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Catching Fire Pt 10

Catching Fire Pt 10

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Author's Foreword: This series has themes of romance, sex, friendship, humor, safe and consensual BDSM, and above all, intimacy and the concept of memory. Any resemblance to real people or events is coincidental. I want you, reader, to come away with more empathy, appreciation, and joy for yourself and others than you began. As I did when writing this.

Note on Part 10:

I accidentally wrote the end of this series, but for a lot of reasons I wasn't ready for that. There's more to tell on the way there. Not a lot, but enough. So I plucked what I needed, shelved the rest, and wrote this part instead.

If you want a refresher on where Luke and Erin are and what happened the first day at the cabin, have a look at Part 07. Also, while both Part 07 and Part 10 have a little more BDSM and power role play than usual, I've tried to make it clear that it's between two happy and consenting people who care about each other. It takes a little time to build. And we see Luke as he is today, briefly.

I hope you enjoy it! As always, your comments, ratings, and follows encourage me to keep writing in the little free time I have, and to do as good of a job with it as I can.

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***Mid-Summer***

For distance, the hike up to the alpine meadow above the rental cabin wasn't a long one, but the incline had made it a real leg-burner. The small, relatively flat place was a patchwork of grasses, lichen, and heather, covered in a riot of small wildflowers and drifting butterflies. Erin immediately declared it perfect and I gratefully dropped my pack. Naturally, I was the one carrying everything. She spread out the large picnic blanket and a few other things while I took off my sweat-soaked shirt and laid it over a low shrub to dry, then went walking around to look at it all.

The sun was warm on my back and shoulders, and the small cotton-ball clouds that scooted in front of it for a few seconds at a time cooled me down just enough that I was glad when they moved on. I looked back at where Erin had flopped down and could only make out her breeze-dancing hair peeking over the side of my backpack. A thought occurred to me, and I started hunting around to make a small bouquet.

One or two flowers here, one or two there. Not too many to hurt anything or steal too much from the little rodents that made hay in the short summer for a long winter. A piece of grass to tie it together. The flowers looked kind of limp and spindly already, but what did I know about making stuff like that?

You sap, I thought as I walked back to Erin, what are you, some 'young lover' in a story?

Maybe, I reflected, but so what? I was young, after all, and I'd never gathered wildflowers for a 'lover' before. Besides, it felt... right, somehow. At the very least, if I was already laughing at myself it would definitely get a laugh out of her. When I got back to Erin, I paused to admire the view.

She was sunbathing face-up in the nude, the bikini lines on her peach-toned skin stark yet endearing, her full-body covering of freckles looking like another carpet of wildflowers to me. Without opening her eyes, she smiled at hearing my wolf-whistle.

"What?" she murmured drowsily at me, "Never seen a girl get some vitamin D before?"

"I thought you got plenty of that last night," I teased, "Not that I'm complaining about you getting some more right now. You are absolutely... lovely."

"Mmm," she agreed, still dozing, "I certainly feel lovely right now. Where've you been?"

"Making a bouquet for you," I said, placing the flowers into her open hand. She cracked one eye open and shaded her face with her other hand, then beamed and sat up to look at it.

"Very pretty," she said, beckoning me over for a kiss, "Thank you, Luke."

"You're welcome." She paused to take a good look at the rest of me.

"That's one hell of a farmer's tan," she laughed, "Pretty sure you're blinding people on the space station. Strip and lay down here with me for a while."

"A short while. I don't tan so much as burn."

"Fine." She echoed my whistle from earlier once I had everything off. Laying on the blanket next to her, I could smell her sunscreen and clean sweat, the summertime scent of healthy skin in fresh air. Her hand drifted to mine to slowly dance and trace on my fingertips, like butterflies moving from flower to flower, clouds moving from peak to peak. The feeling of contentment stretched in front of us like a sapphire sky.

I go back to that place in my mind sometimes, but only when I desperately need to remember the beautiful parts of my life, or when I am so full of happiness that I can give some back to it. Flowers grow sparingly that high up, and it's best not to pick too many of them at once. Wild places, especially the ones in the soul, need to stay wild.

Erin leaned over and nuzzled at my jawline.

"What are we doing when we get back to the cabin, hm?" Her hand slid slowly up my leg as she rolled over to her stomach to look at me, showing off the rest of her body.

"I had some ideas," I hinted, "Maybe a 'quiet' afternoon and evening. If you know what I mean."

