This story was one of my first tries to write for Literotica but was never finished at the time. I made several attempts to tie it together but was never happy with the result. Now, close to two years later, I can say that I am quite pleased with the latest version. It is a total re-write and should hopefully be fairly free of grammatical errors.
Be aware that there is no sex to turn you on and it is quite long and slow. Also, the descriptions of police and social services is not very accurate. Just as in many films, TV productions and crime novels the realism has suffered from 'poetic liberty' to fit the need of the story. That doesn't mean that it is impossible that it could be real somewhere, sometime...
Let's see how you like it.
Halin24
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Owning a bar is an interesting thing. I know, because I do. Not a large flashy but a small and cosy one. In fact it is my second, I inherited the first one from an uncle I hardly knew when I was 29. I have no idea why I got it, but since he had no family of his own I guess I was as good a choice as anyone and I decided to give it a try.
I have never regretted it even if the hours are long and the income isn't much too brag about. The compensation is the people I meet, or maybe I should say the personalities. I have a group of regulars who drop in on a daily basis or close to it. At the first place it was Tuborg, Latte, Peanut and whatever they were called. As you can guess those names came from what they always ordered. Then there were those who had personal stories linked to the bar: Exit, Drive, Honey, Lynn, Sally.
At my second bar the most prominent one was, and still is, Brit.
To get special names like that you must of course be well known and liked, newcomers and others are referred to as 'you there' or 'girlie with the big bag' or something, but when you have your name it sticks.
I myself was called Temp at the first bar because no one thought I would stay for long, they thought I was a temporary owner. I was still called that after 5 years when I sold it.
Men dominates the clientele but that also means that regular females are more appreciated. Lynn, to take an example, had a tough start. She was out with her boyfriend and they happened to drop in after dinner. Sitting in a corner they didn't notice the woman who arrived 10 minutes later, but
she
noticed
them
. She was not alone you might say as her stomach was quite large, and she sure knew the reason.
"What the fuck, Dave!" she yelled to the man. "You get me knocked up, then disappear before the wedding without a word and now you sit here with another woman?! You can just forget that you will get away with this! I'm calling my brothers to deal with you, asshole."
She took out her phone and started to dial. The guy left as a rocket with the woman just a step behind, talking on the phone. Lynn sat there, suddenly alone, in shock, and tears started to fill her eyes.
Everyone in the bar had seen and heard them and just like anyone would have done in that situation she got up to leave, with hands searching her pockets. Then she broke down, stumbled over a chair and fell on the floor. There she stayed, sobbing violently, until I picked her up and carried her to my office where I put her on the sofa.
When I turned around to go and get her a brandy, Sally was already standing beside me with a glass in her hand, gesturing for me to leave them alone. As I left two other regulars passed me going in.
Naturally this caused a bit of curiosity with many guests, but the regulars made an effort to act humane and when a guy said 'Stupid bitch didn't see that coming' and laughed, Exit and Tuborg was in his face in a second and told him to leave before
he
had something coming
too
.
After a while Latte came out from the office and took me aside.
"She is starting to recover somewhat, but has nowhere to stay for the night. She is relatively new in town and share an apartment with the guy. They met over the internet four months ago, but she refuse to go back now of course. She left her purse at home since he was buying so she has no money either. I sleep on a friends couch and Sally . . . well, I think you know her situation: she can't help right now. Is there anything you can do?"
"She can sleep on my couch if she likes, but maybe that is not the best solution. I guess I can borrow her money for a cab and a motel room, or she can stay here in the office. I've done that a few times myself and it's not that bad."
"I think it would be better if she wasn't left with a lot of booze but with some company."
I raised an eyebrow at her in mock query and she continued:
"Not
that
kind of company! I'll talk to her. Thanks Temp."
She returned to the office with another small brandy. In the end I borrowed Lynn the money and she left with Latte in a cab. I doubted I would see the money, or her, again but what the hell, it was for a good cause.
