Oneness

for L.

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To: PDonovan

From: LCoburn

Pat,

Thanks for the invitation to come visit you, I'd really like that. After 8 months on the computer and once or twice on the phone, I guess it's time we finally met. When would be good for you? Is this weekend too soon? I know it's kind of short notice, but school has been real rough and I'd kind of like to get away for a while.

Love & Hugs,

Louise

That was the prelude of one of the most exciting days in my life. Louise had written me almost a year earlier in reference to one of the stories I had posted on rec.arts.erotica. She had really liked it, particularly the way I described the intimacy between my characters. We had talked for a while on the phone (before I had to move and couldn't afford a phone anymore), but she had expressed her desire NOT to be involved with anyone. I had thought that was the end of that. Little did I suspect...

It was April 15th, Tax Day, also known as Red Nose Day at the hospital. Everything had gone wrong in preparing for Louise's visit. My computer system had been acting up and I had no idea whether she was really coming to visit or not. I had e-mailed her directions and given her several phone numbers, just to be sure she made it. I took the #13 bus from work to the west-side and walked nervously into the grocery store parking lot.

"Look for a car with an Ohio license plate." I thought to myself. It didn't take long to find one. Sitting in the driver's seat was a lovely young woman, straight dark brownish-red hair, oval face, beautiful green eyes...so incredibly unlike the image I had conjured up in my mind. Louise was ten times more than I had ever dreamed she would be.

When she emerged from the car I was even more impressed with everything from the curves of her body to the smile on her face. I took her in my arms almost instantly, just feeling her against my body as her warmth flowed into me.

"It's so good to finally see you!" she said, holding me tightly to herself.

"Same here." I stood back and looked at her, commenting to her how much I thought she had underestimated herself. She smiled and looked away shyly. "Come on, let's do some shopping."

We went into the store to pick up a few things for the night. I had promised her a home-cooked Italian dinner, which was a better for my bank account than taking her out...and more personalized.

It wasn't long before we arrived at my new place. She held the groceries while I nervously fumbled for the keys. I can't imagine why I was nervous, I was only with an incredibly beautiful young woman whose very presence made my hormones, not to mention my heart, race! Finally I managed to get the door open and let my guest inside. She took the groceries to the kitchen while I got out of my sweater and put my work materials away. Then I turned on the CD player and put it on "shuffle." Soon the room was filled with the soft strains of Enya.

"Make yourself at home." I told her as I passed her on the way to the kitchen. She seemed very shy about following my instructions, though.

I began putting the food away and getting out those things that I would need to make my special spaghetti and spicy meat sauce. As I worked on dinner, though, I couldn't help but think about her being there ... alone... in the living room. I tried to occupy my mind with the preparation of dinner, but Louise's gorgeous eyes and beautiful lips wouldn't stay out of my thoughts. Finally I set the box of pasta down and turned to enter the living room, only to find Louise standing there watching me. I walked toward her and she smiled shyly (again), then looked down at the floor. I slid my arms around her and she buried her face against my shoulder. I held her close to me for a while as I listened to her calm, contended breathing. I caught myself nuzzling her neck, but I stopped as soon as she giggled.

"Ticklish, eh?" I said, half chuckling myself.

"I'm sorry." she whispered.

Her mouth turned toward mine and our lips touched lightly for a moment. Then again, for a second or two. Then, the third time, her mouth opened and her tongue gently stroked my lips, which then parted to allow her into my mouth. Suddenly our kiss was like fire. All that Louise had pent up inside her seemed to burst out into that kiss. Her mouth crushed mine and I couldn't help but respond in kind. Our grips became tightly-strung elastic around each other's bodies. We pulled each other tighter and tighter as our tongues clashed in the heat of excitement. I grabbed the back of her head with my hand and forced the kiss even harder. Louise pressed her body firmly against me, her breasts flattened against my chest. I pushed her back against the back of the couch, her behind resting against the top. Her legs instinctively spread apart and I slipped between them. She felt my erection as it strained against the front of her pants. Though I didn't know it at the time, she was equally aroused. We had set off all the alarms and there was no stopping the fire now...