"Perfect," she said with a smirk and a sudden bite to my shoulder. Briefly, she contorted herself to take me into her mouth, then returned to level with me in moments. I tried to sit up but she pushed me gently back down.

"I think I want you a little fired up and frustrated," she said, stroking me languidly with one hand, "You're always more creative and devious at Silence stuff when you are. God, I love how hard you get. So quickly. Over and over."

"Careful," I said, "I wouldn't want to have to remind you of how to behave."

"Oh hush," she said after another quick, yet decidedly longer and hungrier bout of fellatio, "You're not the one who had to change their panties a couple times a day the week before we got here. You and your goddamn instructions."

"I'm still very impressed you managed it," I admitted, "You're a good little Kitten, aren't you?"

"Meow." She sat up and swung one leg across my chest, hands splayed over my shoulders, scratching patterns with her fingernails. She reached behind to give one more massage to my rocklike hard-on.

Her body smelled faintly like pollen and glacier-dust blowing in from the high passes. She smiled eagerly down at me as she scooted her knees forward to my ears. It was part invitation, part demand. Erin's face betrayed a little of the shyness she still held on to when I went down on her, but I adored her for coming to trust me to perform as I did. And she was more than worth it, from taste to touch to all other sensations and feelings. I ran my hands along her sweat-slick thighs, ass, and back. Her small, lithe, feline body was everything I wanted in that moment. She looked away down the mountains and sighed when the breeze toyed with her hair, then groaned as my tongue dragged firmly through her lust-soaked valley.

***

"Oh my fucking GOD, it's hot," Erin complained as we stumbled back to the cabin by mid-afternoon. To be fair, I'd done my share of bitching all the way back down as well. We were both covered in dust and scratches, and a tad grumpy from what amounted to a controlled fall to get off the mountainside and back to the rental. I chose to say nothing about how she hadn't had to carry anything the whole damn time, up or down. I also chose to say nothing about how much she'd teased me, stopping on the trail several times to edge me with her rapturous mouth without any release. I was more than resolved to teach her a thing or two about revenge.

After a long trudge in the sun, we made it to the shaded area under the porch that wrapped around the downslope view of the cabin. I still think of it as a cabin, but really it was more of a well-appointed chalet that could have comfortably fit six or even ten people, with views and amenities that would satisfy anyone. The porch was about eight feet above us and supported by heavy log columns, and there were benches set against the house. It was only marginally cooler under there but blessedly shady, with thin strips of light coming down through the deck boards. A garden hose sat near the door to the finished basement level, with an admonishing note to one side to not come in with boots on, or without rinsing off dirt.

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"Can't move," she said, "don't even wanna take the damn stairs up. If you're up first, can I have some ice water?"

"You could just ask me to get you some ice water, because that's what's going to happen anyway."

"Smartass. But yeah. Please."

"As you wish."

"Nerd," she laughed. I dropped my pack and leaned down for a dry-lipped kiss, then got the water for her.

Once I'd handed it over, I moved away to lean against a log pillar to look at our borrowed view: endless evergreens and a pale sky, sounds of wind and grasshoppers and the occasional bird. And nobody else. My eyes flicked around the undercroft we were resting in, checking my earlier preparations. Everything was as I'd left it, hidden and ready to deploy with little effort. Showtime.

"Stay here for a minute," I said over my shoulder. She raised an eyebrow and said nothing, but from the corner of my eye I saw her smile into her frigid drink. I went upstairs, collected a few things, and took my place next to her on the bench.

We rested in silence for a bit, watching a hawk ride the thermals at eye-level with us, far above the treetops. Erin put her head on my shoulder and her legs in my lap so I could stroke her well-muscled thigh. Another fleeting moment to tuck away forever.

"So," she said, suddenly all business, leaning over to look up at me, "You said you had an idea?"

"I might've."

"Woohoo! I'll go shower."

"No need." She pulled a face at that.

"But I'm all gross," she objected, "I'm even in those grubby throwaway clothes you 'abducted' me in."

"Don't worry," I assured her, "We'll get clean."

"We'd better."

"Here," I said, reaching down next to me and handing her a pair of cheap sandals, "Put these on."

"Okay," she said skeptically, taking her hiking shoes and socks off and laying them out on the bench in a precise fashion. She stood up and stepped into the sandals, then turned to me with her hands on her hips.

