So, while I was working on something I written this short sex scene and I thought, why not put it here and get some feedback. If you have any kind of criticism, please share, I would very much appreciate anything that could help improve my writing.
Anyway, I hope you will enjoy and thanks for reading. ;)
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Entering your room, you lit a candle by your bed and quickly slip into your pajamas. You were just preparing your bed, when you heard the door behind you creak.
Turning around you saw Garret walk into your room and lock the door behind him.
"I am so glad, you..." you started, but with two steps he closed the gap between you and put his finger on your lips.
"Shh... Don't talk." he whispered.
Moving his finger away, he wrapped his right arm around your waist and put his left hand on the back of your neck. Pulling you to him, your soft mounds squashed against his firm chest. Wrapping your arms around his neck and running your fingers through his lush mane, you lifted yourself onto your tippy toes. Your lips brushed against each other's, but you backed off slightly, you didn't give in to the kiss. Not yet. You teased each other, with only the slightest touches, the softest flicks of your tongues. As you teased one another, your breath quickened and the urge to kiss was getting nearly unendurable. Looking into his eyes, you could see he felt the same.
You moaned quietly and finally giving into the lust, you pulled his head down and your lips met. At first you kissed gently, softly nibbling at each other's lips, but soon your kiss grew more heated and parting your lips, you let your tongues explore each other. They twisted and tangled, almost as if they were dancing together. Garret moved forward, gently pushing you in front of him until you felt the rim of the bed hit the back of your legs. Leaning forward and without breaking of the kiss, he laid you down on the bed and climbed on top of you.
You were pinned underneath him and fully at his mercy. Leaving your lips, he kissed you down your jawline towards your neck. You moaned as his hands moved onto your chest and started gently squeezing your breasts. You didn't want to stay behind, so you moved your hands onto his waist and slowly unfastened his pants. Kissing your neck, he moved his hands from your breasts and started unbuttoning your pajama top. Finally opening his belt, you tugged on his pants, puddling them around his knees. In your position you were unable to see his pride, so you started probing with your hand between his legs.
In the meantime he finally unbuttoned your top and opening it, he exposed your chest to the cold air and especially to his gaze and touch. Resuming their kissing journey, his lips left your neck and ventured across your collarbones and up your soft round hills, to the highest peak where a sweet cherry waited to be tasted. Just as his lips enclosed around your nipple, you managed to get a grip on his manhood. You gasped, partly from the pleasure he was giving you and partly from what your hand just found. You tried to encircle it's girth with your fingers but it was too thick. Slowly moving your fingers along its length you felt as if it was never ending but eventually, you brushed over its head.
You moaned as he suddenly gently bit your nipple, sending a shiver down your spine. Satisfied with the taste of your cherry, his lips resumed their trip down your body again. He kissed you down your chest bone, across your flat tummy, stopping just for a second at your bellybutton to explore it with his tongue. As he moved lower, his body moved with him and you groaned as the comfortable, warm feeling, slipped from your hand, leaving only sticky precum smeared on your palm. Lifting yourself up onto your elbows you watched as Garret, with one tug, pulled off your pajamas pants, uncovering your most intimate region.
With each kiss he moved closer to you nether regions which in turn was sending more and more pleasure through your body. He kissed you across your lower abdomen and through your bushy pubic forest, in middle of which he found another cherry, this one even sweeter. He gently flicked your clitoris with his tongue, forcing you to squirm and fall off of your elbows. Your breathing was shallow and fast, your heart was beating as if it was about to explode and you felt intense pleasure running through your body. But it wasn't enough, you wanted more and he was about to give you what you craved. Getting off of the bed he moved your bottom closer to the edge of the bed and lifted it, hooking your legs over his shoulders. He then continued to burrow his face into your crotch, his tongue eagerly lapping at the delicious nectar that was extensively streaming out of your slit. Reaching around your leg, he placed his thumb onto your clitoris and started rubbing it in circular motion.
You squirmed and screamed in ecstasy as you felt your first orgasm rush through your body. Your toes curled and your legs twitched, involuntarily clutching at his head, but he didn't even flinch and longingly continued to eat you out, fueling your climax further. After several seconds, your body finally seazed writhing and you collapsed onto the bed, breathing heavily. You've hardly even started and you've already experienced one of the most powerful orgasms in your life. You couldn't even imagine what could be next.
Letting go of your legs, Garret stood up and stripped of his shirt, revealing his muscular body, glistening in the dim light of the candle. As you watched him stand there in front of you, your gaze drifted lower, and you finally got to see his pride. You gasped as you watched the stiff monster sway up and down simultaneously with his breathing. Biting your lower lip, you lifted your gaze and met with his. One corner of his mouth moved into a half smile as he stepped forward. Getting on all four, he crawled over your body, like a beast ready to finish its prey off. Teasingly, you moved backwards, until your head bumped into the headboard. You giggled as he caught up with you and gently kissed your forehead. Then he kissed you nose, and your cheek, and your other cheek, until finally, your lips met again. Throwing your arm around his neck, you lifted your head, bringing him into a passionate kiss. Parting your lips your let your tongue again slip into his mouth and entangle with his. You felt his cock bump into your tummy and reaching out your hand, you gripped it firmly. You started to slowly stroke along its length, relishing its warm and stiff feel against your soft palm. Not wanting to stay behind, he moved one hand onto your chest and started thoroughly squeezing one of your breasts while he caressed your cheek with his other hand.
Breaking the kiss, you moved your head back and inhaled sharply. You opened your mouth to say something, but before you could, Garret put his finger between your lips and you instinctively started sucking on it. You felt desperate, you had enough of the teasing, you wanted to feel him inside you. You wanted him to finally fuck you and fuck you hard.