This story is told from Katie's point of view. It is being adapted from an on going roleplay that we have been wring now for over 3 months. For the other side of this experience--told through Jacky's eyes--check out "Angel's Landing (Jacky's POV)" by Jackhawk. We're writing from opposite ends of the same story, so be sure to follow both to experience it all!
I introduce a new character, giving him a voice via his name in parentheses (Antonio). Many more characters will be introduced throughout this series...
Chapter 2 KATIE'S FIRST EVALUATION (Katie's POV)
Jacky kisses my cheek like he already owns me. Like he's staking his claim.
"I'll see you both this evening," he murmurs, low and warm, his lips brushing just beneath my temple. "Good luck, Lil Katie."
God. The way he says it—like I belong to him. Then he turns to Julia—cool, commanding Julia—and kisses her cheek too.
"I'm counting on you to get this right, sugar... This one has promise. Test her hard." And just like that, he's gone.
I'm left standing in his wake, the echo of his footsteps still ringing in my ears, his scent clinging to my skin like heat after a kiss.
Julia breathes in slowly, like she needs a moment. Then she smiles—tight-lipped, amused, assessing.
"How about we stroll a bit, Katie? This is the headquarters of Angel's Landing," she begins as we walk, her voice smooth and practiced. "An international company with diverse holdings. We specialize in adult entertainment... in many forms."
Her eyes flick to mine, just enough to let the word adult hang there, heavy and deliberate.
I swallow. "Okay."
"To our left," she says, gesturing, "you'll find our mall. You can get anything you need in the shops. Behind those double doors is the executive suite—Jacky's office, mine, the studios. But first, we've got a little indulgence planned for you."
Her gaze slides down the length of me like a slow touch.
"Have you ever had a real massage?"
"Once,"
I lie. The one time, in a strip mall—cheap oil, scratchy towels, a guy who didn't meet my eye.
As we walk, I catch my reflection in a glass panel. My hair still wild from the ocean breeze.
"I've never been in a place like this," I whispered, just to fill the silence.
The marble beneath my sandals looks impossibly expensive. Glass walls reach for the sky like ambition made solid. Everything gleams. Everything smells rich. Every inch of Angel's Landing is polished, perfect. and a dream. You know you shouldn't trust but can't look away from and they're watching me.
Whispers trail in my wake like smoke. Eyes linger—men and women both. I feel them skimming over my skin, pausing on my lips, my legs. I try to keep my posture tall, my face calm, but my body betrays me. I'm buzzing, flush and alive in a way that feels dangerous.
I'm the new girl, fresh meat.
Julia walks beside me like a queen touring her kingdom, every inch of her wrapped in designer silk and effortless confidence.
Men practically trip over themselves to say hello to her—some with reverence, others with hunger. And the women? They eye her with a cocktail of envy and desire. She acknowledges them all with subtle nods and slow smiles, holding court with a grace that borders on lethal.
I watch her. I study her. I want to know how it feels to be that powerful.
Then the spa doors open, and all thoughts dissolve.
It's like stepping into Eden—humid, green, and pulsing with soft sounds: birdsong, the hush of water, some melodic music that melts over your skin. The air is thick with citrus and something deeper, something heady and sweet.
The gorgeous female attendant, her name tag reads "Jill", is more than just polite, guiding us into the locker room, assigning me a locker...which contains a robe and the white slip on sandals.
Julia smiles and nods...the attendant leaves...but not before locking eyes with me and offering a saucy smirk!
"Drop your clothes on the floor. You won't be needing those anymore."
Then Julia undresses...Holy fuck.
She peels her skirt off, revealing legs that go on forever. Her blouse slips from her shoulders revealing the most perfect breasts I've ever seen. Round and high, a full C at least, glistening just slightly under the spa lights. Her body is a study in symmetry and sin, toned stomach, hips that sway like sex itself, and an ass that makes my mouth go dry.
I've never thought of women that way before, but Julia isn't a woman, she's an experience.
Julia glances back once, a grin tugging at her lips as she walks toward the steam. The door to the showers swings open, swallowing her in mist.
Kicking off my sandals, dropping my jean shorts to the floor, the oversized men's dress shirt I've worn for days hesitates in my grip—my last bit of armor, but I let it go.
Now it's just me and my plain white panties, sliding them down slowly. There's something ceremonial about it, intimate and exposing.
Naked, flushed and trembling, I haven't put the robe on, I'm too filthy for it. I can feel the beach still clinging to me—salt crusted on my skin, sand caught in places I don't want to think about.
The robe is soft, pristine, white, it doesn't belong on me. Not until I'm clean. I walk slowly, my breath loud in my ears. Reaching the edge of the showers, hanging the robe on a hook.