...Two minutes later Louise's shirt was lying across the top of the couch and Louise herself was lying back on the same. Her bare skin was interrupted only by the soft white laciness of her bra straps and its silky flowered cups. Her nipples rose prominently from beneath the material, having been aroused by my massaging fingers. I lowered my mouth to her bra, gently nipping at her nipples with my teeth. Soft gasps came from Louise's mouth and I decided that it was time to reveal her breasts to my gaze. I slipped my thumbs under the cups of her bra and lifted them over her bosoms. Her soft, round mounds fell out from their protection and into my view. She sat up for a moment to allow me to remove the bra, then she lay back down again, her breasts jiggling so sensually for me.

"God, they're so beautiful, Louise." I whispered into her ear as my hand rose up to cup one of them.

Louise moaned as my mouth descended on her other breast, taking as much of it inside as I could. I suckled long and deep on her breast, flicking the nipple with my tongue and nipping at it with my teeth. My hand massaged and probed her other breast, squeezing the nipple as hard as I dared. Louise gasped, which excited me endlessly. Then I took her hand and guided it to her breast, coaxing her to massage herself. I couldn't tell whether this was something new to her or not, but she seemed to enjoy doing it. Her fingers moved deftly over her bosom, tugging occasionally at the nipple and causing herself to gasp. The sight of Louise pleasuring herself pushed me closer to her in my desire.

I kissed her passionately once more as I tugged my shirt out of my pants.

She helped me pull it off and we kissed again. I felt her soft, warm breasts pressed against my chest. God, she felt like my first lover, back when I was 18. So soft and smooth, so warm and so exhilarating to touch! My hands moved up and down her side, then down to her thigh. I clasped my hand over the fold of her thigh, squeezing her tightly. We broke the kiss reluctantly but breathlessly. I snuggled with her and lay kisses all over her neck, despite her giggling.

"Louise, God, God, you're so beautiful." I moaned as my mouth moved down over her breasts, tugging at her nipples.

"Ohhh...Patrick. Ohhh."

My hand slid slowly from her thigh to the front of her jeans as I teased her breasts with my tongue. I clasped her mound through her pants and she instinctively pushed herself up against it. She was so hot inside there, as hot as I was hard. I kissed down her tummy toward her pants, tasting her delicious skin as I went. I unsnapped her jeans with my teeth (I'd always wanted to do that) and pulled down the zipper the same way. Already her scent was affecting me, causing my head to spin with thoughts of making love to this beautiful girl, our bodies entwined, joined in the most intimate act, sharing our hearts and souls until the final moment when we each would climax and become part of the other...

I came to my senses and continued my exploration of her gorgeous body. Beneath her pants was a pair of white silk panties. She lifted her ass, allowing me to remove her pants completely, tossing them over the top of the couch. Her panties were so tempting...white silk alternating with white lace in a V-shape over her mons, revealing bits of her dark-haired mound to my eyes. Her scent grew stronger and I grew more aroused. Without control, I buried my face into her panties.

"Oh!" she gasped.

My hands went underneath to Louise's backside and clasped her buttocks. I pushed hard against her mound and squeezed her bottom in rhythm to her thrusts. She grew wetter and wetter as we moved together, her moans filling my ears as her pleasure increased. It didn't take a whole lot longer for her to finally come to release...

"Oh, Patrick! Oh...yes..." she moaned as her legs tightened against my head. Her bottom thrust hard up against me as she climaxed. I caressed her bottom and her thighs as the pressure inside her dispersed and her moans faded into heavy breathing. I lay my head gently against her pulsing mound. I could feel the blood racing through her body and the sound of her breathing echoed in my ears. Louise lay her hand on my head and ran her fingers gently through my hair. We remained like that for some time.

Louise softly asked me to stand up, which I did. She stood in front of me and removed my gold polo shirt. Then she dropped to her knees and undid my pants, allowing them to fall around my feet. I stepped out of them just in time for her to start coaxing me to sit down on the couch. My erection was strong and prominent through my briefs, even more so as I sat down. Louise slipped over me, straddling my legs. Her breasts wavered in front of my eyes. As she sat down on me, I could feel the heat of her mound through my underpants, and I was sure she could feel my erection pressing against her sex. We moved and rubbed together for a long time, holding each other warmly, her breasts brushing my chest or my lips brushing against her breast. Her arms were wrapped around my neck and mine were around her waist, with one draped over her buttocks.