"And now these," I said, giving her a pair of handcuffs from my pocket. I smiled at the rapid change in her demeanor, her stance, her look. From persnickety and expectant to excited and curious in a heartbeat. It was her eyes that became the most intense: suddenly focused, slightly defiant, and playfully eager. She put the handcuffs on in front of her body, and I tightened them a fraction without pinching her.

"Ready?"

"Let me use the restroom, then yes."

"Good idea." Once she was back, I stepped close for a kiss before guiding her by the hand to a space beneath one of the deck joists. Reaching behind a pillar, I unlooped a hidden length of rope with a blunt hook on one end which I attached to the chain between her wrists. The other end went over a joist. She looked at it agape, then slowly began to grin in wide-eyed interest at it.

"You *awful* man!" she vamped, leaning into my chest, "What ever shall you do with me?" I laughed at her joke and hauled at the other end of the rope. It rasped as I pulled in the slack until her hands were stretched over her head without being too hard on her shoulders - they were a little sensitive from years of gymnastics and dance. She was still able to stand flat on her feet and crouch or lean slightly, but for all intents and purposes she wasn't going anywhere. I tied the rope off to the pillar again and looked her up and down.

"Nothing you don't want me to do, Kitten. But let's get you out of those clothes," I said offhandedly, "They're filthy."

"And you didn't do this before I was strung up because?" she asked, pivoting on the axis of her wrists to keep track of me as I walked around her to duck inside the basement door again. When I turned back to her, I held a pair of sharp scissors in my hands.

"Ooh," she said with a full-body wriggle, "Exciting. I was going to throw these things out anyway."

"No talking," I instructed, "and hold still."

"Are you going to be a sexy EMT, or are you just gonna rip my bodice? Oh no, someone save me! Tomorrow!" she laughed.

"Pretty sure I said not to talk, Little Miss Erin." I said while selecting a place to start.

"You did," she agreed impishly, "So what?" She tried to feel me up with one ballet-trained foot until I comically swatted her leg away.

"Just keeping track," I replied, "That's two so far." I made a series of small cuts in her baggy tee shirt and then stood back appraisingly before making another few small cuts.

"What are you actually doing?" she asked. I went to her, gripped her shirt in my hands, and ripped it away from her in shreds. Her chin tilted back and she watched my face as I did it.

"Oooh," she cooed, "Fun."

"Four," I commented, then slowly turned her around to face the valley.

"Four what?"

"Five." I decided to be more efficient with the scissors and I quickly cut away her running shorts, leaving her in a pink sports bra and panties, both sodden with sweat and other things.

"You," I continued, "Aren't allowed to wear clothes from now until it's time for us to leave, unless you earn them or I give special permission. You may answer that you understand."

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"But I brought insanely cute dresses to flounce around in, you caveman! Ugh, fine. Whatever. It'll be worth it to see you stare at me the whole time we're here."

"Six. Answer me properly. No back-talk, Pet."

"Yes, Sir! No clothes!" she announced clearly, as though on a stage. I suppose she was, in some ways.

"Nice elocution," I commented, slicing through the shoulder straps of her bra, then up the back so I could pull it from her chest and toss it away. I stepped closer until I could hold her body against mine, groping one hand aggressively down into her panties. Her next words caught in her throat and she ground against my hand.

"You're dripping," I said low and breathily in her ear.

"And you're hard," she replied in the same tone, pressing her ass back against my cock.

"Seven. And yes. You did say you wanted me fired up and frustrated. Well, here I am."

"God, I love your voice. But I'm still dirty in a not-sexy way. Are you going to let me down so I can go shower?"

"I was going to say eight, but now I'm thinking twelve because I'm getting annoyed with your manners." She clamped her lips shut; she'd of course guessed what the idea of the game was, and apparently her personal calculus finally told her not to get too far into debt.

Slowly, I slid the scissors between her skin and the last bit of fabric she wore, straight down her front. She shied away and made a small noise of concern, so I reassured her by sliding my hand between the scissors and her body, feeling her labored breathing against me and the sound of slicing cloth. I took a few liberties for my trouble. Once I'd gone far enough, I repeated it down her backside, the two long cuts meeting in the middle and exposing her centerline fully while leaving the waistband intact. I stepped back around to her front and gently put my teeth at her throat; not leaving a mark, but definitely making my point. She squeaked and I felt a low chuckle come up from my chest. I leaned back to watch her face start to flush as I dragged my hand back and forth underneath her.

