ALL CHARACTERS ARE OVER THEIR AGE OF 18. EVERY FLASHBACK THAT HAPPENS IS WHEN THE CHARACTER IS OVER 18!!!
I write primarily for myself. If you like it great, if its not your cup of tea, my sincerest apologies and please look elsewhere. I build up slowly through many chapters and there is some drama and doubt with most of my characters. I have a total of 15 chapters, so far, most of which I need to read through a few more times and edit. If you're looking for a quick Daddy/Daughter fuck session this will be pointless for you.
Non-Anonymous Comments with constructive criticism are extremely valued and will be responded too when I can. Obviously I have no formal training and want to get better with my story telling. If you area seasoned erotic writer and would like to champion a noob, drop me a message on how I can improve.
Lots of Love, Casino
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Miles's Point of View:
Miles, Sunshine, Avery, Gabbie and McKenna:
After I showered I figured I would have a little snack and catch up on my book. The girls came in with Avery in tow. She was a little unsteady and still surprisingly naked. They didn't see me perched in the corner on a comfy chair. 'Jesus they are gorgeous' I thought as they climbed the stairs. A few seconds later I heard her door shut and the shower running.
I read my book for another 1/2 hour then figured I should probably head to bed. I was exhausted by crazy sex sessions I had with Gabbie and Avery and wasn't sure what the morning would bring.
'I should check with the girls before going to bed to make sure they don't need anything.' I thought to myself, but that was a lie. I wanted to see them once more before I went to sleep. I placed my book on the end table, stood up and stretched. I moved to the stairs and began my ascent.
I went to Sunshine's door and knocked gently.
"Come in Daddy." Sunshine said softly from beyond the door.
I opened the door and was treated to a lovely view of the gals in their sleepwear. 'Jesus Gabbie isn't wearing any panties.' I noticed; my cheeks flushed instantly. However, the mood seemed a little heavier than it was earlier, "Is everything all right?" I was concerned and worried I might have caused this somber mood.
"We're ok Daddy." Sunshine said with a quick but sad smile. "We're just talking about stuff."
"I'm going to head to bed," I said even more worried, "Does anyone need anything before I hit the hay?"
"I do." Sunshine said getting off the bed. She moved languidly towards me. She wrapped her arms around me and gave me a deep lucious kiss. It was quite some time before she broke It. I swooned a little and she said simply, "Goodnight Daddy, I love you."
"Goodnight my sweet girl. I love you too." I said. As she broke the hug and all the gals were lined up to say goodnight.
Gabbie, dressed in nothing but a black sheer teddy, was first. She pressed her warm voluptuous body against me. Per usual dirty Gabbie, she slipped me her tongue and squeezed my ass. "Goodnight Miles. Thank you for the lovely day."
"Of course Gabbie. Goodnight."
Avery was next, wearing a white cotton tank top and tiny white cotton panties. She ran her hands down my chest and around to the small of my back. She gave me a soft and sensuous kiss. "It really was a magical evening, Miles. Goodnight."
"Yes it really was... fun. I'm glad you had a good time as well." I must've been beet red by now.
McKenna came up to me next and grabbed my hand. She was wearing a black microfiber tank top and boy shorts. "Can I chat with you quickly in the hall?" it wasn't really a question, more of a command. 'Jesus her ass cheeks were truly incredible.'
She shut the door and turned to face me.
"What is it McKenna, Honey?' I was worried that she was going to say something awful. It must've shown on my face.
She looked up at me and saw the concern. She put her hands to my face and whispered, "Oh no Daddy nothing bad." She jumped up and wrapped her arms around my shoulders and legs around my waist. She gripped me powerfully and pressed her lips to mine. She forced her tongue in my mouth and kissed me passionately. I lost my balance and fell into the wall.
After a couple of minutes passed she broke the kiss and looked me in the eyes. She teasingly bit and pulled my lower lip. She was a little breathless when she spoke. "Sorry if I'm a bit aggressive. Today has been a really lucious day."
