This is my first go at writing an erotic story. I hope you enjoy reading it and would appreciate any advice you can offer on my style of writing. I plan to write at least one more part, but possibly another if the story leads that way!
I thought it might be interesting to write from the perspective of both characters but whether I will do that in part 2, I am not sure! Let me know what you think!
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Rob's Story
She had always been quite simply, the girl next door. Just there, just a kid, just irrelevant. Always the tomboy with a ball in her hands. Quite an irritant really. But that was until that kid became a woman.
I hardly noticed she was there over the last few years since we had moved into Half Acre, the house I built next door to her family. Occasionally she would appear at our door to ask for the return of her ball or anything else she had fired into our garden. And, as we couldn't have kids of our own, Chloe, my wife, was always happy to offer to babysit Danielle and her elder sister, Ellie, during their younger years. Now they were older we rarely saw them. Occasionally I would see them in their garden, going out in the car with their parents or perhaps walking the dog. But one fateful afternoon she turned up at my door.
I had just returned from a meeting in town and was keen to do some follow up work in my study. Suddenly a loud knocking shattered my concentration. Who the hell could that be? I stormed to the front door, ready to tell some cold caller or whoever to piss off!
"Yes?" I bellowed. "Oh, Dani it's you." she handed me a large parcel.
"Sorry to disturb you Rob, er Mr Wright, but mum asked me to bring this round for Chloe."
Shocked and almost speechless I couldn't believe the change in her. She had grown into a stunning young woman. She was tall and slim, a beautiful face with amazing blue eyes and long shining blonde hair, but most of all, her tits! OMG those tits, they were huge. I had to drag my eyes from them and keep them focused on her face.
"Sorry Dani, I hardly recognised you," I stuttered "you've grown so much." Shit!
Not what I meant to say. "I mean you look so grown up now," I added. "Look, Chloe is still at work at the moment, but do you want to come in for a drink - tea or something?" She hesitated at first but then said she would, but just a quick one.
As I led her into the kitchen, it occurred to me that maybe this was not the best of ideas. The atmosphere was highly charged with sexual tension between us; clearly we both felt mutual attraction and I tried hard to focus on something other than those amazing tits, but how? She had sat herself at the breakfast bar and they were right in front of me again. Her nipples poked hard and erect through the tight fabric of the top she was wearing. How had this young woman been given such huge breasts? They must have been at least a DD++! She certainly hadn't inherited them from her mother. Before I could stop myself I started, "How large are ... I mean, how old are you now?" I stumbled. For God's sake, get a grip! I was behaving like a randy young teenager!
She told me she had now turned eighteen and would hopefully be leaving for uni later in the year. We talked for about an hour, only interrupted once when I had to excuse myself for five minutes to sort the ever growing bulge in my jeans which I hoped she hadn't noticed. I didn't want her to think I was some old creep living next door. After all, I was nearly fifty now and probably considered pretty old by someone of her age.
I was almost thankful when the front door opened. Chloe had at last come to my rescue. We all chatted a little longer until Dani said she should go. Feeling a little disappointed in some respects, but relieved in others, I walked her to the door to show her out. Then it happened. She turned to say goodbye and suddenly placed her sensual soft lips on mine for what seemed ages; my heart was pounding, I was both shocked and excited. I really wanted to be able to push my tongue in her mouth, pin her to the wall and take hold of those huge soft tits with my hands, to squeeze and caress them. Instead I gently pushed her away and calmly said goodbye, closing the door behind me. Breathless, I stood still to recover for a while, heat rising from my very stiff cock.
Suddenly Chloe appeared. "You ok?" She asked suspiciously.
"Yeah, why?" I answered, maybe a little too defensively.
"You just look kinda hot and bothered. Not surprising though. She's gorgeous now isn't she? But did you notice the size of those boobs and that rather inappropriate top she was wearing? I'm surprised Helen let's her go out like that!"
"Can't say I noticed." I lied.
After that little episode I tried to keep a low profile. I secretly watched from a distance. I would catch the odd glimpse from my window, her perfect face with those generous lips. Her stunning long golden hair swinging behind her. Her gorgeous shapely ass and long legs and of course those beautiful tits that bounced as she walked. Eventually though, it all came to an end. She had gone; finally packed off to Scotland for 3 years at University. Life seemed tedious without her around but at least I was now able to concentrate on my designs. I was trying to draw visuals of a very high tech house, but the project hadn't been progressing too well with so much distraction. And perhaps it was for the best in other ways. I knew Helen and Greg, and certainly Chloe would never speak to me again if I went near her.
Over the following year, Chloe would give me all the gossip about Dani and Ellie. I pretended to take no interest, but I was desperate for any news of her. Was she enjoying uni life? Did she have a boyfriend? I felt jealous at the thought of some spotty teenager fucking her, kissing those lips, sucking those nipples. I tried, but I couldn't get her out of my mind. Then the invitation arrived.
"Ellie turns 21! Please celebrate with us on Saturday 28th July at Landon House, 7.30pm until early hours! RSVP Helen & Greg."
"We won't be able to go." I told Chloe.
"Why not?" She asked, "we're not away. They always throw great parties and after all, it is Ellie's 21st. I can't believe she's that age already. We have to go."
My senses told me that seeing her up close again could lead to something more between us and potential trouble for the future. I tried arguing with her but she was having none of it, so it seemed I would just have to prepare myself to see Dani, who I hadn't spoken to in well over a year.
"I'm really looking forward to this evening." She said. Chloe looked lovely in a silver grey satin dress. She still had a good figure for a woman of her age. Not voluptuous like Dani, but still slim and elegant with firm small breasts. "Let's open a bottle of champagne before we go."
I agreed as I was in need of a drink; dutch courage! By the time we left the house, hand in hand, we had consumed the bottle between us and were both pretty merry!
"Happy Birthday and many congratulations!" I wished Ellie when she greeted us at the door.