Walking into the shower, I see her.
Julia stands beneath a rainfall shower, head tilted back, water cascading over her. Her skin gleams. Droplets trail between her breasts, snake over her hips. Her lips are parted slightly, breath slow and even, like she's letting the heat seduce her.
Julia turns slightly, head tilted, lips curled. "Where did Jacky find you?"
I shrug, suddenly feeling a little exposed in more ways than one. "He found me on the beach." I said, vague on purpose. "Just saw me stumbling on the beach. I mean sitting on the beach, I like to just hang out there and think. It is really peaceful."
Not sleeping there. Not hiding from everything I ran from.
"He's...nice," I add, softening my voice. Watching her eyes. I try to read her as much as she is reading me. Trying to take the focus off me I ask " Where did you guys meet?"
She purrs, "I've known Jacky for five years. We met the first time while I was a senior in college. I was a sponsored contestant in a spring break wet T-shirt contest...which I actually won"
She laughs at the memory, then leans back into the water.
"I was offered a scholarship to stay in school and complete a masters degree...but Jacky made me an offer I couldn't refuse. I've been here hard at work ever since."
She turns, water cascades down her stomach, catching in the smooth dip between her legs before dripping off.
I swallow, trying not to stare, imagining Jacky's mouth where those beads of water just were. Or even yet, trying not to imagine my mouth where those beads of water just were.
In a low voice I ask "Did he tell you what I'd be doing here?" Julia's smile fades into something softer, "Has he told you what Angel's Landing really is?"
Shaking my head, my eyes not leaving hers. "Not exactly. Just that he could help me. That there was a place for me here. A way to... take care of myself."
The water hits my skin in a hot, steady stream, it rolls down my back in sheets, the tension in my shoulders melting away.
Tilting my head, letting the water soak my hair, strands clinging to my neck and collarbones, heavy and wet. This isn't a beach rinse-off. It isn't a gas station sink.
This is heat, pressure, steam, this is luxury.
My fingers work the thick, fragrant shampoo from the wall dispenser through my hair. The scent is soft and expensive—something floral, something spicy. I take my time rinsing it out, fingertips massaging my scalp, breathing deep.
I try to pretend I'm not aware of Julia, her body moving just beyond the mist. But I am. God, I am. Every shift of her weight, every splash of water on her skin—it's like a low hum just under my skin.
I reach for the body wash, lathering it between my palms until it's a silky foam. I smooth it over my arms, my shoulders, down the curve of my breasts, over the dip of my waist. My skin tingles beneath my own touch—maybe it's the heat... or maybe it's not.
Water glides over my stomach, slipping between my thighs, a shiver runs through me. I shouldn't think of Julia like this, but this place, this moment, her silhouette through the steam... it's doing something to me.
Her ass catches the light in just the right way, and I feel my thighs press together instinctively. Biting my lip and turning back to the wall, not wanting to lose myself completely.
My fingers slow over my hips, the insides of my thighs. I should feel embarrassed, but the steam softens everything.
Julia's voice startles me even though it is calm, casual. "You missed a spot," her hand is in my hair lightly stroking the suds away, her touch lingers. Her fingers drift down my cheek, over my neck, and then—oh god—her knuckles trace over my nipple, a soft flick that makes it pebble instantly, hard and aching.
"You really are incredibly beautiful, Katie," she murmurs, her voice curling around my name like warm honey. "Now that the grime's gone... I can see exactly what Jacky sees."
I can't find my voice. All I can do is stare at her, skin flushed, heart hammering in my chest like I've never been touched before.
She leans in closer, lips just a breath from my ear. "I think you are going to enjoy the next item on today's agenda!...A full body massage!"
I finally manage to speak, voice thick with heat. "That does sound amazing."
Turning toward her fully, not bothering to hide the blush on my cheeks. "Thank you, Julia, for all of this."
She smiles. "You're welcome sweetie...it's my job to make sure you feel at ease...I'm glad to be here for you. Let's get dried off and onto that massage table...I think you are going to like your masseuse...he's incredibly 'talented'!"
Something's changing in me and I'm excited to find out what is next.
The robe is soft, but it can't stop the flutter in my stomach. I follow Julia, floating, trying not to let her see the way my fingers tremble at my sides. I still feel the echo of her touch on my skin... the back of her hand grazing my nipple, the way her eyes lingered like she was sizing me up.
She guides me to the reception area, pointing to a big soft white leather recliner.
"Your masseuse, Antonio, will be out shortly," she purrs, her voice teasing. "Enjoy, sugar."