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The Promise 34

The Promise 34

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DB#20 Halloween special 2

Edited by kenjisato.

He kept his promise all these years.

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CHAPTER 1

"You won't believe it, Maggie! I found an old fort!" Red Harding Junior's voice was buzzing with excitement. His best friend, Maggie Olson, was following him through a groomed path that led to the woods behind the Hardings' farm.

The forest was beautiful, lush, and green with birds chirping and singing. Walking through the forest was calming. The kids were smiling, they felt very much at home. They didn't have any fear or worry, as they moved through the trees.

"I was exploring here," Red said, "when I found a stone bridge across the creek, I crossed it, and found the fort. They only built the floor and two walls. We can finish it. I'll ask Grandpa for supplies."

"Why do we have to call it a fort?" Maggie asked, as they walked deeper into the shady forest. "Let's call it a clubhouse."

"That's such a girly thing to call it," Red argued. "I suppose you'll want to hang curtains and have a tea set."

"Maybe," Maggie retorted, her voice rising a notch. She crossed her arms, the defiance evident in her set jaw and a sparkle of challenge in her eyes.

A mourning dove cooed in the trees, somewhere in the distance, and the sound was followed by the familiar sound of rushing water in the creek.

"We're close," Red said. "It's been abandoned for some time. Whoever started building it, never finished it."

Sunlight filtered through the leaves, dappling the forest floor in patches of light and shadow. Maggie's eyes gleamed. "We can decorate it for Halloween, invite our friends, and tell scary stories! Imagine them coming here in the dark. It'll be awesome!"

"Have you picked your costume yet?" Red asked.

"Same as usual," Maggie replied. "Werewolf."

Red rolled his eyes. "Still obsessed with Angel, the werewolf vigilante?"

"He's amazing," Maggie insisted. "He fights for those, who the system wrongs. You should read the first book. That's all it takes to get hooked."

"Nah, I prefer to read web comics," Red retorted.

"So, how about we meet here tomorrow to tell stories after trick-or-treating?" Maggie suggested.

Red hesitated. "I'm not sure. Maybe it's better if this place stays a secret."

When they reached the creek, Red was first to make his way across the stone bridge, leaping from one moss-covered rock to another, to avoid getting splashed by the rushing water.

"Can we tell Lily, at least?" Maggie pleaded. "She's a good friend, too."

Red twisted his mouth. The more people who knew about the fort, the less likely it was to stay a secret.

Maggie looked at him with puppy eyes.

He finally conceded. "Fine, but only her."

They walked a short path until they got to a clearing.

"Ta-da!" Red exclaimed, looking at Maggie and spreading his arms wide. "Here it is! Come on!"

Mesmerized by his joy, Maggie followed.

"There's someone else here," she warned Red in a whisper, pointing at a man who loomed on the fort's floor. He seemed to be in his thirties and was wearing jeans, a blue T-shirt, and sneakers.

Red turned around in one quick movement.

"Who are you? What are you doing in our fort?" Red demanded.

He grabbed a branch from the ground and took a step forward. Maggie couldn't help but admire her friend's courage.

The stranger raised his hands. "Whoa there, easy, son. I come in peace."

Red's grip tightened on the branch.

"This place was my fort when I was your age. My best friend and I built it years ago, earning the supplies by doing odd jobs around town," the man explained. "It actually holds some special memories for me."

The stranger didn't look threatening. Of course, that didn't mean he wasn't threatening. A lot of dangerous strangers looked perfectly normal, thought Maggie.

She cautiously approached, her eyes flitting between the stranger and Red. "So, you and your friend are the ones who started this clubhouse..." she began, keeping her distance. "Why didn't you ever finish it?" she asked, directly.

The stranger chuckled. "Do you have a moment? If you do, I can tell you the whole story." He gestured to the empty space beside him on the fort floor.

"We have time until dinner," Maggie said. She hesitated, but seeing no immediate threat, took a tentative step closer.

Red, however, remained wary. "Stranger danger, Maggie," he whispered, grabbing her arm.

"He doesn't look dangerous," she replied.

The man smiled. "Of course not, kids. I grew up right here in Middletown. My best friend and I walked through this forest countless times exploring these hidden paths."

Both children nodded in agreement. They knew exactly what the man was talking about.

"You're Red Harding's son, aren't you?" the man continued, pointing at the boy's mop of red hair.

