This is a work of fiction. Unless otherwise indicated, all the names, characters, businesses, places, events, and incidents in this story are either the product of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
This is the second submission of a three-part story. It won't make much sense if you haven't read part one. I could have put it in a different category, but the story as a whole seemed to fit best here.
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"Wha...?"
I think I just said that out loud. I'm pretty sure it came out as a groan though.
Where am I? Why do I
hurt
?
And what's that noise? It sounds like something between a buzz and a whoosh, and it keeps changing in pitch and volume. For some reason, focusing on that weird sound helps me climb out of the fog, and I recall what happened, although not exactly why I'm on my back, in the dark.
I remember being startled at the sound of a voice! Then something hit my head. The hatch! It had to be the hatch. The guy slammed it down on me. I...I was on the ladder. I must have fallen. I think the ladder is on top of me. I vaguely remember something falling on me now that I think about it.
I must be on the floor of the shelter. I start to move and my medical training kicks in and I remember to do an assessment.
A is for airway and alertness. Check. I'm certain I was unconscious though.
B is for breathing...check...obviously. Although I do feel a little pain when I inhale.
C is for circulation and control of bleeding. I guess I'll have to figure that out. I clearly didn't bleed out, but the back and top of my head is throbbing.
D is for disability. I can wiggle my toes and fingers. I slowly try to rotate my head...okay. Neck's sore, but no surprise there.
I try to lift it a little and feel a tug. Weird. I reach back and feel stickiness. My hair is stuck to the floor. So, I must have cut the back of my head when I hit. I think it may still be oozing. I feel the top where the hatch hit, and I think there may be a small cut along with some swelling.
I slide the ladder off me, and it barely makes a noise as it settles onto the floor at my side. I'm glad it's lightweight aluminum! Still would have preferred it if it had missed me.
E is for exposure. I'm not cold. I'm glad it's summer and that this thing is insulated. But when I think about it, the ground will cool this thing to around fifty-five because it isn't heated yet. So, I must not have been out for too long.
What
is
that damn sound?! It's coming from my left. Assuming I fell straight back the only thing over there would be... The conduit for electrical, water and HVAC! Nothing's hooked up yet so it's just some empty pipes in a bigger pipe. They come out on a utility box over in the tree line.
It has to be the wind. It's like the sound when you hold a bottle to your lips and blow just right. Damn, I'm lucky. This thing is designed to be airtight. It will be once I finish. That conduit should get me enough air...has been so far.
I need light. I know I had my flashlight, but did I put it in my pocket? A quick pat tells me no. Sigh.
And then it sinks in. Someone tried to kill me! What if they're still out there? I realize I'm shaking a bit at the thought. Okay. Fear is understandable. I need to be quiet...just in case.
My phone! It has a light. I remember putting it in my back pocket. I reach back. It's there! I pull it out and hit the button. Light! Shit. The screen is shattered. Still, the flashlight function should work. I programmed a button to work it directly. I fiddle a bit and... There!
I shine the light around as I inspect things. First are my fingers. Yup, blood, from where I felt the back of my head. The outer hatch is definitely shut. There are some pieces of conduit and a few boxes left from the HVAC parts.
There's the flashlight! It's off. I think I shut it off. I hope so, otherwise it means it went dead. It's a good quality one and I think it would still be lit if I'd left it on. LED's don't drain the battery much.
I look at the phone again. It's almost totally unreadable. I can't use it for anything other than this. I have no idea how much charge is left either. I also have no idea what time it is. Hell, I don't know the day either! Of course, my satellite phone is in my pack...in the trunk of the rental car.
So, now what?
I've got to get out of here. It's a good thing I have the ladder. I guess I'll get up there and try to listen. If I don't hear anything, I'll get out. Logic tells me that he's gone. Why would he hang around? I try to sit up.
Fuck! That hurt. I think I've broken a rib or two. The ladder is the most likely culprit. Okay, slower this time.
After some struggles, and pausing to catch my breath a few times, I've retrieved the flashlight...it works!...and I'm on the ladder. The heavy duty inner hatch opens in and has been hanging down since I put this thing in the ground. If that had hit me...well...it would have been worse.
The outer hatch that slammed down on me opens up and out and is essentially protection from the elements for the inner hatch, and depending on how the entrance ends up, is sometimes removed altogether.
It's thinner sheet metal and I get my ear as close as I can. I don't hear anything for a bit. Then...what was that? Coyote!
He's got to be gone. I have to try and get out. It's not like I can sit here forever. I push up very carefully. Nothing. It won't budge! What the...? Then I notice a dent in the door. What caused that?
Well shit.
Then I remember the escape hatch! I remember asking the client about it. He opted against it. Although we haven't discussed his motivations, I can guess a few things based on his choices. I doubt he's 'hardcore' because the shelter is smallish. More of a temporary refuge, like a storm shelter. I have to say, in a single container unit, an escape hatch wouldn't be easy to hide. It would be close to, and in plain view of, the entrance.
The hatch is there anyway as they come preinstalled in these. It's just that I didn't set it up like I would have. It's really just a round hatch in the ceiling, kind of like a hatch to get into a military tank, but upside down, in the ceiling of the unit.
Normally, I would cover the unit with up to four feet of fill but use a cardboard form to keep from covering the escape hatch. Then, I would fill all but the last six inches or so with sand in a large plastic bag so it wouldn't get wet. After that, top everything with something that blends in with the natural ground cover.
If you didn't know it was there you wouldn't, well, know that it was there.
In the event you needed it, you'd just pop the hatch from inside, slit the bag, and the sand and six-inch topper would run in, leaving you a clear escape route. Of the dozen or so of these I've installed, only about half the clients chose to do it. Their choice, not mine.
That meant I was going to have to dig.
I moved the ladder over, got up and released the hatch. A few bits of dirt fell down, but not as much as I'd hoped. At least I hadn't tamped things down! I decided I'd use a piece of conduit and began to chip away.
I had to take breaks frequently to catch my breath, and give my throbbing head, aching ribs, and now sore arms, a rest. I was trying to be quiet too...just in case. After what seemed like forever, a solid jab finally caused the remaining soil to cascade down into the shelter. I'd been just slightly to the side and managed to avoid most of it.
No light shone through, so that meant it was dark out. I waited while I listened, but other than the occasional coyote howling in the distance and the whisper of the wind in the evergreens, it seemed clear. Time to climb out.
The ceiling in the shelter was a little over eight feet. The top of the step ladder came within inches of it. I slowly climbed it until my head poked above the surface, which was about four feet above the top of the shelter. A careful look around made me believe I was alone. It also showed the reason I wasn't able to get out of the entry hatch. A large tree was laying across it. I was lucky it hadn't blocked this way out as well!
After a couple of minor dirt slides, a few muffled gasps of pain, and a lot of dirt under my fingernails, I was laying on the ground, face up. The stars were beautiful! Funny I noticed that given the circumstances.