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They were married eight years, it was a great marriage, she adored him, he was a great provider. She was glad he took charge and kept their marriage interesting. Kim was a great wife, she didn't have to work, her husband was perfectly happy with her maintaining the house. She did volunteer work, it kept her connected with the outside world.
Kim made sure they had diner every night, she tried to eat healthy, but sometimes her husband would bring pizza or subs.
Kim was petite, 5' 2" and always bubbly, her husband was very normal and was into her, he rarely went out without her. They had date night a couple of times a month, usually a movie and a few drinks, or diner and a few drinks. Usually he would have a few drinks too many and get a little frisky. He like to squeeze her ass in the restaurant, or wherever they were. He like to make out in the car, sometimes they would have sex, she was small, they could fuck anywhere.
Last date they were in a in a bar, he started talking to another guy and brought him back to the table. He was younger, Will was his name, he seemed to be a normal, except he wasn't drinking. After a few drinks her husband started getting frisky, he kissed her and was fondling a breast, Kim wasn't shy, she enjoyed the attention from her husband, she even placed a hand in his lap and rubbed his cock.
They continued to talk, Will still wasn't drinking, he enjoyed the conversation with Kim. It was time to leave, it wasn't that late, but her husband was drunk, Kim knew she had to drive home. Will walked out with them, he helped them to their car, they loaded her husband into the back seat. Will opened the door for Kim, she asked him if he had a ride home, after a little coaxing he agreed to let her drive him to his house.
She adjusted the seat, her skirt was hiked up, she saw Will staring, it didn't bother her, she even opened her legs, she liked being a tease. They sat and talked, she learned a lot about him, her husband was asleep in the back seat.
Will was nice looking, he had the all American look. She started the car, she punched his address in the GPS, and followed the directions. They talked, he was enjoying the view, he complimented her on her legs and her tight body, she soaked it up.
They arrived, she turned towards him and gave him a great shot of her legs and crotch, he stared and the looked up at her face, those are nice legs, he reached for her knee, she smiled and leaned back.
"Are you a tease?" he asked.
Kim replied, "I'm married and I've never cheated on my husband, I have a great marriage and would never do anything to jeopardize it, I love him too much."
He moved his hand up her thigh, she was smiling, "you have large hands. I think we are at a good stopping point, I'm not drunk enough to let you do anything more, sorry if I was teasing you."
Will pulled his hand back, "it is getting late," he opened the door and walked around to her side, she rolled down the window, he bent down for a kiss, she put her hand on his and moved it to her breast. She said, "a kiss is not a good idea, but I did enjoy the conversation and your company." She squeezed his hand, he felt her firm breast, maybe you'll call, she gave him her husband's business card. He removed his hand and stood up, she drove home.
They arrived at the house, she parked and opened the back door, she kissed him on his cheek, "honey can you make it into the house?" He smiled, she kissed him, "can you get up?"
"Of course I can, but first," he leaned back on the seat and started fumbling with his belt and pants. Kim watched for a minute and then helped him, his pants and shorts were down and his dick was exposed.
"What do you want?" Kim leaned into the car opened her mouth and sucked his dick into her mouth, she swirled it with her tongue, she lifted her head up and let his dick plop out. "Well, do you want me to suck your dick?"
He lifted his head up and said, "yes"
Kim wasn't sure if she could get him hard, she licked and sucked him, he did get half hard and she sucked him for awhile, she gave up. She pulled him out of the car and he stood him up. She pulled up his shorts and pants, they walked into the house, she walked him straight to the bed.
He laid down and she stripped him, she kissed his dick, it was still half hard, it felt good in her mouth. She got off the bed and stripped. She looked at his cock, was it hard enough for her to sit on?
She knelt on the bed and straddled him, she reached down and guided his dick between her legs, she was wet from Will's attempts. It slid in her, she felt him in her and started rocking on him, she reached down and started rubbing her clit, she knew she could cum.
Her hands were on his chest and she rocked on him, it would have been better if he was hard, she kept rocking.
It didn't take long, she had a wonderful little orgasm, she moaned and fell forward, she kissed him. she whispered in his ear "Do you want to kiss my pussy,"?
He didn't respond, Kim turned and positioned her crotch over his mouth and lowered it. She rubbed her lips on his mouth, she was juicy from riding him, he wasn't responding, after a minute she smiled and lifted off his face.
She fell asleep next to her husband.
She woke up, she kissed his face, it still smelled like her pussy, she smiled. Coffee and breakfast was on her agenda, she jumped out of bed and started breakfast.
She woke him up, he wasn't hung over and was ready for breakfast. They ate and talked, Kim was curious about Will, she wondered how long they knew each other. Her husband answered, they met six months ago. Kim smiled, "he seems like a great guy, why did you want him to meet me?" He laughed, 'I just thought we could get a little closer."
Kim smiled, she knew her husband enjoyed watching videos of them having sex, she was wondering what else he wanted to watch. Will called, her husband invited him for diner, Kim was nominated to provide the diner.
Kim returned from shopping and started preparing diner, she asked her husband what she should wear, he answered, "just a skirt."