"Yeah. My dad owns the restaurant down by Main square. Maggie and I are staying at my grandpa's farm for a few days."

"Your grandpa is John Harding, he knows me," the man said. "I come back here every Halloween. I left my car parked at your grandfather's farm. You can call him if you have a phone, just to let him know you're with Neil Blackburn. Go ahead, I won't move."

Red retrieved his phone and punched his grandfather's number. Briefly explaining the situation, he received confirmation that Neil was, indeed, known to the family.

"All right, Mr. Blackburn," Maggie chimed in, her earlier apprehension replaced by curiosity. "Tell us about this clubhouse..."

Red interjected. "It's not a clubhouse, Maggie, it's a fort!"

"You can call me Neil, if you want..."

"Whatever," she said, under her breath.

"Come and sit with me, kids," Neil invited them. "It's a long story."

Both kids slowly climbed the branches and sat down on the wooden floor. Maggie pulled her knees to her chest and wrapped her arms around her legs.

Neil chuckled. "To tell you the story of the fort, I need to start with my older brother, Oscar. He was one of those exceptional individuals, who seemed to possess an effortless brilliance. Between the two of us, he'd always been the more naturally gifted, the star athlete, while I was content to be a quiet observer. He got straight A's without breaking a sweat, while I was a consistent B student and had to work hard for my grades."

"Yeah, there is a kid at my school who is exactly like him," Red complained, leaving his distrust behind and sitting close to the man.

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"He was the reason why my parents were always on my back. Oscar was the popular one, while I was more of a silent, who spent hours reading science fiction and fantasy novels."

"Have you read the Werewolf Vigilante Saga?" Maggie interjected, eager to connect with Neil over their shared love of fantasy.

"Of course," the man replied, a smile. "I'm still hooked on fantasy books. Angel's character is particularly well-written."

Maggie's smile widened. "Absolutely!" she agreed, her earlier apprehension replaced by a sense of camaraderie.

"I won't deny that part of my competitive spirit with Oscar stemmed from jealousy," Neil admitted. "But it wasn't solely because he was better looking or more popular. He stole the first girl I had my heart set on."

Red scrunched up his nose. "Oh, no! Please tell me this isn't turning into a love story," he groaned.

Maggie softly nudged Red. "What's wrong with love stories?"

Red twisted his mouth. "Ugh, they're full of mushy stuff like kissing."

Neil chuckled knowingly. "I understand where you're coming from, Red. Trust me, that changes in a few years. Back then, I was hopelessly in love with Gabrielle Haskell. From the moment she'd moved into the big house down the street, I thought she was the most beautiful girl on the planet. I watched her from afar every time I could, she had long dark hair and the most beautiful eyes."

Neil seemed to get lost in his thoughts.

"Every time Gabrielle laughed my heart absolutely swelled with love for her. She had the most beautiful smile I had ever seen," he continued.

Maggie leaned in, captivated by the budding love story unfolding before her.

"I looked at her only for a few seconds, but Gabrielle caught me looking at her. Our eyes met and I felt butterflies dancing in my stomach. My heart hammered in my chest. Then, she winked at me, and I felt my face flush. I bet she liked doing that."

"Did you ever hang out with her?" Maggie asked, completely drawn into the story.

Neil chuckled. "No. For one, Gabrielle was in eighth grade, while I was a year behind in seventh."

"Oh, so she was older than you," Red chimed in.

Neil chuckled again, this time at Red's remark. "At that age, a year can feel like a lifetime. Even though I got taller over the summer, I never gathered the courage to talk to her."

"I'm taller now, too!" Red blurted out, puffing out his chest. A blush reddened his freckled cheeks.

Maggie rolled her eyes. "No, you're not!"

"Yes, I am!" Red insisted. "Grandma Molly measures my height every year on my birthday. You can check the marks on the doorway in my room if you don't believe me."

Neil coughed gently to redirect their attention back to his story.

"Sorry, Neil," Maggie apologized. "Did you ever get to talk to Gabrielle?"

"Actually," Neil replied with a hint of a smile, "Gabrielle did."

"Every day, during lunch hour, I sat down with my best friend, Steve Manning, on our usual bench by the chain-link fence inside the basketball court.

"Not long after Steve and I finished our sandwiches, Gabrielle came walking over along the center line of the basketball court with her four friends close behind. I nearly choked on the last bite of my sandwich. She stood in front of me and said..."

