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They told me I'd been hallucinating. I'd been found, stripped to my boxers, walking barefoot through the desert that made up more than half of the campus of my college. When they got me to the hospital, they had pumped my stomach, and hooked me up to all kinds of machines. Did I lose you? Maybe I should back up some, so you can understand what was going on.
My life had gone to Hell. Anything that could go wrong, did. All at once. My marriage was gone. My daughter was taken from me. My job. My home. All of it, gone. Life had been spiraling downward for a few years, but crashed all at once. I reached the end of my rope, and had decided to settle things.
I managed to get my hands on some anti-depressants, and took what should have been a fatal dosage, along with an entire month's worth of sleeping pills. I then set up an exit bag. Within 3 minutes I'd be unconscious, and within half an hour, my brain would stop functioning. The last thing I remember was starting to fall asleep.
Then SHE was there. If Eva Mendes is a 9 on the hotness scale, this woman was a 900. Everything about her exuded perfection. Her skin glistened in the moonlight. Her figure looked like it had been carved for man's enjoyment. She had breasts that were perfect, not giant, but not small, perfect for cupping in my hands and still being able to play with the nipples. Her hair shimmered, a strawberry-blonde wave cascading down behind her. There was just a small tuft of fuzz above her pussy, shaved into a landing strip. Even the way she moved exuded sensuality. I would have collapsed and worshipped her as a goddess, if I could move. I wanted to cry at the pure beauty of her. She was, in a word, divine.