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The Man Named Carlos Ch 10

The Man Named Carlos Ch 10

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Chapter 10: The Visit

Saturday came in a flash for Carlos. With another work week closed, he was glad he didn't fuck things up with Tiffany too badly. He had a suspicion he would have to answer to either Dr. Weiss or Juan or maybe both someday.

But at that particular moment, he cared nothing for other people's opinion of him. What mattered to him was getting to his meeting.

When he parked his car, he walked into the large multi-storied building. He went in through the entrance, passed the pharmacy, past the atrium to an elevator, and once inside, he his the button for the neurology department.

Once he was there, he found a woman at a desk. She looked up to him with the doe-eyed look of a twenty something who had been to nursing school and picked the comfiest job for the right amount of pay.

He could not judge her for that. Risk assessment was not the only thing he was good at. He had also been very good about product value. No shame in it.

"Hello. I am Carlos Santiago. I am here to see Doctor Elliot Goldstein," he said, leaning on the counter.

"I am sorry, Mister Santiago, but Doctor Goldstein is busy," she said with some level of uncertainty.

"A-lys-sa! Get your butt up," said the lovely southern voice of Nancy Avery. She snapped her fingers and came up by the young nurse's side. "Didn't I tell you that Dr. Goldstein would have a guest?"

Carlos laughed and motioned for Nancy to come around to give him a hug. Of course the five foot six plump woman would comply with his desires.

"It's good to see you, Nance," he said, holding her in a big hug.

"It's good to see you too, sugar," she said, enjoying his strong arms holding her. "I wish it was under better circumstances."

"We can't help that," Carlos remarked simply.

When he pulled back, he looked at the woman in her nurse's scrubs. Her hair was in braids and did not hide the streaks of gray she developed from healthy aging. She was a near sixty year old woman, and the only sign of that was in her hair. Her smooth skin and deep brown eyes hid the rest of her time alive from everyone.

"I'm still sorry Dr. Kauffman tried to throw his weight around, baby. I know how much this means to you."

"Thank you, gorgeous," he said back.

"Gorgeous?" Nancy said, turning her head and blushing slightly. "We

both

know that compliment ain't real."

"You know it is. You are doing me a huge favor," he said, holding up his two books. They were paperbacks and well worn.

"I'll take those, baby. I wish you would visit more often," she said with a sigh.

"Well, I have a business to run, and you and I both know I have to avoid you-know-who."

"Begging my pardon, but fuck that man," Nancy said in a lower tone. "I don't give a damn about him. I give a damn about the man that

actually

visits for any reasonable amount of time." She shook her head in annoyance. "Did you know I saw him bring another woman in here with their kids?"

Carlos clenched his right fist. "Nancy...Don't tell me that. I will end up hurting him and going to jail."

"You have good lawyers," Nancy clapped back quickly. "Besides, he brought that young thing in here with the kids... Lord knows that woman is here

because

of that man."

Carlos smiled. If ever he were to appear before a judge, he would have no better ally than that of Nancy Avery in his corner.

With his books in hand, she motioned to where a tall, thin, bald white man (who sported a light tan) was standing. On his face were a pair of circular eyeglasses that only made the medical professional even more distinguished. Truth be told, Carlos always likened him to a 90s Jeff Goldblum, but he worried that it would come off as disrespectful to the man's heritage given one was named Goldstein and the other was Goldblum.

"The doctor will see you now," Nancy said in her sing-song voice as Carlos walked up to Elliot Goldstein.

"Ah, Carlos!" the doctor said.

Carlos reached into the sleeve of his coat. He was not sure how security or anyone would have taken to him bringing in a twenty five year old Cognac, but he proffered it to Elliot.

"Tell Doctor Kauffman that I am sorry. I didn't mean to be disrespectful."

"You always bring the nicest apology gifts," Goldstein said. He could appreciate what he was given. The drink he accepted was worth more than a grand, and so the doctor made it a point to disappear into his office and then reappear empty handed. "Take a walk with me?"

Of course, Carlos would say yes. This was his only chance to talk to the man responsible for someone important to Carlos.

"Is she improving?" Carlos asked bluntly.

"Her condition remains the same, Carlos, but you know that," Elliot said.

"I just thought with time..."

"That's not how this works," the doctor replied as they walked away from the more public area of the department. "We've been over this. I know you care for her, but after the blood loss, coupled with her anemia and

significant

-- and let me be clear, it was significant, Carlos -- blood loss, her case is complex to say the least."

Carlos would not have it. He lifted both hands to his chest level. "But there

has

to be something you can do."

"We are doing it, Carlos. You

know

that. Comas can vary depending on circumstances. Everything from the underlying cause to how long she's been unconscious to the brain damage from not having enough blood and oxygen." Doctor Elliot Goldstein made motions with his hands, so Carlos could understand how serious it was, given the stress on Carlos.

"Okay...What are the odds she wakes up?" Carlos asked with his usual straightforward directness.

Elliot paused them, motioning to a window to look out to the cars down below. He let out a heavy sigh. "That's what I am trying to tell you, Carlos," he said softly. "In Priya's case, since she has been in a coma for over a year, the prognosis suggests that she is not likely to wake up."

Carlos heard words like that before. Those were vagaries made to save a doctor from being sued.

"Give me a percentage, Doc. I need to know!"

The doctor shook his head. "That's not how it works. Our best research indicates that recovery from a coma lasting more than a year is small. The odds of meaningful recovery decrease significantly after such an extended period of time." He paused, looking out the window. "I know you want to continue to provide support and care for her, but Doctor Kauffman was right. The hospital will need the room."

"Don't give me his line!" Carlos said in a raised voice.

"You're going to hear it, Carlos!" the doctor snapped back. When he realized how he had reacted, the medical professional calmed himself. His familiarity to Carlos was breaking his usual professional demeanor. "I understand you wish to keep Priya here, and I truly empathize with your feelings here; believe me, I do. But...Carlos, please...listen to reason. It's important to consider moving her to a long-term care facility given her current condition. Doctor Kauffman was right, it is more cost-effective for her to be moved."

There was a moment of silence between them. These were not new facts to Carlos. He had heard them all before. He knew Kauffman was not wrong. Pragmatism was what helped him keep his fortune. It was the single-most useful quality in getting others to do as he wanted, but when it came to Priya, that did not matter.

"For me or the hospital?" Carlos asked.

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"Both. You pay us...what? Thirty thousand a month just to keep her here. I know it's out of pocket, too. Long-term care facilities specialize in providing the necessary support for patients like Priya," Elliot said, trying to be understanding. "This can ensure that she receives the appropriate care while also alleviating some financial strain on you."

"Elliot, you're the only person I trust with her care. What if she gets better? Or worse? I only trust you to help take care of her," Carlos said freely. Given it was only the two of them, he knew the doctor would not betray this momentary lapse in his usual behavior.

"It doesn't make sense for her to be here," the doctor replied. "I can visit her, check on her weekly at another facility if we coordinate, but it might be time for you to accept the she is--"

"No," Carlos hissed, leaning on the glass window. He inhaled quickly, turning his head from the doctor. He did not want to be seen like this. He did some math in his head.

"Would a million dollars cover it?" Carlos asked simply.

The doctor was taken aback. "What?"

"If I pay thirty grand a month anyway, this will be closer to eighty five, right? It could be a donation to the hospital. I don't care how we make it look, Elliot. She

stays

in

that

room!"

Elliot Goldstein let loose another sigh. This time it was an exhalation of surrender and concession.

"Come on. Let's go to Nancy. Get your checkbook. We will figure it out."

It was the simplest thing for them to go back to the general waiting area for the other patients. He was sure waiting hours and so on would end soon, but while writing the check, Carlos knew that the rules were for others, not for him.

Nancy did help the two of them quickly figure something out. While not the normal billing practices, Carlos got what he wanted. He wrote the check out to the hospital for the total of one million dollars in United States currency.

He looked up to Nancy, who he knew really ran the department, and he asked, "Is that it?"

"That's it, baby," she said. "Go see your girl," she added, handing him his two books.

He accepted them and walked into a dimly lit room. There was a flat screen television in the corner that was scarcely used. Carlos believed it would have had cobwebs if not for the nightly cleaning. Beeping for Priya's heart rate permeated the room, but for him, it might as well have been a seconds' hand on a clock. He did not care to even acknowledge it.

There she was. Long black hair, slightly larger than average nose, brown complexion, though lighter in skin tone from a lack of sun. He would need to talk to Nancy about that. It was not about vanity, but rather, he worried that she appeared closer to a corpse than the woman she was. Until her last heartbeat rang and the brain signals were gone, Carlos would

never

give up hope.

Her physique was still the same to him, slightly chubby, full cheeks, and some delicateness in her wrists. Well maybe she was thinner, but he could not be sure...He was wearing his rose-tinted glasses after all.

He brushed her hair out of her face. She was as perfect as when he knew her at nineteen.

"You know...if I could go back and do it all over again, I would have been poor if it just meant I could be with you," he said softly. "I could have been an engineer or an author or a painter. Remember that, Pri. You were going to be the doctor, and I could have been the stay at home dad," he said softly.

Leaning down, he almost kissed her forehead, but that was not for him. He stopped himself. Pulling back, he looked back and found the chair to sit in. It was not the comfiest thing in the world, but if it meant he was in her presence, what did he care?

There was a lamp nearby. Probably from Nancy. He turned the switch and the light came to life. He got up and turned off the overhead lights. Too many lights and his eyes burned from reading.

He removed his coat from his body and grabbed the glasses within. He did not need them for reading. Rather, he had them so that when he read to her, he was his truest self. He wore the suit and contacts and so on and so forth for others. When he was with Priya, he would make sure he was the man she remembered.

Maybe then, she would be more likely to wake up.

He looked at his two books. He hefted them both before setting it on the nightstand next to her.

"BrontΓ« was more for me than you, right, hon?" he asked, knowing no answer would come. "You always liked your fairytales."

And so,

Wuthering Heights

was put next to Priya to rest. He was not the quickest reader, but in the next 36 hours, he could read her both. He was seasoned enough at the recitation.

"Arabian Nights," he read. "Translated by Richard F. Burton."

He flipped some pages ahead. Priya was not Muslim, but rather had been a very lapsed Sikh woman, so he skipped the early parts about Allah. Though, of course, Carlos would not be one to disrespect anyone or any faith in her presence.

"The story of King Shahryar and his brother," Carlos went on. "Verily the works and words of those gone before us have become instances and examples to men of our modern day, that folk may view what admonishing chances befel other folk and may therefrom take warning..."

---

Nancy looked at Doctor Elliot Goldstein.

"Be honest, Elliot. What's the chances of her waking up? That man needs the truth," she said.

"He has it. What he really needs is to let go," Goldstein said with a shake of his head.

"Hell will freeze over before he gives up on her," Nancy said.

Elliot Goldstein sighed again. He was doing that more and more because of Carlos. "Yeah. And he will burn through his fortune if it means there's a chance she wakes up. Next year though...we

have

to convince him to let her go to a long term facility."

"Remember that bit I said about hell?" Nancy asked.

"Yeah...No. I get it, but..." he sighed again. "She's gone from him, whether he wants to accept that or not. Mr. Bhullar makes all of her health decisions. Even if we

had

a treatment that

might

wake her up, it would be up to him whether or not we even get to try. And he's still wondering how she's in that room at all."

"Private donation," Nancy said quickly, waving the check. She let out a scornful laugh. "With all due respect to

Mr. Bhullar

, fuck that man. She wouldn't even

need

that room, Elliot, if not for

that

man."

"We aren't allowed to judge," Goldstein said. "We treat them, and their choices are theirs."

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Nancy harrumphed at that. "Alyssa, if anyone tries to go into Mrs. Pirya Bhullar's room, you come get me before letting them

anywhere

near that room. Custodian, doctor, anyone. Only myself or Doctor Goldstein are allowed to see her while Mister Santiago is here. Am I clear?"

The thin twenty something nurse with short brown hair nodded.

"Good!" Nancy said to her. She turned back to Goldstein and said, "I expect a cup of that cognac he gave you. And it

better

reach Doctor Kauffman, or I will snitch on your ass

so fast!

"

Doctor Goldstein laughed. "Yeah, yeah. Just make sure accounting gets that check."

"Where do you think I am going now?" Nancy asked sarcastically. She made a show of getting up with the check in hand. Billings was going to

love

her.

---

Michelle was not a patient woman. She was used to having her way at a reasonable pace. She was by no means a bitch, but after having kids for a man, she

expected

some level of effort.

Her most recent conversation with Carlos had affected her, even if she did not want to readily admit it. Steve was doing less and less. He felt entitled for doing above bare minimum.

To a degree, she did not care. He

was

her husband. He was a good man, but when he made so many calls, and she felt she could make fewer and fewer decisions, it was becoming difficult for her to justify his behavior.

Did Michelle want to sleep with Carlos? With a doubt. She still recalled him telling her no almost a decade ago. And why? He had been in love with some punjabi princess. Did that girl even know what she had in Carlos? Of course not. She shacked up with the first Indian dude that her family approved of. Michelle didn't hate many people, but Priya had been at the top of the list. Busty bitch had no idea what she had in Carlos.

Thankfully, Michelle did not live her life wondering what other women did. She did not check in at all on the woman. Priya was not someone to lose sleep over. The only reason Michelle even cared is that she knew that the effects of that particular woman were still ringing true into the present.

Carlos was a good man. Struggling but a good one. Michelle knew deep down that he was a monogamous kind of guy, but since he lost her, he was fucking whatever he wanted, whenever he wanted.

While she could not judge

his

behavior, she would judge her husband. He had made vows to her, made promises to her, and swore how things would be. She was meant to call him to task if he did not measure up.

Running out of the house just because he had a hissy fit would not do. As such, she had a friend watch the kids while she waited in the living room wearing a see through black lace piece of lingerie.

When Steve finally came home, she knew she would use her best assets to her advantage.

Steve walked through the door.

He had come home late the other night. Their kids were asleep. He came to bed and went to sleep. When morning came, he was not talking to her. He was picking up whatever shifts he wanted.

That pissed her off. With a weekend, he had a short shift, so this was the best time to talk to him.

"Michelle," he said, hopeful. "Are you finally done worrying about Carlos?"

She could see it. Everything Carlos said to her on that rooftop was true. Here was her self indulgent, self-entitled, wanting husband. Oh she did love him dearly, but this would not do.

"I am babe," she said honestly. She grabbed him by the collar of his security uniform.

She did not even worry about the shirt. Her hands went for his belt and had him pantless before either of them could count to five. His cock was hardened before it came free. He looked at her hungrily, and she was going to give him a meal.

Pushing him onto the couch, she straddled her husband. Her flowing red hair fell down over her face, tickling her husband's nose. But what did he care? His cock head could feel her wet pussy lips.

The warmth entrance was giving him all the pleasure he could want as Michelle pulled her top down and her overflowing double D tits fell out. Her large pink areola and nipples were in his mouth before he could get control of himself.

"Fuck yes, babe!" he groaned. Barely was his cock in her, and he was twitching, resisting his need to cum.

"Baby..." she cooed, milking his cock on her pussy.

"Yes, Michelle."

"I need to be fucked well today," she said in her most submissive tone.

"I will fuck you well, baby," he declared.

This was her moment. The glint of mischievous intent shined in her eye.

"Really? Because you haven't," she said while letting a moan out.

"What?" Steve said, tits in his face, and cock buried between her legs. He was so lost in her sex that he was not sure what she was saying.

"I haven't cum in weeks, babe. You know what? I am going to let Carlos fuck me," she said, riding harder and with intention in every sway of her hips.

"No, babe...Fuck...this feels so good," he said, his legs shaking from what she was doing.

"He's going to fuck this pussy and cum in your wife's pussy. We owe him, don't we babe?"

"Fuck...that's so hot. Yes we do, babe!"

That was it. That was the admission she needed.

"If you don't make me cum, he will. He's going to fuck your wife, he's going to claim my pussy. You like that, don't you babe?"

"Gawd! Yes. I do! Fuck! I'm cumming!"

Michelle groaned, smirking. Just like that, it was in reality. He admitted it. She did not cum herself, but the intimate knowledge being out made her happy. Steve shot his load

deep

in her, harder than when he had cum on her in the most recent days.

That was the truth. That was why he was scared. Michelle was starting to see that Carlos was right, even about her and her husband.

---

Folding laundry, cleaning the dishes, fixing the curtains on her house were all distractions from the call. She was struggling with this.

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