ALL CHARACTERS ARE OVER 18!!!
Notes on Spring Break: Chapter 4 is pool party fun and drinks and dinner with the Gals. Long chapter with a sexy encounter.
I write primarily for myself. If you like it great, if its not your cup of tea, my sincerest apologies and please look elsewhere. I build up slowly through many chapters and there is some drama and doubt with most of my characters. I have a total of 15 chapters, so far, most of which I need to read through a few more times and edit. If you're looking for a quick Daddy/Daughter fuck session this will be pointless for you.
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Lots of Love, Casino
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Miles's Point of View
Miles, Sunshine, Avery, Gabbie and McKenna
I was relieved beyond belief. I wanted to make this spring break as fun as possible for Sunny and her friends. I washed my face quickly and stripped out of my clothes. I put on my board shorts and a linen cabana shirt. I knew it was hot outside so I buttoned only one button in the middle of my shirt. I walked to the bar in the living room and poured myself a couple of ounces of Scotch and downed it to mellow my frazzled nerves. I grabbed my sunglasses, took a deep breath and headed out to the pool.
"Hello Ladies," I smiled, heading over to a lounge chair that was just out of the sun. The view was stunning. Not only was my daughter gorgeous but so were her friends.
Sunny had on the same tiny black string bikini as always. Her hair was a luxurious brown that landed on her shoulders. She was 5' 5" tall, olive skin and a firm body. She had c-size breasts, skinny waist and a round firm bottom. If only she weren't my daughter. I know. I'm a sicko.
Avery was wearing a more conservative red and white polka dot one piece. It had large cut-outs on both sides. It really didn't hide much more flesh than a bikini. She was a little taller at 5' 8". She had dark brown hair that she bleached blond and cut in a pixie style. She was skinnier but still had a lovely figure. Her breasts were a little bigger, around a D-size cup. She would always shelter under an umbrella to protect her fair pale skin.
Mckenna was maybe 5' 2" tall. Her shoulder length brown hair was up in pigtails. She was on the gymnastics team and had muscular legs and a very athletic body. She didn't have much for breasts, a-size cups at most, but her nipples seemed to be permanently hard. She also had a round, muscular bubble butt. She was wearing an electric blue string bikini that was tiny even on her diminutive frame. The material on the back didn't cover much of her ass at all and her cheeks were in full bounce mode whenever she moved around.
Last but certainly not least was Gabbie. I don't know what to say about Gabbie other than she was the embodiment of sex. She was 5' 6" tall, olive skin, curvy with a tiny waist but a large round bouncing ass. She had a slight tummy which added to her sultry vision. Her hair was jet black and went down to the tops of her all natural tits. They must've been at least DD size I would've guessed. I couldn't believe her choice of bikini. It was white and way too tiny for her. She had a sexual hunger about her that was unmistakable. Today, curiously she seemed to be focused on me. Every time I looked her way she was focused on me. It aroused me and made me uncomfortable.
Then Sunshine said, "Why don't we play the music game?"
"OOOHHH, fun! I'm in." McKenna piped up.
"Me too." Gabbie said with a strange sense of focus and anticipation.
"HHHHHH, Fine," Avery said with a sigh. She didn't like to play games and watched most of the time. Her participation seemed unusual but not abnormal.
"What about you Daddy?" Sunshine said with a smile.
"I don't know. Why don't you girls just play?"
"AWW, come on Mr. B." Gabbie said, shifting on her lounger, her heavy breasts jiggling suggestively. "One play we all play, right girls." She had a devious smile on her face.
"She's right Mr. B." McKenna said with a gleam in her eyes, "Come on and play with us."
"Even, I'm playing Mr. B." Avery said coolly but with a hint of sass.
"All right, all right, But I'm adding a rule."
"What's that Daddy?" Sunshine said sweetly.
"No more Mr B. You have to call me Miles from now on.
"OK MILES!!!" they all said in unison, giggling after.
"How do we play?" I said matter of fact.
Avery piped in, "We pick a topic and then choose a scenario and then pick a song that would work great for that scenario."
"Example," I said with a frown not completely understanding.
McKenna chimed in, "Topic: Gun battles. Scenario: Slow motion move through a bar shooting drug dealers for revenge."
Avery piped up, "Time of the Season by the Zombies."
"Alexa, play "Time of the Season by the Zombies." McKenna said quickly and the iconic song began playing over the outdoor speakers.
"That was quick," I said, a little surprised by the quick response and how well the song fit in my mind's eye.
"We play this game a lot." Sunshine said with a smirk, "Mostly because it's one of the few games Avery will agree to play."
Avery stuck out her tongue, "Not true." She said defensively.
"Name another." Gabbie said, challenging her.
"Touche." She said with a sigh. A little annoyance played across her face. She was surprised Gabbie got the better of her.
"Topic?" Avery asked.
"Sex." Gabbie said slowly letting it sink in for effect. She was staring right at me.
"Sex it is." Sunshine declared.
I blushed, "Can we change the topic?" I must've been red as a beet.
"Nope," McKenna said with finality.
"I'm not sure I can do this with you gals." Beads of sweat broke out on my forehead.