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"Hey, Neil," Gabrielle greeted me with a warm smile. "I like your shirt."

"Thanks," I replied, trying to sound laid back. "It's brand new."

"What's going on?"

"Not much," I replied with a shrug.

Gabrielle slid down onto the bench beside me, while one of the girls took the seat next to Steve. My friend bit his lip, clearly nervous. I wouldn't be surprised if he was sweating buckets.

The other two girls stood in front of us, chewing gum and blowing bubbles.

"Neil," Gabrielle said, softly touching my arm. "I wonder if you could do a favor for us."

"Sure," I managed to say. I gulped and added, "What is it?"

Gabrielle leaned in, her eyes flickering towards her friend on the bench beside Steve. "Go ahead, Megan. Ask him, she encouraged the other girl.

Megan extended a sealed envelope to me. I took it and examined it briefly. There was nothing written on it.

"This is Megan," Gabrielle introduced her friend. "She just moved here from Texas."

Steve and I said "hi" in unison.

Turning back to Gabrielle, I asked her. "What's this letter for?"

She leaned closer, her voice dropped to a whisper that tickled my ear. "Megan has a bit of a crush on your brother. Would you mind giving him this letter?"

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Maggie's face fell. "Aww, so Gabrielle just wanted you to deliver a letter to your brother?" she exclaimed.

A wry smile played on Neil's lips. "The story of my life," he muttered. "You hit the nail on the head, Maggie. It was Oscar who girls were after all along. But, please, let me continue."

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I spun around on the bench, stealing a glance at my brother across the field, he was playing basket with the other boys.

"Sure," I mumbled, shoving the envelope deep into my backpack. I couldn't hide my disappointment because I wasn't the reason why she approached me.

The girls whispered and giggled with excitement. They grabbed Megan's arm and dragged her to the other side of the court.

Gabrielle remained seated for a moment. I didn't dare looking at her. A thick silence engulfed us. What could I say to her?

Then, she stood up.

"For the record," she said, sliding her hands inside her back pockets, "Megan's the one with a crush on your brother. Not me."

"Okay," I replied, not knowing what to do with this information.

She hesitated and then gave a small wave. "See you later, Neil."

My gaze followed her as she rejoined her friends. A small ember of hope flared to life within me. Maybe I wasn't as indifferent to Gabrielle as I thought.

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"So, Gabrielle liked you?" Red asked, summarizing the situation.

"She clarified it wasn't my brother who interested her," Neil pointed out. "That didn't necessarily translate to her having feelings for me. But a small part of me dared to dream she might like me a little bit."

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Red nodded.

"Torn between hope and hopelessness, I decided to play it cool, waiting for some further sign, any shred of confirmation that could solidify this newfound possibility."

"Did you give the letter to your brother, Neil?" Maggie chimed in.

Red wrinkled his nose. "Ugh, if it were me, I would've ripped that letter to shreds."

"A promise is a promise," Neil countered. "A man is only as good as his word."

"Yeah, my dad and grandpa always say that, too," Red conceded.

"I didn't enjoy giving the letter to Oscar," Neil admitted. "Part of me just wanted to burn that envelope. The last thing I wanted was to inflate his ego more than it already was. Girls practically fawned over him, and he enjoyed the attention too much."

"So, what happened then?" Maggie asked captivated by Neil's story.

"I went to his room and tapped on his door. Oscar was hunched over his desk, working on his homework. He swiveled around in his chair, surprised to see me standing there. 'What do you want?' my brother asked.

"With a flick of my wrist, I sent the envelope sailing through the air like a makeshift paper airplane. I wasn't going to personally delivering the letter to him like his servant. 'This is from an eighth-grader,' I mumbled. 'She asked me to pass it on.'

"Not waiting for his reaction, I spun on my heel and walked downstairs, back to my own room to feel miserable."

Maggie let out a sympathetic sigh. "Oh, Neil, poor you."

"Yeah, well, as I said, the story of my life. On the bright side, Gabrielle allowed me to walk her home the next day, and that became our routine for the rest of the week. Steve kept pestering me about when I planned to make a move on her.

"I had never gone out on a date, held a girl's hand or kissed one. The mere thought of going out with Gabrielle made me feel ill. She was gorgeous and I was... just me. Dating was venturing into uncharted territory."

