Separated by some 3,000 miles, I wrote several stories for my girlfriend, hoping to keep us in touch and sexually connected. This and other stories are fiction based on her fantasies and written with her as the first person. I tried using details to evoke visions of what the characters would see, hear, feel, smell and taste—something I believe is missing from most Literotica stories. Although catered to her intimate fantasies, I am sharing them with fellow readers hoping you will also enjoy them.
As a writer, I am always looking to improve my craft and would appreciate feedback, especially from women. I'd like to know what you, the reader, found particularly arousing and what could be improved upon.
Regards
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I waited in the room anxiously. My Baby was coming back and I so wanted to be with him. I missed him so much. I just wanted to hold him, kiss him and have him do the same to me. I also wanted to show him how much I loved him, how much I missed him and how much I wanted him. I knew just what he, a man wanted. I know how to please a man and never before wanted to please any man as much as I do my Baby. I love a man's cock. I love to suck on it, I love having it my mouth, pussy and ass. It has been so long that I've had a cock and I miss it. I now need it so much, especially known that my man is going to deliver. Rubbing my clit is just not the same as having a man bend me over and fuck me good.
With a loud click, the door opened and my baby stood there. He stepped inside threw aside his bags and walked toward me. I got up and walked toward him. Our lips met in a deep, passionate kiss. His arms wrapped around me, holding me tight. My hands reached around him and I too held tight, never wanting to let go. We kissed and kissed as if time stood still until his mouth trailed away from mine and kissed my cheek. I could feel his hands run down to my ass and with each hand, he grabbed a check tight. I looked up at him and smiled. He wanted me, and there was nothing more I needed than to be wanted, but I also wanted him and to show him just how much.
We looked into each others' eyes and into our souls, standing there motionless. We didn't need to say anything, our eyes said it all—how much we loved each other.
His hands pushed me against him and I could feel a lump against me and I realized it was his cock, now big and hard. I smiled back at him and gave him a big mischievous grin. Then, I dropped to my knees. Unbuckling his pants, I found his zipper and unzipped his fly, noting the bulge underneath. I then grabbed the top of his pants and underwear, then slid them down. His cock was pushed down, but then popped up when freed by his pants. I grabbed it then opened my mouth, pulled it in, the clamped my lips around his shaft. His cock was warm and hard. I ran my tongue under it, then slowly pulled my head back, then forward, sliding my lips up and down his cock. Reaching around with both hands, I grabbed the cheeks of his ass and pulled him towards me and into my mouth, then fell back in a rocking motion. I looked up at him and our eyes made contact. I looked into his as if to tell and show him just how much he meant to me. He brought his hands alongside my head and held my head, thrusting his hips forward as he pulled my head towards him, sending his cock deep into my mouth. Just as fast, he pulled his hips back and his cock slid out, but I managed to keep its head in, just before he thrust it back in. He face fucked me for a few minutes, then took his shirt off. Grabbing my chin, he pushed my head back and his cock fell out of my mouth.
He kicked off his shoes and pants and lay on the bed. His head was against the headboard in one corner, and his legs spread across the bed with his cock bobbing upward.