"That's better," I said. A few quick snips at the waistline, and her underwear fell to the dirt at her feet, leaving her finally naked. I patted her firmly and walked away to set the scissors down on the bench. I could tell she was starting to work at controlling her breathing in a way she hoped I wouldn't notice. She always breathed through her nose when she did that. And I could still see her ribs twitch over her heart. She shifted, body swaying as she tried to get comfortable.

"Time to pay your bill," I said lightheartedly, "But first, how are your shoulders? You may answer politely and honestly."

"Doing alright, Sir," she said, coughing slightly from the dust, "For now."

"I'm glad," I said, "Don't worry. After this next part, I'll change it for you. If it starts to hurt, make sure to let me know right away."

"Thank you, Sir," she said meekly, eyes down.

"Such lovely manners, Kitten! I'm so proud of you for being a good girl." I stroked her sides and back to emphasize my approval and watched the flush creep further up her neck.

"Why does it have to work *so* fucking well," I heard her mutter under breath.

"For such nice behavior, it's only going to be ten, so that's two down already," I continued, pretending I hadn't heard her. She nodded briefly, focusing once again on controlling her breathing.

"Pause," I said, "I don't want to scare you with the next part."

"Uh, okay?"

"I'm going to walk away over there to the treeline, not far. You're going to see a hatchet in my hand, which I'm going to use on a tree and then put away. I didn't want to freak you out about it." Erin burst out laughing, and I frowned indignantly back at her.

"Hey, come on," I objected, "You're all tied up in the mountains with a guy you've only known for half a summer. Last thing I want is anything like yesterday. Or worse."

"Okay, Mr. Axe Murderer," she snorted, "I'm sorry I laughed. You're sweet. And stuff like this makes me glad I snatched you up before someone else did this summer. Not that I wouldn't have stolen you off whatever bitch thought she had you anyway."

"Oh, you think I wouldn't have been able to resist your charms and ways?"

"Seriously? Luke," she scoffed, "Come on. They'd never stand a chance. You only like smart girls. And anyway just look at me." It was a brazenly confident declaration for a grimy, naked girl under five feet tall and strung up by her wrists. But she was right. One more reason to feel drawn to her.

"I guess we'll never know. Unpause?"

"Unpause," she agreed, "But only if you kiss me and tell me I'm pretty."

"I was going to anyway." Afterwards, I walked back out into the scorching sun.

"Wait, why do you need to hack at some poor tree?" she called out as I walked away.

"Making a bouquet for you," I said with a quick grin over my shoulder.

***

Sweat immediately began to pour off me again the moment I was under the afternoon sun. At the edge of the property, I quickly searched around for the youngest trees with the newest growth, using the hatchet to gather a sheaf of branches that I could still fit in my hand. I set the bundle of arm-length switches on my shoulder and walked back to Erin, stowing the tool as I did. Grateful for the shade, I sat down on the bench and began squeezing each branch slightly, making sure they were supple and soft rather than hard and nasty. The inspection crushed some of the needles, making the undercroft fragrant with new pine growth.

"They smell nice, don't they?" I said casually, watching as her face betrayed both concern and eagerness. I gathered each of them back up into one solid handful that I held by the branch end, making a cat-o-nine-thousand-tails.

"They're the youngest I could find without hurting saplings," I continued, "Which means they have the softest needles and most flexible branches." The bundle made a sighing sound as I lazily swung it through the air one way, then a harsh whoosh as I swung it hard the other way. She shivered and licked her lips. I looked her in the eyes and tucked her hair back over her ears.

"How on Earth are you so damned pretty? I just... You make me want to do so many things to you. For you. With you. You set me on fire."

Erin flushed with pleasure, then started to tremble as I slowly dragged the needles in looping whorls around her body, my footsteps crunching gravel and raising dust as I circled her.

"Oh fuck," she whispered, "Oh fuck." I could see new beads of sweat start to form on her chest and between her shoulder blades, little rivulets in the dust that clung to her. I could also see her nipples stiffen, her knees and hips shift invitingly. To make sure, I cupped a hand under her and felt only welcoming, slippery readiness. She grunted, trying not to betray herself so easily. I knelt in front of her and continued my close-up inspection, fingering her harshly in the way she liked sometimes. She moaned and leaned her weight on my shoulder.

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