My very first story. Please let me know what you think.
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THE BEGINNING PART 2
STORY #1 / PART 2
Chapter 5 continued.
She's completely limp, unable to move, the intensity of her orgasm causing temporary paralysis. Her flood gates are open. Jay continues to eat and suck her pussy!
Swallowing her cum and juice as it pumps out or her body!
He's never tasted a pussy so good and addicting.
She's losing her mind, she's never cum this much before. Her body is on fire with heat, lust and desire!
His face buried in her pussy, she can't take much more. Her body begins to tremble as it recovers from her mind blowing orgasms.
Jay reluctantly pulls his face away from her pussy. His face covered in her juices. The flames from the candles making his face glisten! He wipes his face with his fingers then slowly slides his fingers across her upper lip and under her nose!
She can smell her pussy and cum! He holds a finger over her mouth and glides it across her lips. She licks her lips, tasting herself. He slides his fingers into her mouth one by one as she sucks herself off his fingers.
Jay leans in, his lips right above hers. He nibbles on her bottom lip with his teeth, his tongue wetting her lips. His mouth opens and their tongues meet, lips smashed together, tongues dancing with each other. Her lungs deflate as he inhales the air from her lungs, taking her breath away before he exhales pushing air back in, breathing for them both, his hands on the sides of her face, his thumbs on her neck. He stares into her eyes.
Him: Do you love me?
Her: yes!
Him: are you sure?
Her: YES!
Him: Do you trust me?
Her: with my life!
Him: Good girl!
Jay walks over to the candles, the only source of light in the room, he blows them out 1 at a time, 1 candle left, he looks at her. He picks the candle up and walks towards her, she's still tied up but no longer blindfolded, he places his hand over mouth, tips the candle sideways as the hot wax drips around her belly button, she moans, not in pain, but from the joy of being teased and tortured. He slowly moves up as the wax drops on her stomach, onto her tits, she moans louder, his hand muffling the screaming and moaning, she arches her back, the wax drips onto her nipple, hot at first but quickly cools encasing her nipple in a hard wax casing. Jay pushes his thumb into her mouth, she sucks on it, yearning for it to be his cock in her mouth, he moves the candle above the other breast and again encases her nipple in hot wax before it cools and hardens. She sucks on his thumb harder as the pain and pleasure rip through her, conflicting with each other.
He removes his hand from her mouth, she whimpers. He groans as he stares into her eyes. He brings the candle in front of his mouth, blowing out the flame and with it any remaining light that there was.
Chapter 6:
Now in total darkness, she can hear Jay moving around, he's beside the opposite side of the bed, she feels his hands and fingers as they glide down her smooth bare skin to the shackle encasing her wrist.
He unbuckles it, rubbing her wrists where the shackle was.
He removes his hands but she knows better than to move her arm right now.
Next he grasps her upper thigh right below her still dripping wet pussy, slides his fingers down her silky legs to her ankle where he removes the next shackle, the sweet aroma of pussy and sweat in the air, Jay repeats the process on the next ankle shackle but again she dare not close her legs, and then to the other wrist. She's now free but still spread eagle on the bed.
The room is so hot, and full of heavy breathing.
Jay grabs her by the ankles and pulls her towards the foot of the bed, her knees now bent over the edge of the bed, feet on the floor. He spreads her legs back open and moves to the side of the bed.
He whispers into her ear, open your mouth for me! Her mouth immediately opens in anticipation of what's coming next.
Chapter 7: