A note to the reader.
Throughout my teens and adult life, I have been a ferocious reader of fantasy and sci-fi. It never occurred to me I might have an idea or two to put to paper.
Now retired and looking for a hobby, I went back to school to learn what I should have learned the first go around in my early highschool days, grammar.
What I haven't succeeded in yet is dialoguing and the art of not making multiple characters sound the same.
This is an older "thriller" class project revamped for the erotica aspect.
Feel free to leave any positive or negative comments. I'm here to improve.
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I was relishing the moist, sloppy suction associated with receiving a blow job. As she skillfully worked her mouth on my erection, occasionally reaching the back of her throat, her fingers sensually massaged my balls. The vixen in my lap then took her firm, textured tongue, sliding it up from my scrotum slowly along the underbelly to flick the frenulum back and forth with the tip. The wet slurping noise coming from my companion seemed loud within the confines of the vehicle.
As her fingers of the other hand are not fully encircling the base of my cock, it is enough to squeeze, trapping the blood flow causing the veins of my manhood to pop out. My partner had me edging ever closer to a satisfied eruption, not making it easy to concentrate on the task at hand as I gripped the steering wheel of the SUV, knuckles turning white.
"Fuck Lin-linda. You need to stop. I can't see straight."
In that instant. The timing was unimaginable. The radio chirped, cutting me off in mid thought. A voice on the other end came through the speakers of the vehicle, causing both of us to be jolted. "Mobile one, any activity?"
We did not lose the absurdness of that question between us as I laughed, causing my swollen cock to bounce around in the mouth of my partner. "Mobile one. We need an update."
Suddenly, Linda sat up and released the flesh toy from her mouth. Strands of saliva connected us as she grabbed the mic and pressed the transmission button. Pausing momentarily for the audible chirping of the encryption before answering.
"Command, mobile one, it is quiet at our end. We've had no traffic."
"Roger, continue your observation."
Linda threw the mic down with a smile on her face, then giggled while taking a moment to clean the saliva from the corner of her mouth and chin. "I bet the asshole did that on purpose."
"I hope not. That means he knows about us, and knows we are violating several company HR policies and right now, I'm kinda liking this gig."
I cracked the window to let the vehicle's cabin air out, the aroma our combined sexual arousal had overcome the rental's new car smell. As I turned in the driver's seat, I watched Linda pulling her raven black hair tight while redoing her ponytail. It had come loose while grabbing it while she worked her mouth along my cock. Shifting my focus back to my once proud member, which had diminished to the extent that I could tuck it back into my jeans, still damp from the plentiful amount of saliva. Getting the mixture of my pre-cum and her slobber on my hand, I teasingly reached over to wipe it off on Linda's pant leg.
Slapping my hand away, "dickhead." She said. "I guess I'm finished playing with your joystick?"
"Yeah, Jackson kinda put the fire out. It's alright just that much more to do to you later once this shift has ended."
Linda raised up out of the seat, attempting to pull her tight jeans down out of her crouch. "Promises, promises. I've been leaking because I'm turned on so badly, and it has given me swamp ass. Not to mention, I am also sore."
While I continued to gaze at Linda as she straightened herself up, it suddenly struck me how impressive her profile appeared in the dim lighting from the street lights filtering through the windshield. Loose strands of her hair hooked behind the ear. Turning back towards me, her blue eyes unnaturally bright.
"What? Do I still have shit on my face?" Using the back of her hand to brush across her mouth.
Leaning over, I cradled my hand on the back of her neck, softly guiding her towards me, and pressed a kiss onto her lips, experiencing the salty essence of our embrace. She didn't resist, her own passion matching my intensity. Breaking the kiss, pulling back to look at her, still trying to understand why Linda could bring out the most primal part of me. Something I normally have excellent control over.
"No, just admiring the different parts of you."
"Ah, you're going to make me all ruddy in the face."
We had settled in for our last hour of our shift, barely managing to keep our hands off each other and conversation light, when the radio came alive again. "Mobile one, this is mobile two. We have eyes on the residence if you two want to head back to the house."