If you could put this at the top, in italics, that would be great:
This is a submission for the Valentine's 2010 contest, and is categorized under erotic couplings.
It would be great if you could rate my story after reading, and comments are always read and appreciated!
Thanks!
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Riley grumbled to herself as she walked down the street. The icy sidewalk was slippery, and she had to tread carefully over the slabs of concrete. Her black knee-high boots had only a little grip on the soles, and she cursed herself for not wearing more sensible shoes. Her breath smoked around her face in small puffs of mist highlighted by the street lamps and clung to the navy wool knit that was wrapped around her neck and chin. Her hands dug into the pockets of her black wool coat and clenched into fists as she huddled into herself, trying to keep warm.
"Fuck this, and fuck that stupid asshole," she swore to herself, her brow furrowing. "Fuck the bus, fuck Valentine's Day, fuck this stupid fucking ice, and fuck winter!" She stopped and looked around suddenly, realizing she had walked half a block too far. "Fuck!" she yelled down the street, listening to the echo reverberate off the buildings and noting a couple far down the street snap around suddenly to look in her direction. Turning around, she paced back to the door of her apartment building and fumbled in her purse, looking for her keys.
"Jesus fucking Christ! You have to be kidding me," she groaned and rubbed her hand over her eyes while moving to the intercom by the door to push in two numbers.
"Um... hello?" a confused voice garbled out of the speaker covered in brown fabric.
"Hey Brian, it's Riley..." she began.
The voice immediately warmed with recognition and exclaimed, "Oh hey, Rye! Forget your keys?"
"Yeah... can you let me in?" Riley sighed and grabbed the handle of the door in anticipation, glaring bitterly at the warm yellow-lit lobby with the tacky maroon carpeting on the other side of the glass.
"Sure thing; see you upstairs in a few," the voice crackled and a muffled click was heard before the familiar buzzing noise. Riley pulled the door open and shuffled in, wiping her feet on the mat and unbuttoning her coat. She walked over to the elevator and angrily punched the car call button with her finger, as if it was the source of all her problems. She unwound her scarf from her neck and let it dangle, smoothing down the deep red cotton shirt underneath the coat. Groaning at the small wine stain that was still on the front of it, she felt her shoulders drop in defeat. Couldn't the day just be over now? Tears pricked the backs of her eyelids as she willed herself to hang onto her composure until she was safely behind her locked apartment door.
The bell rang as the elevator doors opened, allowing the faint smell of musty mildew to emit from the car. Wrinkling her nose as she always did, Riley stepped in and pushed "9", rolling her eyes at the shiny heart tinsel her manager had put around the bulletin board on the wall. Fuck Valentine's Day. She glared at the board while glancing over the memos disinterestedly: selling a sofa for thirty dollars, has anyone seen this cell phone, please remember that recycling is now picked up on Thursdays, blah, blah, blah.
Riley was out of the elevator car as soon as she could fit through the opening and paced down the hallway, turning right to see Brian leaning against the jamb of his open door, smiling at her in bare feet. She looked at him and sighed, stopping in front of him with a frown. "Thanks, Brian," she mumbled, with an outstretched hand.
Brian smiled gently, not giving up her keys just yet. "Bad night?" he asked, moving to lean against the wall beside her door and face his own open one. When Riley didn't answer save for a glare and her outstretched hand not returning to her side, he nodded and looked at her for a moment. She looked frustrated, although very cute as always, he thought to himself. Standing up, he held open both his arms and looked at her with sympathy.
Riley exhaled a long sigh and looked at him sadly for a second, then bit her lower lip and moved into his arms, beginning to sob. Her body shook and Brian hugged her tight, not wanting to let go. Her head tucked under his chin and her hand rubbed at her nose as she sniffled while the other arm wrapped tightly around his waist. He rubbed her back soothingly and petted her beret-covered head, letting her cry. Riley jumped a little at the caresses, but did not stop him as her shaking diminished and the sobs quieted. Tears were still streaming down her face as she stepped back, sniffling and rubbing her eyes as she looked at Brian sadly.
