If you could put this at the top, in italics, that would be great:
This is a submission for the Valentine's 2010 contest, and is categorized under erotic couplings.
It would be great if you could rate my story after reading, and comments are always read and appreciated!
Thanks!
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Riley grumbled to herself as she walked down the street. The icy sidewalk was slippery, and she had to tread carefully over the slabs of concrete. Her black knee-high boots had only a little grip on the soles, and she cursed herself for not wearing more sensible shoes. Her breath smoked around her face in small puffs of mist highlighted by the street lamps and clung to the navy wool knit that was wrapped around her neck and chin. Her hands dug into the pockets of her black wool coat and clenched into fists as she huddled into herself, trying to keep warm.
"Fuck this, and fuck that stupid asshole," she swore to herself, her brow furrowing. "Fuck the bus, fuck Valentine's Day, fuck this stupid fucking ice, and fuck winter!" She stopped and looked around suddenly, realizing she had walked half a block too far. "Fuck!" she yelled down the street, listening to the echo reverberate off the buildings and noting a couple far down the street snap around suddenly to look in her direction. Turning around, she paced back to the door of her apartment building and fumbled in her purse, looking for her keys.
"Jesus fucking Christ! You have to be kidding me," she groaned and rubbed her hand over her eyes while moving to the intercom by the door to push in two numbers.
"Um... hello?" a confused voice garbled out of the speaker covered in brown fabric.
"Hey Brian, it's Riley..." she began.
The voice immediately warmed with recognition and exclaimed, "Oh hey, Rye! Forget your keys?"
"Yeah... can you let me in?" Riley sighed and grabbed the handle of the door in anticipation, glaring bitterly at the warm yellow-lit lobby with the tacky maroon carpeting on the other side of the glass.
"Sure thing; see you upstairs in a few," the voice crackled and a muffled click was heard before the familiar buzzing noise. Riley pulled the door open and shuffled in, wiping her feet on the mat and unbuttoning her coat. She walked over to the elevator and angrily punched the car call button with her finger, as if it was the source of all her problems. She unwound her scarf from her neck and let it dangle, smoothing down the deep red cotton shirt underneath the coat. Groaning at the small wine stain that was still on the front of it, she felt her shoulders drop in defeat. Couldn't the day just be over now? Tears pricked the backs of her eyelids as she willed herself to hang onto her composure until she was safely behind her locked apartment door.
The bell rang as the elevator doors opened, allowing the faint smell of musty mildew to emit from the car. Wrinkling her nose as she always did, Riley stepped in and pushed "9", rolling her eyes at the shiny heart tinsel her manager had put around the bulletin board on the wall. Fuck Valentine's Day. She glared at the board while glancing over the memos disinterestedly: selling a sofa for thirty dollars, has anyone seen this cell phone, please remember that recycling is now picked up on Thursdays, blah, blah, blah.
Riley was out of the elevator car as soon as she could fit through the opening and paced down the hallway, turning right to see Brian leaning against the jamb of his open door, smiling at her in bare feet. She looked at him and sighed, stopping in front of him with a frown. "Thanks, Brian," she mumbled, with an outstretched hand.
Brian smiled gently, not giving up her keys just yet. "Bad night?" he asked, moving to lean against the wall beside her door and face his own open one. When Riley didn't answer save for a glare and her outstretched hand not returning to her side, he nodded and looked at her for a moment. She looked frustrated, although very cute as always, he thought to himself. Standing up, he held open both his arms and looked at her with sympathy.
Riley exhaled a long sigh and looked at him sadly for a second, then bit her lower lip and moved into his arms, beginning to sob. Her body shook and Brian hugged her tight, not wanting to let go. Her head tucked under his chin and her hand rubbed at her nose as she sniffled while the other arm wrapped tightly around his waist. He rubbed her back soothingly and petted her beret-covered head, letting her cry. Riley jumped a little at the caresses, but did not stop him as her shaking diminished and the sobs quieted. Tears were still streaming down her face as she stepped back, sniffling and rubbing her eyes as she looked at Brian sadly.