"It's alright McKenna. Yes, today has been quite a surprising day. You gals have been very... playful"
"MMMmmmm..." she growled hungrily and kissed me hard again. Breaking it, she was breathless again, "Sunny said you get up early?"
'Good God! this girl knows how to kiss.' All I could do was nod my head. I was in a daze.'How could someone who looks so young and innocent pack that much into a kiss.'
"Good answer. Will you help me with my stretching in the gym in the basement and give me a good workout?"
Again, I was in a daze and simply nodded.
"Another good answer." she rewarded me with another kiss and hopped back to the floor. Then she bent over and pulled down her boy shorts. Exposing her cleanly shaved pussy lips. "She needs a good stretch. Do you think you can help me with that, Daddy?"
I almost tipped over but regained my balance. All I could do was blink and say, "Of course my dear."
She pulled up her shorts and kissed me once more. I thought I was going to faint.
"Wonderful... See you at 6:00 am Daddy. Don't be late or I'll have to punish you. Goodnight." She gave me a wicked smile and quickly went back to Sunshine's room.
'Holy fuck!' I thought to myself. 'Is there something in the water at their dorm?' I had an aching hardon after that little display and I felt like an absolute pervert. She looked like she was still 18 and in fucking High School.
I turned and went down the stairs to my room. I had to rub one out just to get to sleep. McKenna turned me on so much. Well, they all turned me on in one way or another.
Then I thought back to the kiss that Sunshine had given me. 'Ok, she wasn't my biological daughter but still. It felt so wrong but was so electric.' Another thought popped into my head but it disturbed me. Like the thoughts I had after her she turned 18. The therapist had really worked with me to control my primal urges and everything she suggested worked. 'There was no way Sunny wanted me like that anyway.' I reassured myself and ran myself through a metal exercise that I still use to this day.
It was 10:30. I set my alarm for 5:30 so I could shower quickly and make coffee. Finally blissful sleep.
Sunshine's Point of View:
McKenna came through the door giggling, "OOHHH.... I'm so excited."
They all smiled at her. Poor McKenna drew the short straw and had to wait until day 2.
Gabbie hopped off the bed, scooped up McKenna and gave her a kiss. She spun her around and softly placed McKenna on the bed kneeling. She looked absolutely radiant in her excitement.
"Tell us all about it." Avery asked, grabbing her hand.
McKenna told us all about her sexy hallway run in with light hearted enthusiasm "I'm excited for you Sweetheart!" I tried to sound happy, I really did but she saw through it.
McKenna looked worried and sad. "I'm sorry. I know you're having trouble Sunshine. I can call it off if you think it would help." A tear streaked down her cheek.
I softened my gaze and leaned in for a kiss. Her lips were soft and sweet. "I wouldn't let you miss tomorrow morning for anything you sexy little beast."
She giggled, smiled and rewarded me with her patented kiss. It was so hot it sent a shock wave right to my clit. "Jesus McKenna."
"McKenna!" Gabbie pouted, "Can I have a kiss please?"
She leaned over and gave Gabbie a smoking hot kiss. Then she surprisingly reached forward and caressed one of Gabbie's glorious tits. I thought she was going to melt.
"Oh man, McKenna. You relight my fire. No fair playing with my boobie"
"Sorry Gabbie. I couldn't resist. I don't have wonderful tits like you. I've gotta brush my teeth and hit the hay." She hopped off the bed. "I've got an early morning workout." She looked over her shoulder and winked at me, "Thank you Sunshine you're a true best friend."
I just winked and blew her a kiss.
"I'm gonna go to bed too, my lovely girls. The hunger in Gabbie's eye scares me and my pussy is still deliciously tender." Avery kissed us both and joined McKenna to brush her teeth as well.
"Will you play with me Sunshine?" Gabbie had a desperate need in her eyes.
"Of course," I said, stroking her thigh, "but we're gonna snuggle first and let it take its course."
"Mmmmm... I love the slow burn."
Sunshine's Point of View: