von Payne. The most sadistic diabolical vampire you will ever meet."

"Vampires?" Ask Sheriff Dangles. "Sorry bud but this is a crime scene so I have to ask you and your ghostbusters to leave, this isn't a fantasy world"

"Actually a fantasy is what got these two killed in the first place. They thought they were coming home for a night of hot sex with a tall sexy gothic girl they met at the bar. If you look in the corner you will see the matchbook from the bar she owns that they were at last night, I'm sure you would had noticed that. We have been scooping that place out as her recruitment center so to speak. That is where she finds her victims or possible slaves."

"Slaves? like in a sex trade kind of thing" ask Sheriff Dangles.

"No, like in a slave to her for all eternity, her dog, her drone, her walking zombie. She is building an army, she won't stop until she enslaves every man on earth. There are many men on this earth right now who are already under her control. We suspect the men who work at the bar are under her control and tip her off whenever they see a man who would make a good slave. They all compete to be her top pet. Their soul purpose in life is to be her favorite pet, to get a pat on the head and to be called a good boy."

Sheriff Dangles looks on with hesitation. "Ok then, if she makes men into her mindless slave drone why are these men dead and according to the landlord 3 men live here as there are 3 rooms, where is the other one at? I need him for questioning. Sheriff Dangles ask.

"Because they didn't submit and he did that's why. She loves hearing men scream out the words "I SUBMIT". You see Sheriff first she weakens you. She can do this by causing you to get an erection. Once she makes you hard you feel all your energy, all you willpower leave your body. You won't be able to stand. The weaker you get the more powerful she becomes. After that she ask you if you submit. She will only ask you that once. If you say yes then she will become her slave, if you say no, well as you can see you know what happens."

Jeff Knight then says the most horrifying detail of her ritual. "After you make your choice she may torture you if she sees fit. When she is done she will bite you...in your dick. After that your balls fills up immediately. Your dick gets so hard it feels like you haven't came in over a year. It hurts as its feels like it will explode. You will be on your knees begging to cum. She now controls your dick, it is hers, you won't be able to cum until she allows it. You could jerk off all day and not spill a drop until she says so. Now if you submitted she will allow it but once you cum it's over. Your mind erased, you will be lifeless. Almost like you are sedated."

"And if you didn't submit" Ask Sheriff Dangles

"Well there are 2 examples of that in this room Sheriff. I think I can map out what happened last night."

24 hours earlier

Frank Jones and Jim Lobbs were working their shift at their warehouse job. Normal day of lifting and pushing heavy objects around which for the 2 of them was no problem as both were big strong men. Both were standout football players in high school and ladies men. Frank stood 6'3 and had a muscular burley build, bald with a beard and tattoos. Jim was 6'2 and more ripped with a crew cut and a goatee. They considered themselves alpha men and they would joke with each other about the sissy looking emo guys they occupied that goth bar down the street.

"Man I heard from someone that there was this dude on a leash in there, what a sorry excuse for man" Says Frank.

"No bullshit, every time I drive by I see a bunch of guys that scream beta. Even the guys that work there take orders from this tall gothic looking bitch. She is hot but there is no way I would take orders from a woman, I would rather die." Says Jim in a disgusted manner

"Hey you know what we should do tonight? We should go there and put all those beta bitches to shame by picking up 2 gothic bitches and taking them back to our place. Imagine after years of being bullied by guys like us they finally feel safe and we come in and once again take all the girls." Says Frank with extreme confidence in his voice.

Jim looks at him with a big smile on his face. "Fuck to the yeah, this should be easy."

Frank and Jim walk in the gothic bar later that night like they own the place. Both of them walk around the bar scooping out all the women like they are at a buffet bar. They go up to the bar and lean up against it. They snap their fingers at the bartender and order a Budlight. The bartender can tell by their vibe that these 2 are exactly what Countess Crimson Von Payne would want. Big strong men, these 2 would make great slaves. He hurries and calls Countess Crimson on the phone, she is in her office on the top floor. She answers and says she will be down in a minute. The bartender hangs up with the hope he did good and will receive a pat on the head.