"This feels wonderful." I moaned softly, feeling her wetness spreading to my underpants. Louise's response was to move faster, which worked my erection deeper into her panties.

My hands slid down over her bottom, caressing the soft globes of her flesh that I had watched so intently as we walked through the store. As I stroked, her panties slipped further and further down, allowing me to feel her bare, soft skin. I lightly touched the split between her buttocks, which she seemed to like. Then I caressed further down, sliding my hands into her panties and stroking closer and closer to her sex. Briefly I brushed my fingers over her anus and the reaction was startling. Louise let out one of the most sensual moans I had ever heard. I had found something that delighted her.

"Mmmmm. I think I found something." I joked.

"Oh...yes. I like that. No one's ever done that to me before."

I took that opportunity to gently slip my index finger inside her anus, slowly pushing into the warm, wet opening. I stopped at the first joint of my finger and, as I pumped my finger back and forth, I pumped against her body with my hips. Louise seemed lost in the ecstasy of it all. I was pleased to be pleasing her.

As Louise and I continued to move together and to kiss and feel each other's chest against the other, I could sense her wanting more, wanting it to go on further.

"Louise," I whispered. "What would you like me to do next?"

She gently let her head fall back and then leaned forward until she was completely against me, her breasts crushed against my chest. She kissed my ear and licked it sensually, then said ever-so-softly, "Make love to me."

My heart leapt at her request, yet I wasn't sure about it. Something didn't seem right...yet. I pulled my finger out of her and my hands out of her panties, resting them on her lovely shoulders.

"Louise, would you be upset if I wanted to wait a little longer?"

She shook her head. "No, I can wait. Why?"

"I want us to be able to fall asleep together, but we haven't eaten yet. I promised you dinner."

"Well, I'm not one to turn down a free meal. Cook on."

We decided to go ahead and put on our night clothes, so I slipped on my nightshirt and sweats while Louise disappeared into the bathroom. While she was busy changing, I started preparing the ground beef, onions, mushrooms and everything else for the sauce, while the spaghetti boiled away in the pot. Minutes later she emerged from the bathroom in a beautiful pair of silk forest green pyjamas. My eyes wouldn't leave her until I heard the sound of the water boiling over. Louise giggled as I frantically tried to calm the spaghetti down. I returned with a smirk and went about my work, slaving over a hot stove...

We ate during "Brisco County" and then sat back and watched "The X Files". Louise curled up in my arms and we got quite warm as the show progressed. It was the one about the prehistoric killer insects. Brrrrrrr, that was a frightening one and I feigned protecting Louise by pulling her close to me, which usually resulted in a nice, deep kiss. But, as 10:00 rolled around, we decided we didn't want to watch any more TV, so I led her toward the other part of the apartment. We stopped in front of the bathroom.

"I thought we might have a little fun before we have our fun."

"Like what?"

"I thought we might take a shower together." I answered. Her eyes lit up and she started to undo her pyjamas. At the same time, I began removing my nightclothes. In moments we were nude together. I looked at her in full light, her soft skin, her gentle curves, her round, full breasts, and the soft, black triangle nestled between her legs. I blushed as she looked longingly at my erection, pulsing with anxiety at her beauty.

I ran the water and had her check it. Then I stepped in and helped her to join me, afterwards closing the curtain. The warm water beat down on us, dusting our bodies with moisture. Louise's breasts looked so luscious as water began to form on them. I pulled her to me and we kissed passionately, turning in the spray of the shower, feeling it run between our bodies. My penis brushed her mons, feeling a hint of the tingly warmth of sex as it rubbed against her labia. She gasped softly and buried her face against my shoulder. Her lips caressed my skin, working their way up to my neck, then my jaw, and finally my ear, which she assaulted passionately. I was gasping now, clutching at Louise's body as she kissed my face, settling eventually on my mouth. All the while my erection was brushing against her mons, creating a sexual heat that neither of us could deny much longer.

