Inspired from "The Girl Next Door" a true story of a horrible tragedy.
My thanks to FernieLyn who proofread this piece and gave me some good opinions and insight! Thank you FernieLyn!
This story takes place in a more innocent time.
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The moment when I saw her changed all our lives forever. It had taken me a few days to piece together little snippets of talk that Andrew, my eighteen year old son had said over the dinner table as we ate our meals before the confused and troubled boy ran next door to continue "playing" with his best friend Jake.
The questions he asked while we ate our meals were on subjects that were troubling.
"How can pain be enjoyable?"
"Why are all girls whores?"
Ginny, my wife's face dropped each time he asked a question. I asked him where he heard these things and he just muttered, "Around."
After he was excused, Ginny and I spoke about the disturbing turn in topics that our son was interested in. A few times I wondered if his friend next door, Jake was filling his head with these things.
Jake was eighteen as well, the same age as Andrew, and as far as we could tell, he was a good innocent young man just like Andrew. That summer, the two of them had been inseparable, fixing their cars together, going to the park and fishing at the pond together, and just hanging out.
Jake's family seemed to be okay as well. Ginny was friendly with Gertrude, Jake's mother. I waved to Fred, his father each time I saw him outside. Jake had an older brother named Jeff, who I suspected was the one who was putting these thoughts into Andrew's head. However, I wasn't sure how to address the issue, short of banning Andrew from seeing his best friend all summer long, which as an adult was pretty much inpossible.
Gertrude's niece was staying with them. Her name was Melanie. Her parents had died in an accident a few months ago and Melanie came to live with Gertrude and her family. Melanie was a small, blonde girl. She was eighteen and she always seemed sad. She had become friendly with Andrew and Jake, and had avoided Jeff as far as I could see.
As I pondered over the last meal, before Andrew had left to go over to the house next door, I wondered what his last cryptic words to me meant.
"Dad, if you had a secret and knew that it was wrong, would it be okay to break the secret, even if you got into trouble yourself?"
These words gave me pause. I kept my face straight and looked at him. He couldn't meet my eyes.
"I think it would be your duty to break that secret if it was wrong," I said. I paused to let him talk. He was not forthcoming, so I prodded him.
"Is there some secret you need to tell me?" I asked.
His face flushed and he shook his head. He quickly excused himself and asked to go next door.
Ginny and I were upset. Something was wrong.
"What are we going to do?" she asked me. "We have to make him tell us!"
I tried to think. I was in agreement with her, but I wanted Andrew to come to us. He had become different this past week. The entire family next door seemed to behave normally, almost like they were trying to behave like so. They all made an effort to be seen by us doing their regular things. Jeff had even helped to wash my car with me. Fred was more cheerful and friendly than ever; he normally said only one word to me before going about his business, now he was actually chatty. He actually seemed to be feeling me out on something, some issue --
Everyone had been normal. Well except for Melanie, who I hadn't seen in over a week.
She was always outside playing. Now I tried to remember the last time I had seen her. All those comments Andrew made, they all related back to an attitude towards a woman, or a girl.
"Oh god!" I suspected.
"What?" Ginny asked.
"Stay by the phone!" I told her as I left the house and headed over next door. I hoped that it was just our imagination. I wondered whether I was just jumping the gun. I knocked on the door. No answer.
I tried the door and it was unlocked. That wasn't unusual as the kids ran in and out of there all the time.
Entering the house, I found it empty. "Hello?" I almost whispered. "Anyone home? It's Brandon."
Nothing.
I listened up the stairs and heard nothing, no steps no activity. Strange, both Gertrude's and Fred's cars were still there.
I walked into the kitchen and noticed a door leading to the cellar. The house was built just like mine so I knew that the cellar was a full sized cellar. I heard some muffled noise coming from the door and slowly opened it.
Peering down the stairs I heard some muffled voices. I couldn't make them out so I slowly climbed down the stairs as silently as possible. At the bottom of the stairs I discovered that the cellar had been divided into two rooms. The wall to the other room seemed to be soundproofed and insulated.
I heard a crack. Then a muffled howl of pain. I heard some sobbing and the voice of Gertrude speaking.
I grasped the door handle and opened it.
They were all there.
In the little room.
Gertrude and Fred sitting on a ratty couch.
Jeff, Jake and Andrew were standing.
Jeff was holding a large stick.
They all turned to face me and in a flash, they all registered discovery.
I was still confused as Fred and Gertrude jumped up. No one said anything as I looked beyond Jeff and saw her.
Melanie.
She was naked. Standing with her hands stretched above her head. They were attached to rope that kept her taught and standing in that position. Her wrists were bloody from the rope. Her entire body was cut and bruised. The stick looked to be only one tool that they had used on her.
Her face was matted with dried hair and blood and tears. Her one eye was blackened and her mouth was inflamed. She was sobbing. Looking down her body, I saw written in marker and lipstick words that no eighteen year old, no adult, should have used.
On her breasts were written "Whore Sacks".