After several years of marriage Dana and David had reached a point where they were starting to plan their ultimate future - buy a house, have children, maybe get a dog - become, in other words - the typical suburban family. First on the list was buying a house and either selling or renting out Dana's modest townhouse. The place was fine for one person but somewhat cramped for two. Having more room and a yard for their prospective family became a higher priority. They had the income and savings to afford a modest house and started to search the available listings.
The process quickly became tiring and discouraging. What they could afford was either in an undesirable neighborhood or not the size and quality that they wanted. Both they and the realtors they were using became frustrated, and the house tours dwindled. They were on the verge of giving up, waiting until the market changed, when one of their realtors called Dana at work.
"Dana? It's Cindy from Checkpoint. How are you today?"
"I'm fine," Dana told her, trying to sound positive despite her generally negative attitude toward the house-hunting process.
"Glad to hear that," Cindy said in the usual perky voice of salespeople. "I have a house that I think you will both love - great price, nice town with excellent schools and a reasonable commute for both of you. But we have to move quickly."
"OK," Dana replied. "We can see it tomorrow. Is it listed online so we can preview it?"
"It is," Cindy told her. "Let me text you the address and a link to the listing."
"That sounds great - maybe we can even check it out tonight. If we're interested, I'll text you with a time we can tour it."
"Perfect," Cindy said. "I'm really excited about this one. Hope you two like it!"
Dana texted her husband telling him that Cindy had found yet another house. Their expectations weren't high, but who knew? Maybe this was the one. She was in a meeting when Cindy's text appeared, so she only glanced at her phone when the screen brightened. An hour later she was alone in her office and had time to check the text. She copied the link and emailed it to herself so she could look at the house on her laptop. She copied David on the email as well so he could check it out.
Clicking on the link, she found a picture of a two-story colonial home on a one-acre lot. The house looked nice from the curb shot, with two big maples in front and well-tended landscaping framing the foundation. She liked the light gray siding color, with dark blue window shutters. It was listed at 3,000 square feet, a little larger than they had been looking at, in a nice town with good schools. What surprised her was the $800,000 price; their search so far had taught her that this house, in this town, should cost over $1,000,000. Dana had to wonder what was wrong with it.
She was going through the pictures of the various rooms when another text from Cindy popped up. 'Had a chance to look at the house?' Dana texted back, "Looking at the listing now, looks nice!"
'Any chance you can go through it after work? At this price it should move quickly!'
"I'll check with David and let you know."
Dana texted her husband - unfortunately, he was going to have to work late and wouldn't be available to tour the house. 'No reason you can't go alone. If you like it then I'm sure I will.' he texted. 'OK, I'll do that,' she told him.
Dana called Cindy and arranged to meet her at the house at 6:00 PM. The realtor's schedule was tight, but she had 30 minutes before she had to attend a function at her office. Dana went back to work, organizing the rest of her day so she could drive to the house after work and be there by 6:00. The blouse and skirt she had on would be fine - over-dressed in fact compared to the jeans she usually wore when they toured houses on the weekends.
Leaving work, it took her twenty minutes to reach the house - not too bad a commute, she noted. David's would be about the same. Cindy's car was parked in the street, letting Dana pull into the driveway and park in front of the attached two-car garage. The exterior of the house looked as appealing in person as it had in the listing. Everything was neat and well maintained, no doubt to help with the showings.
Cindy was waiting for her at the front door; after greetings they went in to see what this house had to offer. As they walked through the first floor Dana's impression of the house rose with each room. It had an open concept, so the rooms were spacious and full of light. The kitchen was wonderful - modern and well designed, with lots of countertop and cabinet space. A quick trip to the basement revealed a finished space with lots of room and a full bath. Dana was more excited with each new look.
As they walked to the stairs leading to the second floor Cindy told her that the house had been listed for three months - an estate sale - and that they probably could get it for below the asking price.
"How is that even possible?" Dana asked. "It's a great house in a good location."
"There is an issue," Cindy told her. "I'll tell you about it when we get to the master."
Dana was in suspense as they toured the bedrooms on the second floor. There were four in all, three normal bedrooms and a master. Two of the three shared a full bath with another full bath in the hall. The master covered a third of the one end of the house. It was a large room with a full bath and walk-in closet that extended out over the garage.
"Wow," Dana murmured when she saw the room. "What a great master suite."
"I was hoping you would like it," Cindy said. "This room is the issue with the house."
"How could it be?" Dana asked. "It's fantastic."
"It's not the room," Cindy told her. "It's what happened in the room. A couple lived here until about six months ago, when the husband came home unexpectedly and found his wife and a man he worked with in bed. He killed them both, shot them right in the bed while they were still...well, joined."
"He had a gun that handy?" Dana asked. "That's horrible."
"He was a police officer and was still armed," Cindy explained. "I guess he just snapped. After he was convicted the house went up for sale."
"They were in this bed?" Dana asked.
"No, not this exact bed," Cindy explained. "The frame is the same but everything else has been replaced. And, of course, the carpet has been replaced and the entire room thoroughly cleaned."
"So, no one wants the house once they hear about the murders," Dana ventured.
"Right," Cindy said. "If you can get past that, it's a steal."
While they discussed all of this, the two other people - 'entities' might be more accurate - in the room watched with great interest, unseen and unheard by the living.
"Can you connect with her Beth?" asked the male entity. "Influence her somehow?"
"I don't know John, I'm trying," said the female. "But I have to be subtle; you've seen what happens when I go full-force. They sense something and get nervous."
"I understand," John said. "I'm just tired of being stuck in this room. We have to find a way out. A way to move on."
"Yes, I know," Beth told him. "Let me ease into her mind a little. OK! I feel her consciousness."
"We have to get her alone here," John suggested. "I know - have her need to use the bathroom and forget her purse when she's done."
"I'll try," Beth told him. "But I have to push very gently or she'll sense me." She thought about the need to pee and tried to expand her thoughts onto Dana without forcing them on her. Having tried this only a few times, she was still experimenting.
"Do you mind if I use the bathroom here?" Dana asked.
"Of course not, please do," Cindy told her. "We've seen everything. When you're done, we can go, and you can talk with your husband tonight. Unless you're not interested."
"No, I'm interested," Dana answered. "The whole murder thing is a little creepy, but I can get past it. I think my husband can too."
"That's great!" Cindy said. "This would be a fantastic buy for the two of you."
The entities watched Dana go into the bathroom, encouraged by her response to Beth's 'suggestion' that she do so. Their hopes grew when she walked out without her purse and went downstairs with Cindy.
"You're getting good at this," John told Beth as they watched the pair exit.
"We've tried this a few times - maybe practice makes perfect," Beth offered.
"It's crazy that you can connect with women but I can't," John observed. "But I can feel men's consciousness and you can't. Must be gender related."
"I guess," Beth said, distracted by her thoughts of what would happen next. "She should realize she left the purse when she thinks of her car keys," she guessed. "With luck she will come back alone."
"And then what?" John asked. "This is as far as we've gotten with anyone."
"We discussed this," Beth told him. "We both feel like we should be moving on to something else, but for some reason we can't. The only thing I can think of is that we were killed in the middle of making love. We need to find a way to finish."
"That's great," John said bitterly. "All we need for that are bodies. How do we do that?"