Frank and Jim are standing there looking and laughing at the men there when both see her. Coming down the steps was a woman that took both their breath away. Standing 6ft tall, long black hair, big thick full E size breast, long toned legs and an tight firm round ass. She had on a short black leather dress that barely covered her ass and showed plenty of cleavage. She walks up to the bar, walks right in between Jim and Frank and orders a beer. The bartender gives her one right away. As she is getting her beer Jim and Frank are looking at each other as her skirt is halfway up her tight toned ass.

She turns around and starts conversing with both Jim and Frank.

"You boys enjoying my bar"

"Well yes it is a nice place, It's our first time in here and I'm really enjoying it now." Says Jim

"Well let me introduce myself, my name is Crimson Von Payne and I'm the owner of this bar. Everybody here calls me Countess, you may as well"

"Well normally I don't take orders from women but I will let this slide for now sweetie" Says Frank with an arrogant tone in his voice.

Countess Crimson Von Payne lets out a playful giggle and playfully hits his shoulder. "You 2 are bad! I may have to keep an eye on you guys to make sure you behave."

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Jim and Frank look at each other like this is going to be an easy night. Jim then lays on his charm. "Well only if we can keep an eye on you, but then again that may cause us to misbehave!"

Countess Crimson Von Payne lets out a big laugh. Jim and Frank think she is laughing at their jokes but in reality she is laughing at how easy this is going to be. After a few more drinks, giggles and playful flirting Countess decides to seal the deal.

"I've never seen guys like you two in here before, most guys in here are kind of wimpy, I hate to say it because they are my costumers but it's true. Look it's getting pretty late guys, I live alone in my apartment but I don't feel like going there, is it possible to go back to one of your places to chill for a little bit?"

Jim and Frank look at each other like they struck gold.

"Sure thing sweetie, we can all go back to my place, it's not far from here. Lets go! Frank says with extreme excitement in his voice.

Frank, Jim and Countess Crimson arrive to Frank's apartment. It's your typical wanna-be alpha man apartment. Old football trophies, beer bottles, old mis matched furniture, unmade bed, and just a bad smell in the air.

Countess Crimson walks thru the door first followed by Jim and Frank and as soon as Frank shuts it locks on it's own. Frank looks surprised.

"OK YOU TWO LOSERS, GET ON YOUR KNEES AND START WORSHIPPING ME RIGHT FUCKING NOW!" Countess Crimson says in a loud demanding stern voice.

"Say what bitch?" Ask Frank

Sweetie if anyone is getting on their knees it will be you, why do you think we brought you here, we aren't into freaky shit, that's for those betas at your bar, we are alpha men. Now which one of us do you want to fuck first?" Says Jim.

"Well since you put that way I have to say I choose both of you at the same time, yes both of you, I will fuck both of you...up that is." Countess Crimson says with a big evil grin.

Countess Crimson then precedes to remove her little black leather dress to reveal a one piece black fishnet stocking suit. Her tits overflowing between the fishnets, the thigh part cut high going up her tight ass and showing plenty of her tight toned muscular legs.

Jim and Frank can feel all their energy escape their bodies. They both get weaker and weaker. Both stumble around the apartment like 2 drunk men. They can barely stand. Both of them drop to their knees in front of her.

"What did you give us, you must had slide something in your drink." says Frank as he is on his knees weakened.

"No loser, I just gave you a hard-on. Since you 2 are both on your knees right now I have one question for you. I will only ask this once and it's highly suggested you say yes but I will not force you."

Countess Crimson stands in front of Jim and Frank and ask:

"DO YOU SUBMIT TO ME?"

Frank and Jim look at each other with a perplexed face as they are laying on the floor.

"What the fuck drugs are you on? Get the fuck out of our apartment and let us get these drugs out of our system you crazy bitch. Says Jim.

