*This is my first story, please send only constructive criticism.
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They had been dating for a few months now and Mary was beginning to get frustrated, Ben had yet to make a move beyond kissing her passionately. On their last date, Ben and Mary had gone to a quaint Italian restaurant, complete with the red and white checkered table cloths, but that just wasn't enough. Mary was enamored with Ben, he was funny, sensitive, and caring, yet he was so cautious. Knowing Ben would take too long to make his move, Mary decided it was time to take matters into her own hands.
Mary invited Ben over for a romantic meal at her place, he had no idea what was really in store for him. She was humming to herself as she prepared her apartment for his arrival, cleaning, cooking, a few candles, and some music playing softly in the background.
Finally, with about 5 minutes before he was due to arrive, Ben was always right on time, she unlocked her front door knowing that he would knock and then walk in if it wasn't locked. Mary went into the bathroom, making sure to leave the door open a crack, stripped down and got into the shower. You see, Mary has this fantasy that has never been fulfilled and she decided that she needed to orchestrate it or it may never happen.
Ben knocked and waited, no answer so he tried the door knob, unlocked. He walks in, thinking that Mary must be in the kitchen cooking and didn't hear his knock. As he looks around, he calls out to her.
"Mary, I'm here."
He receives no response.
"Hmm...I wonder if everything is ok."
He looks in the kitchen, he can see the oven light on and a few pots simmering on the stove. Turning around, he decides to look in her bedroom, maybe he'll get lucky and will get to see her getting dressed. As he walks down the hallway, he hears the shower on, grinning to himself he decides to try and take a peek at her while she is showering.
Mary can hear the door open, the squeak of the door hinges always annoyed her before, but today it just makes her so hot. She tries hard to pretend that she doesn't know he's there, but she is so excited that she grabs the soap and lathers up her hands. She puts her head back into the spray and lets the water go down her face so she can't open her eyes and see who is there.
As she is distracting herself, one hand slowly slides down her body, going for her pleasure center. Her other hand glides to her nipple and starts pinching it softly. She is so turned on right now, but she is hoping that Ben will get the hint and join her.