She did return the next evening though. She came in early while I was more or less alone. I spotted her at once when she entered and gave her a smile. Her answering smile was thin and nervous as she stepped up to the counter and handed me an envelope. Inside was the money and a 'thank you'-note to 'all the regulars and the owner of The Friendly Bar' signed Lynn Rosemont. Then she turned to leave.
"Lynn, do you have anywhere to sleep tonight?"
She turned to me again, a question in her eyes.
"I'll manage somehow. A colleague at work went over to the apartment with me today to gather my things so at least I have money now. Why? Why would you care? I'm just a stupid broad who picked the wrong guy and suffers for it."
"Well, it isn't any of my business but being new in town with no place to go would be hard on anyone. It so happens that another regular came in after you left yesterday and heard about what happened. He said he has a furnished apartment you could borrow for a month or two. It's his daughters and she is away on a job abroad. The only condition is that you take care of her aquariums and pay the bills. He lives a block from here and the apartment is on the other side of town, so it's a problem for him to go there every now and then to feed the fishes."
"Really? He would trust me, a stranger, to live at his daughters place? He is not a pervert that will keep a key and surprise me at night, is he?"
"I doubt it." I smiled. "He's a cop, married to a cop and well known. Copcop often comes here after work to relax for a while. He said they would come in around 10 tonight if you were interested."
"Copcop?"
"That's what they are called here, they almost always come here together. Stay if you like. I'm sure many of the others will be happy to see you again."
So she stayed and we talked. As the regulars came in everyone who had been there the night before walked up to her, gave her a hug or put a hand on her shoulder in sympathy, and the crowd around her grew larger all the time. That was how it worked: sympathy and support for those who needed it.
She borrowed the apartment for two months until she found one for herself and she became a regular too. The reason that she kept her real name was simply that no-one had the heart to suggest 'Heartbreak' or 'Deserted' or what ever might have fitted.
Since the age limit for alcohol was 21 I had to keep an eye open for minors. Not that I was all that strict with visitors bringing their kids after the cinema, but still, I didn't serve minors alcohol. One night it was really crowded and I hardly had the time to say hi to the customers when a thin female voice ordered a beer. I reacted automatically with asking for ID.
"You're joking right?" came the reply. "You can't think that I'm not 21, seriously?"
I stopped in mid stride and looked at her. She was short, thin, quite cute, had short black hair and almost golden eyes. If she was 21 though, I was the queen of Persia.
"Of course not, Mrs Mature Woman, anyone can see that you are 21 and half-a-day. ID please!"
The conversation made Honey and Sally, who sat nearby, laugh and that didn't make me any more popular with the girl.
"It's in my luggage somewhere." she gestured towards a huge bag over by the door. "It's hot and I have travelled for two days. Can't I have the beer while I try to find the ID? Please?"
"Sorry, I can get you a pint of water though. You are right that it is hot and I don't want you to pass out from dehydration while you try to find anything in that 'handbag' of yours. Typical that the air conditioner breaks down on the warmest day of the year."
"Fuck you!" was her reply as she turned and grabbed the bag. "There are other bars you know."
She opened the door.
"Right you are, but this is the only one this crowded due to the lack of air condition. The thirsty ones are here to sweat so they can drink more beer."
That earned me a finger from her as she left, and another laugh from those standing close. It was true that the air conditioning had broken down a few days earlier, and with a hundred degrees F in the shade outside it was close to unbearable inside. I had been told that this was the only place that still had some space though, the other bars were packed with people. Those who wanted a beer this side of Christmas came to me anyway.
"You should have called the cops." Honey said. "I doubt if she was 18, and with that bag I think she might be on the run without her parents permission if you take my meaning."
"I would say you are probably right but the cops will be busy anyway a day like this. I'll talk to Copcop if they come by. They will know if anyone is reported missing."
"You may be right, but I don't like a kid like that walking the bars: she could get in trouble with some asshole picking her up."