I am trying something different with these stories. Instead of writing a single narrative, I have written 10 vignettes from a relationship. Each chapter alternates between the point of view of the two main characters and is written as if talking to the other person.
In addition, I have written each chapter as a quickie; all of the stories are 1,000 words or less, which is something of a challenge for me. They take place in chronological order, although there may be days, weeks or months between chapters.
Please let me know what you think of this style by leaving a comment or send me feedback via email.
Enjoy!
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He said
Lunch plans?
I type out and press "send".
I have something for you to eat.
Your return text is exactly what I wanted.
I tap out a reply.
Sounds yummy.
My place. Noon.
You park next to my car. I watch your breasts bounce as you walk from the parking lot. I am waiting at the top of the steps in front of your apartment.
"I hope you're hungry," you wink.
As soon as we're through the door, I pin you up against the wall. Our lips meet. Your supple breasts mash flat against my chest.
I slip my hand under your skirt. You aren't wearing panties.
And you're a swamp down there.
You pull me towards the couch and sink into the cushions.
I spread your legs. I can smell your arousal.
Our bodies were made for one another.
After a kiss to the inside of your thighs, I devour your pussy.
You writhe in ecstasy as I bathe your labia and clit with my tongue. I love the way you taste. If we had longer than lunch, I would eat you out for hours on end.
Your thighs tighten around my head. Your fingers dig into my hair.
I never let up. Looking up, I see your teeth clenched. Your eyes are hooded over with pleasure.