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You only get one chance to make a first impression and this was not a good one. His shirt was wrinkled, the socks didn't match his pants and his hair was as neat as when he woke up that morning.
For someone like James who prides himself on his professional appearance, he was being totally self-conscious at this time. His job interview was supposed to be a slam dunk. His friend Aaron had been with the company for several years and his reference got him this appointment.
This interview should have been a formality as James was not only qualified but almost bred for this position. His resume should be a perfect closer for this would-be ambitious job. If only his morning had gone closer to normal, he wouldn't be sweating the formalities now.
Being a first time visitor to Chicago, James had planned to fly early on Tuesday and see some of the town and get oriented before the interview at 11 AM Wednesday. That was the plan. But as plans can often fall together perfectly, they can just as well collapse on themselves.
First, James girlfriend in Austin was not so pleased to hear about the interview in Chicago and specifically the fact that he did not tell her until cornered two days prior. James had been dating Nicole for 8 months and was ready to break up after two. But the sex was good and her crying was horrible so he stayed with her despite himself.
On Sunday night as he was watching football and she was by him on the couch, she was talking about her upcoming week and her lesson plans for the kids at school. James did his best to acknowledge her while all the while totally oblivious to what she was saying.
James was good at being a listener as he knew what she was probably talking about (she was not a treasure of knowledge or good conversation which James regretted) and knew when to agree or when to sympathize, when to nod and when to chuckle. Halftime came and the game was a blowout so he leaned over to Nicole in mid-sentence, kissed her forehead to indicate he was going to bed.
James had a mental image of the girl in the Budweiser commercial and was sporting some wood from it. Being the bored boyfriend that he had become, he now used Nicole almost solely for sexual release and walked like a zombie through the rest of his boyfriend duties.
As Nicole continued to describe some reading test for the 3rd graders, James saw her reflection in the bedroom mirror as she removed her pajama bottoms with nothing underneath but a butterfly tattoo on the small of her back. He approached behind her in his boxers and pressed his hard self against her and told her, faking sincerity, that the test sounded great.
She was about to go on more when he ran his hands up underneath her tank top and cupped her small breast. Nicole broke out of cute teacher mode and knew James was quieting her for foreplay. Nicole, who was an inch taller than James at 5 foot ten, let him kiss her on the neck and down her shoulders and he playfully squeezed her nipples.
Nicole began rubbing herself against him and moaning in delight. The two made love almost daily but for the last month, James had not climaxed. He was always sure to satisfy Nicole, often 2-3 times a night, but work, masturbation, and Nicole herself had desensitized him and while he was concerned, he still enjoyed the foreplay and the act of sex enough to not sweat the orgasm. He got satisfaction without release and that was good enough.
They were rather predictable in their sex as they always started off hot and heavy with heavy petting and kissing; massaging each other's groins and getting each other stimulated in all the right areas. James dropped his hands form underneath her tank top and put his right above her cunt and felt the wetness. Nicole, in turn, was now stroking James hard cock blindly with her left hand as he stood behind and grinded into her backside.
Both somewhat shy, James backed away to turn off the light and remove his clothes as Nicole into bed and threw off the pillows. Typically after the foreplay, James would lie on the bed as Nicole slowly went down on him and gave him a blowjob. Though it is hard to describe any blowjob as bad, she did nothing more the put James' dick in her mouth and slide up and down.
There was no true sucking, no ball-squeezing and no tongue play. James enjoyed watching Nicole perform and often said her name to encourage her but he really used this time to think about work and what he could do next to her.
Next in their standard sex routine, James would pull her gently up with a tug at the head and Nicole would position herself over his now extremely hard 8-inch cock, slowly come down on it and begin riding him with her eyes closed and her hands on his chest.
James got sport out of this time to see how quickly and how often he could make Nicole cum. He would let her control the pace briefly before he started thrusting his cock upwards, imagining a jackhammer, and waiting for her tell-tell signs of orgasm.
First, she would start opening her mouth in a quiet moan, followed by a light gripping of his shoulders. Next, Nicole would begin saying James' name like he just surprised her with a new car in the garage. The last step before her orgasm, Nicole would not simply go up and down on James but would now keep all of him inside her and start grinding against him, all over his groin before her pussy tightened and she screamed that she was cumming.
This was the moment that kept James around Nicole. Not her beautiful features of blonde hair and lean, fit body. Not her sweet yet immature, just out of college teaching school children demeanor. It was when he had totally satisfied her and she came on him and squeezed both with her pussy muscles on his dick and her hands on his shoulders.
James would be capable of bringing her to orgasm 2 more times that night and talked to her as they both fell asleep, usually creating funny stories for her to giggle to and nod off to. But James on this occasion told her that he was going to Chicago. It was James on this occasion that told Nicole that he was going for a job interview. It was James that stupidly told her that he would move there if he got the job and it was James that had to hear Nicole and her quiet weeping, her pleading for him not to do it and subtle turn into demands about not leaving her and that they were supposed to be together forever.
He really cared for her but did not love her. He hated himself for treating her so coldly but was ready for change. After a long Monday on no sleep and a longer Tuesday with very little sleep because of phone calls, text messages and IMs from Nicole, James was on route to Chicago via Delta.
No matter if you believe in karma or not, it does seem to exist when you are feeling its wrath sometimes. James, for all of his neglect and objectification of Nicole, was now bound to her memory as he flew over the vastness of Texas and into the hills of the Ozarks before reaching the gray mist and steady winds when he touch downed at Midway.
He had wanted to be relaxed and enjoy the city Tuesday evening and get his mind set right for Wednesday but Nicole's weeping was haunting him as he took a taxi to the Hilton. He saw her in every tall blonde walking the streets with an ipod. He saw her in every woman zoned in at the shoes on sale in the department store windows along Michagan Avenue or the women joggers running in place, waiting for there chance to cross the busy streets.
James checked into his room and starting unpacking his clothing, leaving nothing unprepared for the next day. It was then that he realized he had gone and forgotten his navy blue tie that he knew he had taken out of the closet, had carefully rolled up and now recalled leaving on the nightstand as he talked with Nicole on the phone.
Well, it was his favorite tie and being comfortable during an interview makes a world of difference but he was going to walk around anyway and he would now have something to look for. If that was his one mistake for the trip, James was happy to get it out of the way.
After scanning some of the tourist info he had gathered in the lobby and getting some idea of where he wanted to head to, James left the room and closed the door behind him. He was turning for the elevator when he quickly caught sight of a very beautiful woman walking into the room next to his.
In the 2 seconds that it took her to open the door, pick up her suitcase and carry inside, James was able to notice a five-foot six, curvaceous redhead with a black executive suit on, two-inch heels, beautiful calves and the profile of a very large chest.
He gave a whistle to himself as he got into the elevator and sculpted his hair with his hands in the reflection as of the elevator doors. James walked out to a chill in the air of night time Chicago and walked to a nearby men's store for a new tie followed by a nice steak and a glass of wine.