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Notes on Spring Break: Chapter 5 fun with drinks and dinner with the Gals. Long chapter with a sexy encounter.
I write primarily for myself. If you like it great, if its not your cup of tea, my sincerest apologies and please look elsewhere. I build up slowly through many chapters and there is some drama and doubt with most of my characters. I have a total of 15 chapters, so far, most of which I need to read through a few more times and edit. If you're looking for a quick Daddy/Daughter fuck session this will be pointless for you.
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Sunshine's Point of View
Miles, Sunshine, Avery, Gabbie and McKenna
We walked back out to the pool. I put the salad on the table with some dressing. Daddy moved to the grill with the chicken and veggies. He started the veggies right away. 'They need extra time to roast properly' he always said.
"Come on girls," I called to my friends, more as an order rather than a request. " Let's get the next round of drinks ready." They all followed me to the pool house.
Daddy taught me a while ago how to tend the bar. It was Martini time after all. It was a pre dinner ritual.
"Gabbie honey, grab the gin and vermouth. Avery you're on olive duty and McKenna, please grab the Martini glasses." I grabbed the shaker and filled it with Ice and enough gin and a splash of vermouth for five. McKenna lined up the glasses on a tray. Avery speared and placed 2 olives in each glass.
"Sunshine sweetie, can we get an update?" McKenna said sheepishly with a look of worry on her face.
"Oh yes, I'm sorry. I was focused on the drinks."
The girls waited eagerly, but Gabbie looked worried and a little sad, "He's mad at me isn't he."
"No Gabbie, but he is mad at himself. Your mimicry really threw him a curveball."
"I'm sorry," Gabbie sasid tears welling in her eyes.
I patted her hand. "Everything is fine, but I had to tell him that you all have crushes on him. I had to give him plenty of reassurance. Otherwise he might've hidden in his room the rest of the week. Tread lightly and Gabbie, if you fuck him again you can call him Daddy but don't use my voice."
"You got it, chief." she saluted dutifully. Everyone giggled.
Avery cautiously added, "Any updates on... You know."
I looked at her frankly, "What Avery, fucking my Daddy?"
The girls simply nodded.
"I don't know. I just kissed him in the kitchen and it wasn't our normal Daddy daughter kiss."
"Who initiated it?" McKenna asked.
"I did but he didn't pull away."
Gabbie moved towards me, wrapped her arms around my waist and pressed her body to mine. She kissed me deeply and when she pulled away, she looked me dead in the eyes. "Fuck him Sunshine." Jesus she was using my voice, "Fuck him hard and deep without regret. Make him yours just leave enough for the rest of us."
I felt tingling between my legs and felt myself get wet. "Jesus, Gabbie. How do you do that?"
She kissed me one more time gently, "It's a gift." She whispered in my ear.
Avery and McKenna laughed in unison.
"Well." Avery said.
"I'll let you know later." I responded. "McKenna you grab the shaker and shake the fuck out of it, Bounce your ass while you do it. Avery, you get the honor of Martini delivery to Daddy. McKenna looked sad with a little pout.
"Oh McKenna," I said, this time giving her a kiss, she actually swooned for a split second, "Daddy just had shock and awe with Gabbie. He needs Avery's flirty long play seduction right now. If we hit him with your energizer bunny routine, his head might explode. And I'm not talking about the one on his shoulders."
McKenna blushed and they all giggled.
"Besides Honey, you're an early riser with your stretching and yoga. He'll be up at the same time making coffee. You'll have a good 3-4 hours with him before we even get up. We're going to sleep in late, right girls." Gabbie and Avery nodded, biting their lips, staring at McKenna. She blushed again and they all made their way outside. Miles had changed the music and Genesis by Justice was playing.
McKenna was giving the shaker the workout of a lifetime. And she bounced her ass beautifully in her small electric blue bikini bottoms pretending the rhythm was for the music rather than to arouse Miles.