"Patrick..." she moaned and I knew what she wanted. I dropped downward, kissing her breasts as I went. On my knees, I faced the center of Louise's passion. Her pubic hairs were matted with a combination of the water and her own moisture. I put my hands on her smooth hips and leaned forward, placing my lips at the top of her triangle. As I kissed down, my hands slid around to her backside, clutching her buttocks. Her scent was strong and I was driven further into her. She spread her legs as I pushed in and her labia parted. I could see her clitoris, firm and erect, and her inner sex, so pink and wet. She was indescribably beautiful. I worked my tongue around her clitoris in circles as I probed the cleft of her buttocks with my fingers. Louise opened herself further and I knew it was time. I pushed my tongue all the way out and plunged into her waiting sex. The apartment echoed with Louise's cries of passion...

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After we stepped out of the shower, Louise began shivering. I wrapped a towel around her and helped to dry her off. She did the same for me. We gathered up our night clothes and took them into the bedroom. The sweet strains of Yanni still played in the background as I led Louise under the covers of the mattress that passed for my bed. Feeling her cool and refreshed naked form against my body made me realize just how special this night was going to be.

"Do you wanna be tucked in?" I asked, teasing.

"You don't wanna sleep already, do you?" she asked, reaching down to my half-erection. Her hand was cool, but her touch quickly warmed my genitals. My penis began to grow in her hand as she stroked it gently.

Louise moved down to get a better view of her work, leaving me to face her beautiful sex once more. I nudged her legs open, watching her soft black hairs part to reveal her heated sex to me once more. As I began nuzzling her silken forest, I felt the slight tug of her gentle kisses on my erection. Soon we were caught up in pleasuring one another. I felt Louise's mouth as it slid up and down the length of my penis, soaking me. Louise felt my tongue as it explored the depths of her vagina.

The motion in the bed became faster and my hands grabbed Louise's buttocks. She held on to mine as I rolled onto my back, taking her with me and landing us in a "69" position. Louise's mouth didn't miss a beat as it continued to move up and down on me. Her mound was directly over my face and I had no trouble pleasuring her as I had been. In fact, I now had a chance to give her more of the pleasure I had discovered delighted her. Using my hands, I parted her buttocks until I could see the tight little ring of Louise's anus. My tongue moved out of her vagina and slid upwards. She could feel what I was doing and lowered her hips a little. My tongue started probing the opening and I could feel Louise moaning around my penis. Her fingers slid down and began manipulating my testicles. I used a finger to push into her anus, allowing my tongue to go further in. The two worked together to open her up and increase her pleasure. They succeeded.

"Oh, God." she moaned, letting my erection slip out of her mouth.

I pushed my finger all the way into her, feeling the silky warmth of her rectum around it. Louise's muscles flexed and I began moving it back and forth inside her. Her fingers gripped my penis and she started stroking me back and forth as well. I started pumping my hips -- I was much closer than I had thought -- and my tongue slid back into her vagina. We worked together, driving each other further and further towards an ever-widening chasm of ecstasy. Louise's moans echoed around the room and she felt mine as I cried out into her vagina. My hips pounded the mattress now as I felt the initial rumbles of my orgasm begin. Louise gasped my name a few more times. Her legs clamped around my head and her anus clamped around my finger, quivering. We were both coming.

Louise's eyes widened as she saw the head of my penis grow and the hole at the tip split open. Her expression changed to one of surprise as the first spurt of semen gushed out and struck her across the cheek. More liquid shot out across my abdomen, much to Louise's delight. She milked me until I was limp, then softly caressed my balls. Only then did she realize that she had completely ignored her own, powerful orgasm.

After a few moments of cooling down, Louise slipped off of me and lay down. Her chest rose and fell quickly and deeply. I lay my head between her breasts and listened to her heart as it pounded away in her rib cage. I nuzzled her bosoms and laced them with kisses, working my way up. I kissed her neck and up her cheek to her ear, then tickled that with the tip of my tongue. Louise giggled and turned to look at me. Across her cheek was still the long streak of semen. She could still feel its warmth against her flushed skin and she reached up to touch the sticky fluid.

"It looks good on you." I joked.

"It's your fault!" she protested.

"No, it's your fault. YOU made me do it." I reminded her and leaned over to kiss her. She didn't hesitate to plunge her tongue into my mouth and kiss me with all the passion she contained within her.