"Fuck, sorry," she stammered as she noticed the wet spots on his navy t-shirt. She covered her face in her hands and apologised again, shaking her head. "I'm so sorry, Brian," she muffled through her hands, "I've just had such a fucking horrible night, and I don't mean to bring you down too." She set down her purse and took off her coat, draping it over one arm.
"Don't apologise, Rye," Brian's voice was soft. He looked at her sad face and streaked makeup, and his heart did the familiar flip-flop it did every time he saw her. "Valentine's Day is shit for us single people."
She let out a shaky, shuddering sigh and nodded, biting her lip. "No shit," she muttered and held her hand out again, looking at her toes. She felt the key ring press into her palm and she closed her hand around it. To her surprise, her hand encased Brian's fingers as well. She shot her gaze up to look at him and saw him look at her seriously.
"Come over? I have hot chocolate and pizza that just got delivered and Monty Python. You can tell me all about it."
Riley looked at him and blinked, realizing what he had said had not been an invitation; it was a request. She looked at her door and looked at him and slowly nodded, forcing a small smile. "Okay, Brian. I'm just going to have a quick wash-up and change into my pyjamas. I'll bring some popcorn over, too," she offered.
Brian grinned and loosed his hand from around the key he still held, depositing it into hers. "Great," he nodded at her to emphasise she had made the correct decision. "I'll leave my door unlocked, so go ahead and walk in, alright?"
Riley nodded at him and leaned in to kiss his cheek. "Thanks," she looked at him and genuinely smiled at him for a moment before picking up her purse again and unlocking her door. "See you in a bit," she said, and closed it quietly.
Brian touched his cheek with his hand and gazed at her door, sighing to himself. He wandered back into his apartment and shut his own door, leaning against it and rubbing his forehead. "Damn, Brian. You've got it bad, don't you?" he muttered to himself and walked to the kitchen, putting the pizza in the oven to keep it warm. Riley's eyes adjusted painfully to the bright light of her hallway as she hung up her coat and put her purse on the floor of her closet. Standing in front of the mirror on the closet door, she looked at herself. Groaning at her makeup, she tried to rub the grey streaks from underneath her eyes away, and realized Brian saw her looking like this. She winced at the thought, and began to rub harder. He didn't seem interested in her, but she could still keep trying, and at least looking her best, couldn't she? Sighing and putting her hands on her hips, she examined her outfit choice. The red cotton shirt she wore had a boat-shaped neckline and its sleeves were short and draped over her upper arms while exposing the top half of her shoulders. She wore a white ribbed tank top underneath for modesty's sake, and a white belt held up her blue jeans. Her black knee-high leather boots gave her an inch extra in height and a black beret sat askew slightly on her head. She puffed out her chest a little, knowing that the tank top peeking over the red cotton was the only thing preventing her breasts from exploding out of the shirt. Turning halfway, she looked at the swell of her bottom, the curve of her hips, and the slight softness of her stomach. Her hair was bunched in a low ponytail and draped over one shoulder, flirting with heart-shaped earrings and the chain of a heart pendent that sat in her cleavage.
She nodded, and thought to herself, 'I do look pretty cute, though, I have to say. Whatever. His loss; he was an asshole, anyway.' Her expression soured a little and she got slightly angry again, unzipping the leather boots from her legs and taking off her hat. She put these away and stepped into her bedroom, pulling clothes off as she went. She dumped the ensemble into her clothing hamper and padded around in her underwear as she took off her jewellery and put it away in her vanity. Sitting down in front of the mirror as she undid the clasps on the earrings, she looked at the swell of her breasts encased by the bra and smiled slightly at what she saw. It was deep crimson with white hearts patterned all over it and lace-edged along the plunging neckline. The soft pad inserts pushed her breasts up and together, and she reached her hand inside the bra to adjust them so that they sat properly in the push-up. Fixing the band so it sat flush with her ribcage, she ran her hands along the curves, pressing softly and stroking the exposed skin. If only her night had turned out better, someone else might have been doing it instead.