This is my first story, it is based entirely on fiction, please give me any feedback.
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The sun was a burning orb rising sedately from the blue waters of the pacific, its rays banishing the darkness of another balmy summer night and illuminating the sandy shore and its gently rolling waves. On that shore, bathed in the first light of day strolled two figures hand in hand. One was a tall, somewhat lanky blonde man decked out in casual loose fitting cargo pants and T-shirt, two jumpers gripped in one hand, now discarded by both in favor of the suns warmth. The second figure was slightly shorter, requiring tip-toes to see eye-to-eye with the man, not that either cared in the slightest about the discrepancy. The golden light highlighted the golden curls and sparkling blue eyes of a beautiful young woman. Her large firm breasts encased in a tight, white, strapless top that drew the eye in a way even more compelling than the dawn. Her long slim legs moved gracefully over the sand, their tops encased in a short black skirt that only hinted and the treasures that it encased.
It is to my everlasting gratitude that the man described was myself; my companion on that fine morning was my wonderful friend Ashley. Words do no justice to her beauty, or the depth of her character. We had only met online several months before, yet had immediately found in each other a person who would be there for us when we needed them most. Neither of us felt ready for a long-term serious relationship at present so we contented ourselves to being great friends.
We came to be together on that secluded beach on that gorgeous morning after a conversation the previous evening that neither of us had taken the time to really appreciate a good sunrise for several years, always finding ourselves too wrapped up in our busy lives to make the effort. Thus we found ourselves on the beach, sand between our toes with not another soul in sight. As we walked along the shore we talked of this and that, or allowed conversation to lapse into comfortable silence as we both admired the beauty of nature.
It was as we neared the end of our beach, where the sand disappears into rocks that Ash turned to me. "You know Karl, this place is so romantic, I feel all tingly inside. Wouldn't it be and experience to fuck each others brains out, right here, right now!" Now I can tell you, I've had a deep felt yearning for Ashley from the moment I laid eyes upon her tremendous body, but it was her mind that drew me in, so I pushed my lustful thoughts aside and focused on her as a person. Hearing those coarse words emitted from her usually polite mouth stunned me to the core! I was barely able to nod and stutter and barely audible "yes" in answer. Other parts of my body were not nearly so hampered, my penis became instantly as hard as the rocks strewn amongst the sand around us, and strained against my pants in a way that was immediately noticeable to Ash. With a smile that resembled the Cheshire cat's she led me into the rocks with an unspoken promise of finding wonderland.
Crossing several sets of boulders we found ourselves in a delightful little den of smooth stones enclosed by weathered rock formations, the open side facing the glorious ocean and the still climbing sun. I was given very little time to appreciate my surroundings as Ash turned and wrapped her arms around my neck, pulled me down and kissed me full on the lips, her full boobs pressing against my chest as her lips met mine. With only a seconds hesitation I dropped our jumpers and wrapped my arms around her, pulling her body tight against mine. Her dainty tongue flicked across my lips only to be met by my own in a wonderful duel of pleasure. With our tongue entwined I slipped my hands down onto her shapely ass, eliciting a slight moan from her as I squeezed her smooth cheeks through her skirt, my hard cock pressing against her crotch through our clothing.