If you're a writer (and I really don't consider myself one- maybe a storyteller), you see a plan in your mind about how the story should go, but when you actually put pen to paper, so to speak, it rarely works out the way you planned it in your noggin. This story went from a fun romp about a guy getting laid a lot to possibly a love story. We'll see where it goes next, and I hope you continue to follow along. Like the comments so far- nothing crazy enough yet for me to delete. Please keep that up- I hate deleting comments. Enjoy!
Elliot stood outside the front door of Cari's apartment for six minutes before he finally worked up the nerve to knock. When the door opened, Cari looked at him disapprovingly then spoke.
"It's four minutes after seven," she coldly related. "You're late."
"I... uhhhhh... I was actually here two minutes before seven," Elliot admitted sheepishly, "but I... well, I didn't know if..."
"Just get in here," Cari demanded, "it's cold out there and we're letting all my free heat out."
Elliot stepped through the door and moved to take his winter coat off. Cari stopped him.
"I didn't say you were staying," she remarked bitterly. "I want you to say what you came to say then I'll decide what comes next."
Elliot looked Cari up and down but couldn't bring himself to look her in the eye. "I like your boots..." he finally said after a brisk minute.
"They're fashionable and practical," Cari stated. "Is that what you came to tell me? That you like my boots?"
"No," he began again. "I came to tell you... that I really like you... and I don't want what happened with Doreen to..."
"Don't mention that... woman's name again," she ordered. "And as far as you liking me? You sure have a damn funny way of showing it!"
"I know," he acknowledged. "It was selfish and stupid and I'm an idiot and... can you think of anything else?"
"Lots," she said, her voice choked with the tears brimming in her eyes. "Just tell me why?"
Elliot was silent for a moment, contemplating his next words, then decided to come clean. "Cari, I know about the bet. With you and the other women. I know almost everything except exactly who's in. I didn't know if our date the other night was you trying to win the bet or if you really felt the connection I felt. I went out with Do... with that other woman to try to see if I could figure it out. I'm sorry to say, yes, I planned to sleep with her. I needed to see your reaction when she claimed her win. Then when I did see you... your reaction... well, I knew then that I had really fucked up, Cari. Please, I never meant to hurt you or..."
Cari cut Elliot's confession off with a quick slap to his left cheek that turned his head sharply to the right. She then covered her mouth in the shock of her own violence before embracing the stunned man. "Oh, God, I'm sorry, El!" she said as her tears came freely. "This is crazy. This whole damned bet is just insane. We all thought it'd be fun, just a good time. Half of the women in the bet haven't been laid in... And I'm sure none of them, including me, thought about what it might do to you, or us if feelings got in the way... Oh, Elliot, I'm so sorry..."
Elliot held her as she sobbed and felt his own begin to trickle down his stinging face. They stayed embraced for several minutes until Elliot softly spoke into her ear. "Then let's end this tonight.
Cari stepped back slightly and looked at Elliot puzzled. "You don't want to see me anymore?" She nodded then continued, "I understand. I've been horrible. We all have. We were all thinking of ourselves. None of us thought a bit about what this might do to you. I understand and..."
"You don't understand, Cari," Elliot corrected her. "What I meant was, let's end the bet tonight. You and me. Let's go to your bedroom and do what we should have done that first night. Then I'll come clean to the other ladies that I knew all along and you can divide the money back to them however you need. I'll even make up the difference if you want so they all get their fair share back."
Cari smiled at his proposal then helped him out of his coat as she said, "Yeah, let's go to the bedroom. We'll worry about the rest later."
The two practically sprinted through Cari's apartment hand-in-hand, startling her two cats, Buster and Keaton. When they reached the boudoir, they tore at each other's clothes until they both stood nude in front of one another. Elliot whistled lowly at her incredible shape. "You're possibly the sexiest woman I've ever seen. I'm a lucky guy."
"We're both lucky, sweetie," she corrected him and reached her hand low to grasp his growing erection. They stood on the side of her bed and kissed while fondling each other, their heat rising. Elliot scooped Cari off the floor and placed her gently on the bed. Parting her long legs, he laid down before her, his face inches from her sex and breathed in her scent. He moistened his lips then placed them on her inviting slit, his tongue working up and down until he zeroed in on her pink button.
Cari gasped as Elliot swirled his mouth muscle around her clit and lightly nibbled with his teeth. She had always been a quick comer and tonight was no exception. Only a few minutes passed before Elliot felt Cari's body tremble and she shouted her approval.
"Oh, God, Elliot!!" she yelled, and her loud consent reverberated through the bedroom as her hands tightly gripped the sheet on either side of her. Hips bucking, Elliot held his mouth lock as long as he could until she rolled away from him exasperated.
"No more!" she protested. "I can't take any more!" she told him as her body continued to shake in wonderful bliss. When her orgasm subsided, she took in a deep breath and crawled back to her new lover. Cari moved to take Elliot into her mouth, but he stopped her before she could consume him.
"Not yet," he told her then rolled her on to her back. His member stood arrow straight and he proposed to use it for its intended purpose. He hovered over her then kissed her as he slipped inside of her, her wetness easing his entry. He felt himself completely inside of Cari and saw her face, mouth open in a silent scream.
"Elliot," she said breathlessly, "that thing is... Oh, God, fuck me! Fuck me with that big cock!"
Elliot had never thought of himself as big, but he had no intention of contradicting Cari. He decided to make their first encounter short but sweet and began quickly pumping her slit. The sounds of their two bodies slapping together echoed throughout the room intermixed with Cari's moans. Before he finished, Elliot pulled himself out of her then placed Cari on her hands and knees. He mounted her from behind then continued his assault on her swollen fold.
"Cum in me, Elliot," she demanded. "I'm fixed and clean. I'll show you my latest test when we're done if you want. Just cum in me, please!"
Elliot did as he was told and unleashed a torrent of his semen deep in Cari's waiting void. They both moaned loudly as he came then collapsed on the bed together, Elliot still embedded in her. He laid on top of her and kissed her neck and earlobes in post-coital delight. When he returned to his unengorged state, he rolled off Cari and lay next to her. She then rolled over and lay on top of him, their faces inches apart.
"Fucking awesome, babe," she complimented him, echoing Doreen's sentiment from the previous weekend. "I want to do that again right now!"
"Well, I'm going to need some orange juice and a nap," he confessed, "but there's nothing saying we can't in an hour or so." He kissed her and their tongues met. They broke the kiss and Elliot reached for the nightstand. "Aren't you forgetting something?"
"Forgetting something?" she mimicked and questioned. Elliot handed her cellphone to her.
"The picture, sweetheart," Elliot answered. "It doesn't count without that, right?"
"Right," she acquiesced. Triggering the photo function, Cari snapped a picture of the two together, their bare torsos showing and their faces mashed together in a kiss.
"Will that be good enough?" Elliot asked. "Do you need something more... provocative?"