Foreword
Hmmm they say write what you know (I hope this doesn't get me into any trouble).
Preamble (get over it hehe)
Most of my attempts at "erotic fiction" have been essentially to amuse female icq friends. That much said my fiction won't will have the male audiences in mind much. Sorry guys. This is my first ever deliberate and intentional attempt to write erotic fiction. Please understand I am going at this from a newbie perspective (including inserting this silly disclaimer).
I thought this notion up the other day while reflecting on what I might write about. Part of it is actually based on my life (I will let you figure out those parts); part is the zany world I would think would be interesting to live in. I am actually appearing in the story though. With a little luck this will spawn some manner of follow up (I think a book is expecting a bit much currently). I don't write specifically short stories unless forced to. So this will explain why it's not a quick read.
I am going to call this work "The Women's Club". If this story succeeds I will just run with it, and add more eventually.
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Prologue
How it all beganβ¦
Zoom back to 1993β¦.swoosh.
Bob was finally coming to grips with it all, and none of it looked promising. Life had been a steady string of personal let downs. So what, what's one more eh. Fybromyalgia; what a wretched word to try and get used to. And such a flaky sounding condition too. He still wasn't sold as he mused discontentedly.
"There must be something else wrong with me."
He just couldn't accept it all. No wonder the medical community was so skeptical.
Bob suffered through several years of depression, and the depression sure was real. Getting a disability pension based on depression though, that was somebody else's idea. He reeeeally didn't care. The process of getting accepted for the pension; what a pain in the butt all that was. Just an endurance contest apparently, it didn't seem important whether the applicant said this that or the other thing. It was all about whether the person would not accept no for an answer.
Several years of pointless counsel ensued. As well as several years worth of trying one damn feel-good pill after another; it was all pointless. Would it ever end? Oh it ended alright. Not how you would suspect though. And as you might suspect, they don't print any of this in the medical journals.
Picture a dreamy haze⦠an erotic event is transpiring. A woman clad in a soft flowing negligee all white and semi sheer. It's a floor length fashion, something that is more a wrap than anything else. Sleeves, and long flowing material to act as window dressing more than anything else. Soft and sensual to the touch, but in know way any manner of barrier to the contents within. She is sitting alongside the edge of a bed. The bedclothes disheveled and cast aside. Her attentions are riveted on the man lying there fully nude. He is sprawled as if tossed there upon the bed by some careless giant hand. His legs spread and head positioned as if he is not reeeeally present in the world. The man is in his own world of rapture currently. And with good cause, for the woman is performing some impressive miracles with her tongue. All along the shaft of the man's totally satisfied cock roams her delicate touch.
Lightly her tongue travels across his skin. Only the barest of contact is being made, but its clearly working. For from out of the opening of his cock flows a steady stream of fluids. One of her hands massages him below his balls, while her right hand, her best, encourages more and more fluids to rise forth. A steady grip is used, as she moves her right hand up and down his shaft. But oh god it's her tongue! She continues to flick and lick it across that portion just below the head. And wonder of wonders, she continues to insist on licking through the slit of the opening, not allowing any of that fluid to escape or go wasted.
It has been perhaps 20 minutes since she began her assault on his reserves of composure. He is quite immobile, just lying there groaning and murmuring constantly. A steady babble of pleasing sounds to her ears. His hips have stopped jerking, not quite as much in the last few minutes. It appears as if he has found his groove. Her pace has been maintained though through it all. Slowly it becomes apparent this won't last much longer. With suddenly great heaves his hips jerk upward. His arms become taught as they clench the bedding. The woman sensing it is nearing time slides his shaft into her mouth. She is ready for the last act. With several energetic pulses his warm sperm comes flushing out into her waiting mouth. He is clearly outside of communication, so she takes charge knowing what happens now is entirely up to her. Her right hand encourages his shaft to empty its contents. Each time that her tongue touched the head of his cock, he moans loudly. Finally it ends. The man lies there completely spent. He looks at his vision of loveliness, and watches. Slowly and with naughty intent, she proceeds to swallow down the contents of his lust just left in her mouth.
A giggle escapes from the woman as she adjusts her negligee so it isn't in her way.
"You are not finished dear" she softly speaks to him.