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And now for the story...
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Teaser
Patrick opened his brown eyes and found himself lying naked on his back in his girlfriend, Noel's, bed. Noel, was straddling him with own fully nude body while rubbing her very wet pussy along the full length of his erection. To his amazement, Patrick could not remember how he had gotten there in the first place.
Chapter One
"I don't understand it." Noel said to Patricia, Patrick's twin sister. "I practically ripped his clothes off and still he wont make love to me." She was nearly on the verge of tears and Patricia could hear the desperation in Noel's voice as she asked, "Is it me? Have I been wrong all these months? I thought he really loved me; I had hoped he would ask me to marry him!"
They were both sitting at the kitchen table in Noel's apartment drinking coffee and discussing Noel's relationship dilemma. Patricia had stopped by Noel's apartment after getting off work from the hospital where she was a nurse. In desperation, Noel had asked Patricia over. She hoped Patricia might shed some light as to why Patrick had resisted every attempt she had made to become intimate with her. She wanted so much to give herself to him and show him how much she truly loved him.
"No Honey! It's not you at all. He really does love you. He's told me so." Patricia told her reassuringly.
"Then what is it? God, he doesn't think I'm a slut for throwing myself at him, does he?" Noel asked, her mind a mess of confusion.
Patricia thought for a second and then said hesitantly, "Listen Noel, you can never tell him I told you this. Never! It would brake his heart if he found out that anyone else knew about it. Do you understand?"
Noel said pleadingly, "Please tell me. If it is coming between us, I've got to know!"
"Has he ever told you about his ex-wife Cindy?" Patricia asked.
Noel replied, "No. In fact, he avoids the subject like the plague. I figured it must be really painful for him so I don't push him on it."
"That's an understatement!" Patricia began, "Let me tell you what the bitch did. About two months after they were married she started having an affair with some guy she met at work. She didn't have the guts to tell him, so she figured she would just drive him away. For almost six months, every time they would get in bed she would tell him how small he was, how he wasn't satisfying her, how he didn't measure up. She would bring home porn movies, point to whatever long dicked male mutant happened to be on the screen at the time, and say to him 'There's a real man!'. No matter what he tried, and he tried a lot of things to please her, she gave him the same line. Finally, when he started to believe her, he told her he did not want her to be unhappy and asked he if she wanted a divorce."
"You don't mean he's that small?" Noel asked.