Meeting A Woman At The Dojo - Romance
This is my first story since my Creative Writing elective in High School many, well several, decades ago. I've tried to leave certain things about the characters and events of the story to your imagination and focus more on the story. I've got several ideas for a series of this type, each having new characters. They would have a title like "Meeting A Woman At The ____________." I think it could be fun.
I'm putting this under Romance but be warned that there is a scene that could be slightly non-consensual. It is a spanking after a lost bet.
Thanks for any positive feedback and helpful critiques.
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Daven had worked for the International Auditors Group since graduating college. In those eight years, he had steadily earned promotions for his quick and accurate work. Daven's current manager Eric had grown very confident and impressed with him in the two years he had reported to him. So much so that he always gave Daven the best and most challenging assignments.
Daven didn't seriously date a lot because his job was a constant cycle of fixing issues and finding that needle in the haystack from city to city about every 2-3 months. He didn't mind it. Finding a lady that met his standards was very difficult these days. Trying to find someone in a bar or online wasn't his thing. He didn't seem to be in any one place long enough to get to know anyone very well, let alone build a relationship.
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Carrie had been around the city her whole life. It wasn't always an easy life because both of her parents worked several jobs just to make sure they could cover the basics of food, shelter, and education for their daughter. She had to grow up fast in her neighborhood because weakness wasn't a quality that translated well to the city streets.
Her parents always provided for her the best they could, but they weren't often around when she needed them. This caused her many sleepless nights trying to figure out how to navigate the pressures of growing up in today's society.
The nearby karate school impacted Carrier's life as she was growing up. She didn't go in the front door as most students do because she was invited to study the art of karate as a way of paying restitution for a bad choice she made.
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The Conway family had been a part of the community for many years. Their two oldest boys had stayed in the city and had started their businesses in the community.
Thomas started a local market that catered to the needs of the residents. It was much easier to walk to the local market than to take the bus across town and try to carry a week's worth of groceries home on the bus. So he stocked his store with what he knew was needed and nothing else. It proved to be a good business model for him. He didn't get rich from it but wasn't poor either.
His brother Rick caught the fever of martial arts while he was in the Navy stationed in Japan. He studied at a school that was very close to his duty station for most of his enlistment. After finishing his time in the Navy, he stayed for another four years to continue his study of the martial art of karate. When he returned home, he knew he wanted to open up a dojo of his own and provide the many lessons that the study of karate can teach. There is much more to learn than just kicking and punching. The mental discipline and confidence that can be gained can be life-altering.
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Carrie was known in the neighborhood as a good kid. But like most kids without parental supervision, they can be drawn into a group of friends that aren't always the best influence. That was the case with Carrie. Her newest friends had found that getting things with the "five-finger discount" was much easier than trying to pay for things that they didn't have the money for.
This poor decision is something that changed Carrie's life for the better. It just took her many years to come to that same conclusion.
The day the event happened was like any other day. Carrie and her small group of friends entered the market and while two of the group bought a few snacks, the other 3 were using their special discount.
Thomas had been watching the group for several weeks and was positive that something was going on with the group. When they arrived, he asked his wife to cover the front checkout while he had some shelf stocking to do. As he suspected, the kids were putting candy and snacks in the backpacks and it didn't appear they were planning on paying for them. As he approached the group they knew they were busted. They all ran but one.
Carrie was so new at this game she didn't realize what had happened. By the time it finally clicked in her mind, Thomas had a hand on her arm and the other on her backpack and was moving here to the front of the store. He set her down in a chair behind the counter and explained to his wife what had happened. Mrs. Conway asked her husband what they should do, maybe call the police. Thomas had another idea. He wanted to confirm who she was first and then put his idea into motion.
He confirmed that she was indeed Carrie Ford the daughter of Mel and Jan Ford who lived across the street from the store. He knew that her parents worked very hard to provide for her but simply couldn't be there to be the parents they wanted to be. They were good people, just hadn't ever caught the right break in life.
Thomas knew that his brother Rick could always use some help around the dojo, so he called him to see what his brother thought of the plan. They both agreed that the plan could provide Carrie with the support she would need over the next several years of her life to lay a solid foundation of strong character and even stronger decision-making skills.