The best laid plans, and all that crap - my ending to edrider73's story Cheating Wives Always Slip Up
http://www.literotica.com/s/cheating-wives-always-slip-up
edrider73 is a master storyteller. There's no denying it. Nobody currently writing on Lit has the same ability to drive a reader absolutely crazy. He'll make you want to scream at the screen, or cringe and turn away. The volume of his comments is a testimony to his ability.
Cheating Wives Always Slip Up is another one of those. At the end, you wonder just how overboard a spouse can go with revenge, and still claim to love someone. At least it makes me wonder, and when I wonder, I write.
Thanks to edrider73, for generously providing permission to work with his stories.
I like finishing stories. I guess I'm a little weird. Sometimes they are stories that have been abandoned. Others are open invitations. In a case like this, the author is still active, but I felt the urge to write my own completion, and have received permission to do so from the Author.
When offered the opportunity, I'll give you my idea of an ending. Fair warning though, I don't write about total wimps. May not be BTB, all nuclear and shit, but no voluntary cucks, or whiny simpering wimps.
Some of you won't like my endings. That's fair enough. I'm happy to hear your reasons. This is only one author's idea of a fitting resolution. You're welcome to try your hand at writing your own. I hope you enjoy this one.
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"Is it my turn to talk yet? You've run on at the mouth for ten minutes now, without giving me a single chance to respond. You restrained me in my own bed, through trickery and deceit. You've already struck me three times, without my permission. You promised me nothing would be non-consensual or reluctant, that you wouldn't try to get me to do anything I didn't want to, and that you'd stop if I showed any reluctance, and yes you lied. Repeatedly. You do that a lot. You've proven yourself to be a psychotic, evil bitch, and if you want to walk out go right ahead. I'll see you in court, or you can listen to the truth."
She was fuming. "That's not the deal. You know what you've got coming. You need to lay down on that bed and receive your punishment. Only then will I allow you to tell me your
story
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"Fine. Pack your shit and leave. I'll see you in court."
That was the last thing she'd expected. She thought for sure he'd go along with her plan. He had cheated, and she damn well knew it. He deserved everything he had coming. Maureen glared at him, trying to figure out if he was bluffing. It sure as hell didn't look like it.
She was taking too long to make up her mind, and he stood up. "More lies, I guess. As if your lying should come as a surprise at this point. You said you'd leave if I so chose. I did. Now get your ass out of this house. I'll even get your suitcase out of the garage."
Shit. He was ruining everything. "I'll listen. I doubt you'll be able to say anything that will convince me that what I've learned is false, but it's true, I've had the floor all this time, so you should have a chance to speak. It's only fair that you should know, you're only making this worse for yourself."
He sat back down and grimaced as his lacerated ass hit the bed. "Before we speak, we need to balance things here. To be totally fair, which you seem to find so important, I need to give you three strokes of the cane. Before you get indignant and claim that your 'consultant', your dominatrix, already gave you one, let me start by saying I don't believe you. You've already proven yourself a liar, repeatedly, and I think this is just another one. Luckily for you, because if she did, if you laid down with another woman, naked, and let her punish you, you've already confessed cheating on me, and we're wasting our time. If you weren't naked with her, then you've hardly felt what you did to me, and even if, heaven forbid, you did receive one stroke, I received three.
"Furthermore, let me make one thing perfectly clear. If you don't go along with this, I'll call the police, and have you locked up and get a restraining order for unlawful restraint and domestic abuse. This is not an idle threat, and I believe the evidence speaks for itself. So what will it be Maureen? Are you a cheater? Will you accept three strokes of the cane? I will only accept one of two answers, yes or no. If yes, I will restrain you as you did me, and we will begin. If the answer is no, I will dial 911 now, and you can start packing."
He took his phone in hand, and started the recording function. He was not going to let her turn the tables on him. He would get her assent recorded before he touched her.
She looked nervous, as her carefully made plans slowly fell apart. "One stroke," she said.
"Now you're simply being ridiculous. You gave me three. You say it was by accident, because you were nervous, but you don't swing a rattan cane with all your might by accident. Did you or did you not tie me down without my consent and hit me three times, purposely targeting my asshole and balls, until I passed out?"
She responded quickly. "I already explained that Herb. You needed to understand the severity of your punishment so you could make an informed decision."
"So if I decided to walk, I got three strokes for nothing? Because you wanted to?"
"I was convinced you'd do the right thing for us, for our marriage, for the children we'll have. That was the only reason."
"Fair enough, although I'm certain you're lying to me. Again, will you take three strokes, Maureen, for the same reasons? For that, and for restraining me, lying to me, and giving me three without my permission?"
Once again she was silent. "Two strokes, and not between my legs. I've already had that done to me."
"I don't believe you. I've seen no evidence in the last few weeks of the pain you'd be in if that had happened to you. If you did cheat on me, lying naked with a strange woman, a dominatrix by your own admission, and if she did hit you with the cane, I don't believe she did it as hard as you did just now. I'd have seen evidence of it."
"She was counseling me. I didn't cheat with her. I will not accept that definition."
Herb stood. "Alright, you said she counseled you to help you understand how I'd feel if you cheated. Let's say I went to a dominatrix. I got naked, and let her abuse my body, would you be happy with that situation? Or would you consider that cheating? You told me that you'd give me nothing but the truth when this started. You've already lied to me numerous times. No more lies. How would you feel if I did that?"
There was no denying it. If he had done such a thing, she would have been livid. "I would have been extremely angry with you, but it's not the same. I didn't do it with a man, I did it with a woman. She was a professional."
"A professional therapist? A degreed psychologist, or social worker?" he asked.
"No, a professional dominatrix, I explained that."