Notes on Spring Break: I should've put these notes in the first chapter but it was a rookie mistake. I will go back and add them at some point. The Tags in chapter 1 were a bit misleading as I considered them for the entire story.
I write primarily for myself. If you like it great, if its not your cup of tea, my sincerest apologies and please look elsewhere. I build up slowly through many chapters and there is some drama and doubt with most of my characters. I have a total of 15 chapters so far, most of which I need to read through a few more times and edit. If you're looking for a quick Daddy/Daughter fuck session this will be pointless for you.
Non-Anonymous Comments with constructive criticism are extremely valued and will be responded too when I can. Obviously I have no formal training and want to get better with my story telling. If you area seasoned erotic writer and would like to champion a noob, drop me a message on how I can improve.
Lots of Love, Casino
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Miles's Point of View
Miles, Miss Audrey
After putting Sunshine to bed, I made my way back to Audrey very quickly. I found her in the guest bedroom bath. She was cleaning up and looked at me calmly through the mirror with a blank stare. The cut on her cheek was shallow and didn't look like it required stitches. We made eye contact not knowing who should go first. I thought she wanted me too.
"Audrey," I looked down in shame. I was ashamed at myself for not shutting and locking the door. I was ashamed of myself for getting caught. I was deeply upset with myself for letting my daughter see me in such tawdry actions. Most of all, I was horrified that I didn't step in between Audrey and Sunshine sooner. I was shocked with what I was witnessing and frankly frozen. I'd never seen my daughter with an ounce of rage. What kind of a father was I. "I'm really sorry about Sunshine..."
She put her hand up to stop me, " Please Miles," she said with genuine sorrow on her face. "I'm not sure what you heard but, I'm not proud of what I did. I was so wounded by not being able to make you mine," a tear ran down her face, "I baited your daughter. I said horribly cruel things to her. I wanted your girl to feel how badly I was hurt. Her reaction was because of my wickedness.' she sobbed harder now. "I went after a highschool girl, Miles! Your highschool girl. Maggie would be heartbroken with the way I treated your daughter."
I felt more sorrow hearing the name of my deceased wife. I moved in and turned her towards me, hugging her. "I'm sorry, I moved things too fast. I'm not ready to give you what you deserve."