ALL CHARACTERS ARE OVER THE AGE OF 18!!!
Notes on Spring Break: Chapter 7 Fucking Avery in the pool house. Seems to be a common fuck room.
I write primarily for myself. If you like it great, if its not your cup of tea, my sincerest apologies and please look elsewhere. I build up slowly through many chapters and there is some drama and doubt with most of my characters. I have a total of 15 chapters, so far, most of which I need to read through a few more times and edit. If you're looking for a quick Daddy/Daughter fuck session this will be pointless for you.
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Lots of Love, Casino
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Miles's Point of View
Miles and Avery
I awoke to Avery kissing me and gently squeezing my balls. "Are you ready for the pool house Daddy?"
"What time is it.?" I checked my watch and it was 8:13 pm.
"What does it matter?" she kissed me again, hard and deep.
She stood up and reached for my hands. She pulled me to a standing position and led me to the pool house. Once inside she turned and gave me another kiss before falling to her knees. She pulled my board shorts down and my hard cock sprang to life. She gripped it tightly with her right hand cupping my balls with her left. "You have a truly beautiful cock Miles," she gushed as she swallowed me whole as she had done before. After pumping my cock with her throat a few times, she released me and stood up quickly.
She tore off her suit in a quick motion and hugged me, kissing me hard. Her gorgeous soft breasts with her hard pink nipples topping their perfect shape. "Lay down on the floor Daddy. I want to ride you."
I did as I was told. She stood over me and straddled me. Her eyes burned with a passionate fire. She played with her clit. She was soaking wet as a long line of pussy juice slipped from her twat. She caught it with her hand and rubbed it against her bald pussy. It was glistening in the low light of the room. She didn't have large lips like gabbie but her inner lips were slightly distended past her outer and quivered with every motion. She moved her hand to her mouth and licked what remained. It was extremely erotic and a little pre-cumm gushed from the tip of my cock. "I like the way I taste too." she said hungrilly.
"Come on baby, sit on Daddy's cock" I said, surprising myself. Her scent pushed me beyond reason. It wasn't as musky as Gabbie. A little lighter and fresh but so desirable.
She dropped down, still on her feet, grabbing my cock and positioning it at her opening. She swirled the head of my dick around her lips mixing my pre-cum with her juices and slowly sank down on my cock burying it deep in her pussy. She sat there for a moment savoring the girth and depth. She then placed her hands on her knees and started to bounce from her squatted position.
She was tight and warm and so wet, "Oh Daddy, your cock feels so good." My crotch was covered by her wetness as she bounced. The obscene sloppy slapping and squishing noises only added to my arousal.
Her intensity increased along with her pace. I could feel her pussy clenching, desperate for release. I started fucking up into her every time she drove her cunt down to my crotch. "Oh yes Daddy! Fuck your big cock up into me." she growled.
I reached forward to rub her clit. She grabbed both of my wrists and slammed them to the carpet. "Don't Daddy..." she gasped for air, "too sensitive." was all she could manage.