"Never kissed a girl before," Red blurted out. He darted a quick glance in Maggie's direction, "Not that I'm interested or anything," he mumbled under his breath

"By Friday, the thought of enduring an entire weekend without seeing Gabrielle was unbearable. It took every ounce of courage I had to ask her, 'Hey, Gabrielle, would you, maybe... like to go to a movie with me on Saturday night?'

"It was the first time I'd ever asked a girl out on a proper date, and the awkwardness was palpable."

Maggie leaned forward; her eyes wide with anticipation. "Did Gabrielle say yes, Neil?"

Neil winced slightly. "She mentioned she was going to Glenn Rackett's party. Then, she casually asked if I'd be attending..."

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"I felt embarrassed and tried to act like I didn't care. I shrugged. "I wasn't invited."

A grin split Gabrielle's face. "Well, consider yourself invited now! You should totally come."

"I didn't want to go to a party hosted by Glenn Rackett, a kid I didn't know. I thought I wouldn't know anyone else there."

"You could bring Steve," Gabrielle suggested. "Glenn wouldn't mind."

I hesitated a moment, pondering my next words. "I don't know," I mumbled. "What about your friends? Sandra, Kathryn... and that new girl who wrote to my brother?"

"They're all coming, too," Gabrielle chirped with excitement in her voice "See? It'll be a blast. Everyone will be there."

We resumed walking, but I still wasn't sure about it. It was way out of my comfort zone. "I don't know, Gabrielle."

"Please, Neil," she pleaded. Her fingers brushed against my arm. "Come on. Say you'll come. I've been looking forward to slow dancing with you..."

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Maggie's face lit up. "Slow dancing? See, I knew she liked you!" she exclaimed, pumping her fist in the air.

A wry smile played on Neil's lips. "That's what I thought, too, at that moment," Neil said. "But let's not get ahead of ourselves just yet."

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"Okay," I heard myself saying. "What time are you going?"

"Sandra's parents are dropping us off at eight." She walked backward toward her driveway, holding her books close to her chest. "So, I'll see you tomorrow night?" she asked, with a delicately raised eyebrow.

"Yeah, I'll see you then."

"Awesome."

"I turned to walk up the hill to my house at the top of the street, resisting the urge to take off in a run, because I wasn't sure if she might still be watching me through her front window. As always, I wanted to play it cool."

CHAPTER 2

"Did you go to the party, Neil?" Maggie asked, her eyes sparkling with curiosity.

Neil slumped forward and braced his knees. "Yes, and I wish I hadn't. Thirteen-year-old me, completely smitten and out of my element — what could go wrong, huh?"

"Spill it! What happened?" Red chimed in, leaning forward with eager anticipation.

"Be patient, Red," Neil replied with a chuckle. "I'm coming to that."

"When Steve and I rang the doorbell, Glenn's dad greeted us at the door and sent us downstairs.

"A wide-open basement greeted us. A long table laden with chips and cheese dip stood against the wall, a cooler overflowing with ice and cans of soda positioned beneath it. Loud music blasted from a corner, making conversation difficult."

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"Let's get something to drink," Steve said, as we moved across the room to the snack table. We busied ourselves with cheese sticks and cola and looked up uneasily when Glenn Haskett came downstairs with about six guys.

To our immense relief, he gave us a nod and said, "Hey guys," before he leaped onto the sofa next to the girls and made them laugh and squeal.

The room was full of kids I didn't know. I felt completely out of place. Steve looked as uncomfortable as me. We didn't belong there.

Then, the doorbell rang again, and a sigh of relief escaped my lips as Gabrielle and her friends entered the room.

There she was. At last.

She paused on the bottom step, scanned the room for a moment, and found me. My heart pounded as our eyes met. Her face lit up with a smile, and in that instant, the awkwardness, the unfamiliar faces — it all melted away.

Five minutes later, I found myself slow dancing with Gabrielle. Gathering all my courage, I leaned in and...

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"You kissed her! I knew it!" Maggie squealed, throwing up her arms. "I knew you two were meant to be."

A shadow flickered across Neil's features. "Yes, I did. Steve told me that if I didn't kiss her, she'll think you was not interested."

"So, how was it?" Red pressed, his curiosity piqued. "The kiss...?"

Neil shrugged. "Well, I didn't have anything to compare it to. Gabrielle didn't complain, so I guess it was as good as a first kiss can be. I thought she and I were an item then. I started thinking about where I would take her on our first date.

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