As always, I appreciate any and all constructive feedback.
Let me know what you liked and what didn't work.
(though I'd also appreciate any votes you want to give as I've entered this in the 2017 Halloween story contest)
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"Who the hell is Lady Blackhawk?" Amanda asked holding up a black boot.
"She's cute and badass, what else matters?" Claire told her friend, handing her the other boot.
"You said you had a superhero costume I could borrow!" Amanda said, clearly unimpressed.
"She is a superhero!" Claire assured her, handing her friend a dark blue skirt.
"But... she doesn't even wear a mask!" Amanda complained.
"Do you want to come to the Halloween party or not?" Claire asked.
Both women were in their second year of college, though the brunette Amanda had only recently gotten to know Claire and her friends in an "acting for nonmajors" class. She had a lot of fun with them during a masks assignment the week before, and they invited her out for drinks after class. It went well. So well that they asked her to join their ensemble at a Halloween costume party that weekend.
Claire and a couple of the other girls were cosplayers and had coordinated their costumes to be a team of female superheroes. She had offered Amanda the use of one of her older costumes, one she had worn to a comic convention a few years back, a lesser known character that, as luck would have it, was on the team.
"Not all superheroes wear masks, y'know," Claire explained as she handed her friend a tunic with a bird logo on it. Presumably the Blackhawk part of Lady Blackhawk.
"But..." Amanda tried to articulate her objection but couldn't find the words.
Just taking the acting class had been a pretty bold move for the usually timid coed. Her now ex-boyfriend had encouraged her to sign up, to get her out of her shell a bit more. Agreeing to dress up in public had been another big step for Amanda, but Claire didn't know any of this. She assumed Amanda was as extroverted as she was and couldn't understand what the issue was.
Amanda had been planning on wearing a mask. She had been counting on it in fact, as she had discovered how freeing it was to wear one. She had been able to get through an entire monologue in front of 30 people behind the safety of a Greek mask. She had thought a Halloween party would enable her to "get out there" like everyone kept telling her to do, while giving her a sense of security or at least anonymity.
"What powers does she have?" Amanda asked.
"She blonde and hot," Claire said, handing her a blonde wig and a hat. "Beyond that, I really don't know."
"Why don't I just be Catwoman," Amanda suggested quickly. She had cat ears from last Halloween when her ex had dragged her to one of his buddy's parties. If she combined that with a mask and some black clothes it wouldn't be a great costume but it would be passable.
"What? No. Betsy and I worked hard on this outfit for you." Claire said, slightly offended. Amanda was 5 foot ten, much taller than she was so Betsy and Claire had spent the previous evening altering the outfit so it would fit their tall new friend. "Besides, Catwoman wouldn't fit in. We're the Birds of Prey."
"You say that as if I should know what that means." Amanda countered.
"It's a group, a team of kickass women," Claire explained. "It doesn't really matter, you're going to look amazing."
"But who's even heard of Lady Blackhawk? What I'm going to look like, is an idiot." Amanda was genuinely worried her outfit would mean as little to everyone else as it did to her. "Why don't I go as Wonder Woman. I mean, my hair is black anyway."
"Oh no. I'm not gonna go through that again. 6 girls all arguing who gets to be Wonder Woman and who gets to be Supergirl." Claire told her, "Nope. Not going to happen. It's this or nothing. I don't have another costume that will fit you."
"But who will even know who I am?"
"Who knows half the costumes people wear? We'll know, and the guys at the party will just love how hot you look, regardless of which character you are."
Amanda pondered that. It made sense, but she just wasn't totally convinced. "Maybe if I knew more about the character."
"Great idea, take the outfit, Google it, be ready for the weekend. I have to get to class" Claire pushed her friend out of her dorm room and into the hallway of the residence. As Claire headed off to her physics class, Amanda pulled out her phone and still holding the various bits of the costume, awkwardly started looking up "L-A-D-Y B-L-A-C-K..."
A long list of entries came up, the first being Wikipedia. The images she saw confirmed she was reading about the right character, but the text referred to three different ones. One was called Zinda!
What kind of a name is that?
Amanda thought. This comic book stuff didn't make any sense to her. She put her phone away and tried to think of someone she could just ask. And then It hit her. Mitch! She knew a guy who lived in this residence that read comics. He could probably explain this.
She found the stairs and made her way up a flight trying to recall which room was his. She had met him during frosh week the previous year and had hung out with a couple of times in a group on various pub nights. One had begun with "pre-drinks" in his room, so she was relatively confident she could find it.
A few moments later, she knocked on a door she was fairly certain was his. An overweight "not Mitch" answered the door and eyed her up and down. Her legs were covered by her jeans, but he was clearly impressed by the way her t-shirt curved at her chest. "Hell-o." He exclaimed.
"Um, Sorry. I'm looking for Mitch. Do you know him by chance?" She asked.
"Yeah. Hang on." Not Mitch stepped past her and knocked on the next door over.
"What?" Mitch yelled from inside.
"Make yourself pretty, you have a visitor." Not Mitch yelled as he opened the door. Amanda looked in to see Mitch watching TV, using his bed as a couch, table and general hang out spot, as only a college student could.
He looked up and immediately tried to straighten up the messy blankets beneath him before he stood up. "Amanda? What are, How are you?"
"You read comic books, right? Have you got a second to answer a couple of questions.?" She asked.
"Sure, yeah, come on in." he invited her. Amanda stepped inside and turned to Not Mitch, "Thanks."
Not Mitch nodded and began to close the door to give the pair some privacy. Before the door was completely closed and while Amanda's back was to him, he made eye contact with Mitch and mouthed the words, "Oh My God."