A note to the reader.
Throughout my teens and adult life, I have been a ferocious reader of fantasy and sci-fi. It never occurred to me I might have an idea or two to put to paper.
Now retired and looking for a hobby, I went back to school to learn what I should have learned the first go around in my early highschool days, grammar.
What I haven't succeeded in yet is dialoguing and the art of not making multiple characters sound the same.
This is an older "thriller" class project revamped for the erotica aspect.
Feel free to leave any positive or negative comments. I'm here to improve.
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I was relishing the moist, sloppy suction associated with receiving a blow job. As she skillfully worked her mouth on my erection, occasionally reaching the back of her throat, her fingers sensually massaged my balls. The vixen in my lap then took her firm, textured tongue, sliding it up from my scrotum slowly along the underbelly to flick the frenulum back and forth with the tip. The wet slurping noise coming from my companion seemed loud within the confines of the vehicle.
As her fingers of the other hand are not fully encircling the base of my cock, it is enough to squeeze, trapping the blood flow causing the veins of my manhood to pop out. My partner had me edging ever closer to a satisfied eruption, not making it easy to concentrate on the task at hand as I gripped the steering wheel of the SUV, knuckles turning white.
"Fuck Lin-linda. You need to stop. I can't see straight."
In that instant. The timing was unimaginable. The radio chirped, cutting me off in mid thought. A voice on the other end came through the speakers of the vehicle, causing both of us to be jolted. "Mobile one, any activity?"
We did not lose the absurdness of that question between us as I laughed, causing my swollen cock to bounce around in the mouth of my partner. "Mobile one. We need an update."
Suddenly, Linda sat up and released the flesh toy from her mouth. Strands of saliva connected us as she grabbed the mic and pressed the transmission button. Pausing momentarily for the audible chirping of the encryption before answering.
"Command, mobile one, it is quiet at our end. We've had no traffic."
"Roger, continue your observation."
Linda threw the mic down with a smile on her face, then giggled while taking a moment to clean the saliva from the corner of her mouth and chin. "I bet the asshole did that on purpose."
"I hope not. That means he knows about us, and knows we are violating several company HR policies and right now, I'm kinda liking this gig."
I cracked the window to let the vehicle's cabin air out, the aroma our combined sexual arousal had overcome the rental's new car smell. As I turned in the driver's seat, I watched Linda pulling her raven black hair tight while redoing her ponytail. It had come loose while grabbing it while she worked her mouth along my cock. Shifting my focus back to my once proud member, which had diminished to the extent that I could tuck it back into my jeans, still damp from the plentiful amount of saliva. Getting the mixture of my pre-cum and her slobber on my hand, I teasingly reached over to wipe it off on Linda's pant leg.
Slapping my hand away, "dickhead." She said. "I guess I'm finished playing with your joystick?"
"Yeah, Jackson kinda put the fire out. It's alright just that much more to do to you later once this shift has ended."
Linda raised up out of the seat, attempting to pull her tight jeans down out of her crouch. "Promises, promises. I've been leaking because I'm turned on so badly, and it has given me swamp ass. Not to mention, I am also sore."
While I continued to gaze at Linda as she straightened herself up, it suddenly struck me how impressive her profile appeared in the dim lighting from the street lights filtering through the windshield. Loose strands of her hair hooked behind the ear. Turning back towards me, her blue eyes unnaturally bright.
"What? Do I still have shit on my face?" Using the back of her hand to brush across her mouth.
Leaning over, I cradled my hand on the back of her neck, softly guiding her towards me, and pressed a kiss onto her lips, experiencing the salty essence of our embrace. She didn't resist, her own passion matching my intensity. Breaking the kiss, pulling back to look at her, still trying to understand why Linda could bring out the most primal part of me. Something I normally have excellent control over.
"No, just admiring the different parts of you."
"Ah, you're going to make me all ruddy in the face."
We had settled in for our last hour of our shift, barely managing to keep our hands off each other and conversation light, when the radio came alive again. "Mobile one, this is mobile two. We have eyes on the residence if you two want to head back to the house."
The 'house' meaning a high end hotel the company had provided for the team to operate out of this past week.
"Two Roger, thanks, nothing to pass on. The property has been dark, and street traffic light. Thermals haven't picked up any signature either." Linda said.
"One, this is command." Jackson
said inserting himself into the conversation.
"Send it."
"Team meeting at zero nine thirty. Be sure to show up bright eyed and bushy tail."
"Wilco."
I pushed the ignition button, listening as the engine turned over. I put it in gear and eased out slowly onto an empty street, only turning on the headlights several meters down the street. We haven't gone a block when Linda scooted over and began unbuttoning my jeans again, set on finishing the job she started.
Grinning devilishly from my lap. "No matter how hard I try, I cannot understand what it is about this thing in your pants that turns me into a wanton slut."
During the train up, Linda and I were introduced by the company to the newly formed group as their sniper team. Since I was new to the PM contracting world, I had no reputation to rely on, which meant I had to prove my skill set. They assigned Linda to evaluate my abilities. We had spent a week at a known distance range dialing our rifles in taking turns spotting for each other. A way to put me through my paces to evaluate how I could handle a given scenario. Linda had already established her reputation with the company. Many on the team had already worked with her and trusted her capabilities. With a background rooted in Olympic shooting, she honed her long distance skills by accompanying her father on hunting trips across different mountain tops, where he operated a hunting guide service. A revealing story she had retold during one of our long nights of surveillance. An offer to enter the world of private contracting lured her away after a short stretch on a big city SWAT team.
Upon finishing my fourth deployment to Afghanistan, I made the choice to not reenlist, as my last kill as a sniper was a jihadi we observed while he was planting roadside IEDs. Opting to hit the books and go back to college. A friend found me six months later nursing a beer and a spread of textbooks at an off campus bar, so a few more rounds on his dime convinced me to try the more lucrative civilized playground for out of work military types. Ultimately finding myself once again positioned behind a scope, this time experiencing the delight of hearing my teammate's alluring voice guide my shots. Neither of us expected, let alone planned on becoming romantically involved, despite clearly written policies outlining the consequences. We were playing a risky game.
Now here we are one in the morning climbing the back stairs of our hotel to get to our rooms not wanting to walk through the main lobby, being treated with a view of a tight ass moving around inside Linda's jeans, causing my dick to awaken and begin taking up space in the crouch of my pants.
After reaching the floor to our rooms, her room situated three doors down from mine. "Yours or mine?"