"Ok we have your answer how about you loser number 2" Ask Countess Crimson.

Frank looks up at her. "I don't know what kind of fucked up shit you gave us, it's seems like a mix of viagra and roofies. No matter what it is I'm too fucked up to play your little game so get the fuck out of here"

"I guess I have my answers, oh well now my fun begins." Countess Crimson says as she walks over to Jim and rips his clothes off.

Countess Crimson picks Jim naked body up by the throat with one hand. Holding his neck she kicks his balls over and over again. Jim screams out in agony as Countess Crimson destroys his balls with her black boot. After she is done kicking his balls she drags him by the neck and drops him on the table. Jim lays motionless on the table as he is drained of energy and in a great amount of pain.

Countess Crimson then walks over to Frank, rips his clothes off and takes time to laugh at his tiny dick. This time she picks him up by the back of the neck, holds him up and starts kicking him in the balls from behind. Over and over again he feels the tip of her boot make contact with his balls. After a few minutes he is just about passed out from the pain, being held by his neck by Countess Crimson like a puppet. She drags him over to the same kitchen table Jim is on and lays him on the opposite end of it.

Countess Crimson stands over them both as they lay on the table with battled busted bloody balls.

"Looks like you 2 should had submitted" Countess Crimson says as she walks around the round table.

'Well soon you won't be feeling any pain, all that ball pain will disappear." Countess Crimson says as she grabs Jim's cock. She rubs it some as Jim moans and then opens her mouth to reveal fangs. Jim's eyes grow wide and has a frightened look on his face. Countess Crimson bites his dick with extreme force, Jim screams as he feels her fangs dig into his dick but then he feels great pleasure, his ball pain disappears.

As Jim lays there in ecstasy Countess Crimson goes over to Frank and does the same thing. Frank was begging her not to do bite his dick but had a change in heart when shortly after the fangs entered his dick he began feeling great.

Sadly for them that moment would only last a minute as after the bite they began feeling their balls fill up. Their dicks became harder then they ever have. It feels like they haven't came in years. They both fall off the table and start rolling around the floor in extreme pain. Their dicks so hard it felt like it was going to explode.

Countess Crimson stands over them. "Now I have complete control over your dicks you pathetic worms. You won't be able to cum until I say so. So go ahead and jerk your cocks and see what happens."

Frank and Jim both begin to jerk their dicks, for minutes they jerk their dicks fast hoping to cum, to relieve that pent up tension, to get a release but to no avail.

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"Now get on your stomachs like the worms you are and grovel at the feet and beg me to cum!" Demands Countess Crimson

Both Frank and Jim does as she says and grovel at her boots.

"I will let you 2 cum" Says Countess Crimson

"Oh thank you so much!" Yes thank you thank you thank you" Says both Jim and Frank as they kiss her boots.

"Yes but you see, if you had submitted you 2 would get to be my slaves, now you face the consequence of not submitting to me." Countess Crimson says with a smile on her face.

As Jim and Frank are on their stomachs groveling their 3rd roommate Mike enters the apartment. His jaw dropped when he saw what was happening.

"What kind of weird kinky shit are you 2 doing he ask?" Mike along with Jim and Frank was also a former high school football player. Mike was about 6'1, lean but muscular build and had long black hair with a clean shaven face.

Countess Crimson sees him. "JOIN YOUR FRIENDS AND GET ON YOUR KNEES YOU SORRY WORM"

Mike was about to say something but after seeing Countess Crimson tight toned body with her long toned sexy legs he can feel a hard on. As he gets hard he gets weaker and weaker. He falls to the ground like his friends did before him.

Countess Crimson walks towards him. Grabs him by the head and leads him to his friends. Mike was horrified when he saw bite marks on their dicks and all the blood in the kitchen. "

"I'm going to ask you a question and hopefully for your sake you answer differently then your friends did."

"DO YOU SUBMIT" ask Countess Crimson as she stands over Mike's weak body.

