First chapter in a bit of a twisted series I've had in my head for a while. Bon appetite. Criticism, as always, is appreciated.
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"9441. That is what you're called is it not? I request that you rise immediately."
Yeah sure, like she had any obligation to pay anyone even the slightest bit of attention ever since she was thrown in this hell hole. She smiled at the unintended pun.
'Nope, not a damn reason.'
The smile almost immediately wore off. She didn't like the way that last thought brought about a feeling of regret and remorse. Emotions weren't exactly in her profile. So she quickly did away with it and instead, tightened the fetal position she was in and grunted a hushed obscenity at the invading party.
"You'd would do well not to feign languor." His voice took on a slightly annoyed tone. "I strongly doubt slumber on solid burning earth is as comfortable as you convey it to be."
'Just stay still, and it'll leave you alone.' She thought.
"Or I could just stay here until such a time comes where you chose to respond."
Her red eyes immediately snapped open. "Get the fuck out of my head!" She practically screeched, whirling herself around into a half sitting position, with such speed it took the visitor by surprise judging by the look of shock and surprise worn on his face.
A mock smile found its way back onto his handsome face after he quickly recovered. "I may be mistaken so feel free to correct me if I am, but are succubus not meant to have a little more social appeal?" he asked with a raised eyebrow.
She just stared back in concealed shock of her own.
'A human? No ways... The hell would those weaklings be looking for this deep in here?'
Then it clicked. He was way too large to be a human. Wings weren't visible but tainted feathers lay at his feet, grey looking from where she sat although that could have just been the dim light's doing. She had never actually seen one before but if he was what she thought he was, that made him all kinds of dangerous.
If he read her thoughts at that moment, he made no sign of it.
She steeled her nerves before replying. "You'll have to excuse me. Centuries caged up in solitary down here will take its toll on any demons manners." She replied neutrally, almost sarcastically.
His blue eyes locked onto her red ones through the corroded bars. "Indeed... Indeed. Though if I'm to be truthful, I couldn't care less about your etiquette or lack thereof." He said, his focus never wavering, "Not to be unappreciative at finally finding a demon as uncommon as that of your caliber but I must express my curiosity as to why you're here in the first place."
Her eyebrows furrowed at that. What did he mean by 'Appreciative' exactly? She made the only assumption she could and decided to set the record straight. "Not to be impolite, but there's a certain rulebook we go by that forbids... extensive interaction with supernatural beings for conventional reasons. On that rationale, succubus only engage with mortals."
He simply smiled in response. It was a weirdly honest smile. Something you didn't get much in a place of torture often. "No. No they don't, do they? But what good is a rulebook to you when you're incarcerated in here?"
The look of actual intrigue worn on his face made her rethink the manner in which she responded. "It's about principal. Agreed, there's certainly no reward for ethics but at the very least you still get that peace of mind," she looked down at her soft crimson hands rested in her nude lap and raised one in inspection, "that you're not like the rest of these monsters."
He gave her a slight nod, almost as if he approved of her answer. Then the visitor took a step back followed by another. "If that's the case, it's quite Fortunate I'm not here on my own behalf wouldn't you say? Care to take a trip with me?"
She never got a chance to ask where to. It happened so fast. The bars that held her captive for eons, violently bent and folded in a way reality shouldn't allow, ripping themselves from the rock they were attached to above and below her, aggressively spraying debris all over the place in the process. She sputtered and coughed gasping for air, covering her eyes while stumbling backwards. Her heel caught on one of the fallen pieces of rock and gravity did its job, dragging her to the floor she was all too familiar with now.
When she looked up from the shelter of her forearm, dust clouded the air and she could barely make out her saviour's silhouette shadowing the faded light that came from behind him. Except it didn't take on the shape she remembered. Instead, what seemed to be bat wings rose from his back and she could swear the long curving shapes atop his head were horns. Red ruby's shone brightly where his eyes were supposed to be along with jagged edges running down the dark outline in such a manner that she couldn't help but question if it was even the same being in the first place.
However, that image didn't exist when it cleared up provoking her to question her own sanity. No horns, no demon eyes, no wings and definitely no barbed demon skin. Just as before, he resembled the look of an ordinary human. The only thing setting him apart from them was the added glow, obsidian body armour which he filled in well along with the extra feet in his size, impossible for any human to attain.
He waited patiently for her to regain her senses, not moving a step from where he stood as if not affected by the dirt. Those glimmering blue eyes just stared at her in an almost ghostly fashion.
'What is wrong with you?! You could have warned me at the very least dammit!' is what she felt like screaming, but thought better of it. It was unwise making enemies with the likes of him.
"That wasn't very nice," She coughed.
"Apologies," He simply stated, "Shall we?" His right hand was raised in a reassuring gesture, pointing down the passageway.
She was still wary though, especially after what she thought she just saw. No doubt he sensed it but remained patient. Without taking her eyes off him, she slowly she found her feet again and cautiously stepped forward through the gap that used to hold the grill. Immediately shivers cascaded down her spine at the notion of freedom, quelling the former fears she had momentarily. Having being sentenced to eternity for her shortcomings, liberty was something she had long given up on. And yet here it found her, in the form of this armoured knight towering above her, a few steps ahead.
Then it occurred to her while following behind him; he promised nothing of the sort. She didn't know where in hell he was taking her in the first place.
Her hopes were quickly extinguished at the first-hand knowledge that there were worse things hell had to offer, much worse than eternal imprisonment. But if that were the case, what would
he
be doing here fetching her himself?
The corridors they walked down could easily be associated with mine tunnels that had prison cells cheaply built into the charred maroon stone. She was yet to see one with an actual inhabitant though. Only a handful of the many wooden torches mounted on the walls seemed to have been lit recently and far less were actually burning. It was the same no matter which route they took.
Looking back at the memories when she was first dragged down here there was so much life. Too much for her liking actually. Every single cell she passed were crowded with minions of different manner, scrambling for her attention. Some screaming for her to come closer, some yelling rape threats, and others just generally looking on passively with lustful looks in their eyes. The noise back then was deafening. What had happened to everyone? Why was she the only one left? Or was she simply last in line, soon to find out?