I am a first time poster. I've been reading stories here for a few years, and writing as well. I've had too many ideas to count, and find it hard to finish most of them. The usual culprit is being unsure if people will like reading them.
Go easy on me with this one. It was written quickly and came out of the blue. I didn't have anyone edit it, so I just looked over it multiple times. Also, sorry for just throwing you into the action with no real story. It was my attempt to finish a full story before getting bored with it. And after finishing it, I made plans for a prequel and sequel if the response is positive.
This story about Kate Upton is part of a test I'm conducting. If I get some feedback, I'll know that my writing will be worthwhile. So let me know what you like, and also what you don't like. Hopefully I can improve my writing and keep churning out stories.
I really hope you all like it, enough even to give me tips because I've got a lot of stories I'd like to share with you all. Thanks for bearing with my long introduction. Enjoy!
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I was nearly through with Kate. I had hoped I could have her again, but she was going to drain me. I'd been fucking her flawless young body for the past ten minutes, and wasn't sure how I even lasted that long. She rode me like a porn star before lying on her back and letting me have my way with her. I wasn't paying enough attention to notice if she had cum yet, but she seemed to be enjoying herself. She may very well have gotten off only on how excited I was to be fucking a girl like her.
Feeling the need to finish up, I removed myself from her pussy and slid myself up her sweaty body. I held my throbbing cock still while she positioned her heaving breasts around it. They were fleshly and malleable enough to receive a proper tit fucking, and I was psyched to end things in such a manner.
Sitting straight up, I simply slid my hips back and forth on her stomach, trying not to focus on my impending orgasm. As bad as I wanted the release, the thought of never fucking Kate Upton again caused me to want to prolong the moment.
Kate simply lay still, holding her tits in place around my cock, smiling up at me with her luscious pink lips. I stared at her face, and then moved my cock down from the valley between her breasts. It was pressed between our two stomachs as I shoved my hands under hers, and squeezed her tits. Going for it all, I leaned down to kiss her.
"No," she stopped me. "This doesn't need to be that personal."
I kept my face mere inches from hers. Our bodies created a steady heat as they pressed against each other. Our sweat made them slippery, yet sticky at the same time. Both pairs of hands kneaded the most magnificent set of young tits either of us had ever seen.
"So, you'd rather me think you a whore who takes a load of cum to the face, than a respectable fuck who doesn't mind kissing a one time lover?"
"You think..." she started in a bit of shock.
Still smiling, she allowed me to shove my cock back between her tits.
Slowly laughing, she now said, "you think I'm gonna let you cum on my face?"
"Well..."
"Well what?" she asked.
There was a brief pause. I stopped fucking her tits.
"I'm not a porn star, you know."
"You've sure acted like it, you little slut."
"Shut up," she laughed.
"Seriously though, what's to stop me from letting go right now?"
"You'd better not."
"Just kiss me then."
She really didn't want to. I couldn't determine why. Surely I didn't disgust her. She told me I was hot a few times while she ground her cunt on my cock. I was pushing my luck when I moved my right hand and held the side of her face, running my thumb across her lips as well.