Mike looked at his friends, unlike those two Mike didn't have the macho guy attitude. He knew he didn't want to end up like these two so he did what he thought would save him.

"I SUBMIT TO YOU"

"Good boy, you made the right decision, but you have to earn the right to be my drone, so I'm putting you thru a little drill in order to prove to me you deserve to be my pet." Countess Crimson says as she strips him of all his clothes.

Countess Crimson grabs Mike by his balls and drags him to the table Jim and Frank were just on. She bends him over on it. She orders Jim and Frank to kneel in front of the table and watch with their raging hard-ons.

Countess Crimson grabs the cheese grater and walks over to the bent over Mike on the table. She holds his head down on the table and proceeds to rub the cheese grater on Mikes ass with powerful force. Mike is screaming as he can feel his ass torn to sheds, blood starts running down his leg onto the floor and he squirms.

"Hold still bitch" Yells Countess Crimson as she grates the skin off his ass.

Mike is crying and begging for her to stop.

"Beg me for the honor of being my bitch dog, beg for it bitch. Show me you want it." Says Countess Crimson as she grates his ass so much there is no skin left on it.

"PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE...I SUBMIT." Yells Mike as tears are running down his

face.

"Do you two losers see this" Countess Crimson ask Jim and Frank as they watch her torture their friend from their knees holding their ready to explode cocks.

"Ok bitch turn around" Mike turns around on the table, which for him was extremely painful as there was no skin left on his ass. Countess Crimson rubs his dick and looks Mike in his eyes as she opens her mouth to show her fangs. Mikes eyes grow wide and she bites down on his cock. The fangs piece into the skin causing even more blood to splash on the kitchen walls. Mike starts feeing better moments after. His ass no longer shredded. However shortly after much like his friends he falls to the ground holding his cock as his balls were filling up fast.

Countess Crimson then sees a dog bowl on the floor. Suddenly she thinks of another humiliating torture.

"Ok loser get on your knees and face your friends I have one last thing for you to do to prove you are worthy." As Mike gets on his knees facing his friends Countess Crimson stands between them. Facing Mike she removes her black body suit revealing her magnificent tight toned naked body. Jim and Frank's view is that of her tight toned round ass. It jiggled some when she walked but it was tight enough to crack an egg of it. She turns around so her perfectly shaven pussy is eye level with Jim and Frank causing them even more pain and frustration.

"If you two had submitted this would be your reward. She puts the black lace body suit under the faucet getting it wet. She then takes the body suit over to the dog bowl and rinses it in the bowl. She then puts the bowl in front of Mike.

"Drink up bitch, this is your reward for obeying"

Mike begins to lap up the water like a dog. Jim and Frank were forced to watch with extreme jealously as Mike got to drink up Countess Crimson's pussy and ass water.

Countess Crimson orders all 3 of them to the bedroom. Once in there she orders Mike to lay on the floor face down with a pillow under his dick, Frank to stand in the corner and Jim to get in the bathtub and lay down. All do as they are told as they have no control over their bodies anymore. Countess Crimson orders Mike to start humping the pillow. Mike does as he is told and start humping the pillow. Countess Crimson puts her boot into his back and tells him to hump faster. She grants him permission to cum when he reaches climax. Seconds later he lets out a huge moan as he cums on the pillow. His body starts shaking, his eyes roll back in his head, all his thoughts leave his head, he is in a sedative state. Countess Crimson orders him to lick up his mess which he does instantly with no questions asked. She tells him to stay there on his knees. He nods and says "Yes Countess"

Countess Crimson then orders Jim and Frank to start jerking their dicks. She gives them permission to cum when they reach climax. Both men start jerking at a feverish pace. Both men cum fast and let out a huge moan as they orgasm. Countess Crimson has a smile on her face as she walks in the bathroom. Jim is laying on his back in the bathtub looking exhausted with cum all over the tub and his stomach.

"Did you enjoy that" She ask

'Yes I did, thank you for allowing me to cum Countess" Jim says

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