This is my first submission – I hope you like it! I wrote this for a gorgeous Indian pre-med student I met on Tinder and struck up an incredibly sexy correspondence with. Our names have been changed, but other than that this is the story I sent her. We're meeting up in a week, and plan on making some of this happen – if this gets feedback I'll write a story about how things go!
A little about us: "Avni" is short, about 5'4", with absolutely gorgeous long, black hair, good-sized but not large breasts (B cups), a slender frame, and the best ass you've ever seen in your life. I'm 6'1" with an athletic but slender build, brown eyes and long brown hair, usually worn in a man bun, and I'm almost always rocking a scruffy beard. She's a ten, I'm a 7 or an 8. And yes...my dick really is what I say it is below, for those who probably doubt.
This story is long, but packed with action. Hopefully I've written it in a way that doesn't slow down from page one.
Please leave comments and let me know what you think! Since it's my first submission, I crave feedback. Thanks so much, Literotica community!
I. The Coffeehouse
"So...you know I don't plan on fucking you tonight, right?"
You look up at me over the top of your glasses as you tuck a few runaway locks of your beautifully long brown hair behind your ear, a slight smirk on your face.
Smiling, I take a sip from the coffee sitting on the table between us. We've spent the last couple hours chatting and studying at a local coffeeshop, but intentionally avoiding the issue we both know the other has been thinking about all day.
Until now, that is.
"Are you trying to convince me, or yourself?" I softly respond. "Cuz it sounds more like the latter than the former..."
You flash me a look that is at once a glare and a blush.
"Well, hey...if you can look me in the eye and tell me you don't want to fuck me, I'll make sure nothing happens," I continue.
"I didn't say I don't
want
to fu—I mean, I'm saying...no, you know what I—I'm saying I
shouldn't
do what I wan—oh,
fuck me
..."
I raise one eyebrow as a grin spreads across my face.
"Whoa whoa whoa, wait, that's not—come on, you know I didn't mea—shit. Shit, shit, shit. Just read your damn book, Ben. And tell your beautiful hair to quit staring at me. It's distracting." You look down at your books for a while, attempting to study while I ostensibly take notes of my own on my yellow lined notepad.
A few minutes later I stand up and walk past you to get a refill. As I do, a drop my page of "study notes" in front of you. You look down and begin reading as I walk to the counter.
* * *
Avni,
There's something important you need to know:
I'm going to fuck you tonight in the library.
First, though, I'm going to make you come with my tongue and fingers—somewhere, maybe, where people can see your face as you struggle to keep from moaning my name as your body is wracked with pleasure.
Tonight, with strangers in the same room as you, maybe just a few desks down, I'm going to finger your drooling, dripping pussy, burying them deep inside you and then slowly taking them all the way out before plunging them back in, over and over and over again—all the while teasingly, slowly, expertly tending to your clit with my tongue, using and moving it in ways you didn't even know were fucking possible.
I'm going to watch as you frantically try to balance your need for release, your desire to come screaming my name and begging for my cock, with the need to keep the other people in the library from knowing that just 20 feet away from them there's a woman deliriously, deliciously, utterly lost in the best orgasms of her life.
I'm going to worship at the altar of your body in the middle of the library, Avni.
And I'm going to savor every last second of it.
All this, of course, is before I take you somewhere else in the building and fill your by-now creamy, girl-cum leaking, desperately cock-hungry slit to the hilt with all 8 inches of my long, absurdly thick, precum-dripping, throbbing dick.
I'm going to fuck you so well, so completely and so thoroughly, that you'll spend the next month and a half walking around with panties drenched in your own juices—the memories of what I did to your body tonight will be enough to unleash a flood each and every one of the countless times a day you find yourself hopelessly, irresistibly fantasizing and daydreaming about what I did to your body.
I'm headed to the library now. I'll be on the second floor, near the tables and study cubicles. If you want this, just meet me there. Just show up. But know this:
If you come, you do everything I tell you to. Period. Without question, reservation, or hesitation. That's the deal.
You have to understand me here. This isn't negotiable—if you walk through those library doors, you're mine. Mine to please as it pleases me, your body forfeit to the pleasure I'm going to give it.
If you truly don't want me to do what I've described—if you really don't want to feel me slide my hard cock inside you, the cock you've been desperate to have fill you for over 6 months now, stay at the coffeehouse. We'll study separately for a while and meet up later with a mutual understanding of what's been decided.
But let's be honest with each other here, Avni:
We both know you're gonna show up at the library. I knew from the second I walked into the coffeehouse and saw you sitting there that you were planning on fucking me. You made it plainly obvious what you want. I remember—and you
know
I remember—the things you told me you wanted me to include in the story I wrote you, and if you weren't planning on making some of that fiction into reality tonight...
...you wouldn't have shown up wearing a skirt.
See you soon, Avni.
P.S. If—well, we both know there's no need for this pretense anymore, so what I really mean is
when
—you decide to head to the library, stop off in the bathroom here and take your panties off first.
This isn't a request.
* * *
As I walk out the door I see the note shaking in your trembling hands, and I smile.
Sometimes being right just feels
so
good
.
II. The Library
Fifteen minutes later I'm sitting at a large table on the second floor when I see you walk in. Tossing your bag on the table, you sit down in the chair across from me, your body language awash in nervous excitement. Your eyes meet mine as you reach inside your bag and pull out your books, and in them I see exactly what I was hoping to:
Hunger.
Desperate, reckless hunger.
I pull out my yellow lined notepad and write a few lines, and slide it across to you. As you lean forward to read it, I notice you moving your hips in your chair. You're literally squirming in your seat.
I'm going to be writing some things I want you to do on here. You showed up, Avni, so you've agreed: you want me to make you mine. Did you do what I told you?
You shake your head no. You're trembling, and it's obvious you're so lost in a sea of arousal, anxiety, and endorphins that you can barely see straight.
This is your one reprieve—from now on you do what I tell you. Take off your panties and hand me them under the table.
You look up at me with eyes wide, then glance nervously to your left—two tables over there's a group of students quietly studying. You slip a hand under the table toward your lap, but hesitate. I write again.
Do what you're fucking told, Avni.
NOW.