Please stop and read this notice
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In June and July, 2013, I posted a story named "A Miracle at the Cabin" in the Novels and Novellas category. You, the readers, liked the story and gave it very good scores, which I sincerely appreciate. Many of you also gave wonderful feedback on how the story could be further improved. One of the suggestions was for me to expand it to tell more about one of the major characters that played a significant role near the end.
After reflection, I agreed with your suggestions and decided to do a major rewrite and expansion that I am posting here beginning today. Rather than take the chance of causing confusion, I have given this rewrite a new title of "Lydia's Dream" and posted it in the Romance category.
There have been several changes to the story in each chapter including the addition of new characters. I have rewritten most of the erotic scenes to tone down the raw sex to better focus on the actual story. That was one of your suggestions.
Chapter 13 has been expanded, and I've added two new chapters to complete the story that I should have told originally. Thank you for suggesting these upgrades. I hope you like what I've done with it.
As usual with all my stories, this is fiction and a product of my imagination. I own all the rights to this story. The places described really do exist, but I might have taken liberty to modify them in the story. No character portrayed here is based on a real person although many of you thought it was.
No one under the age of 18 is depicted having sex in this story.
There are two chapters in each day's posting.
If you read the original story, you will definitely have a dΓ©jΓ vu feeling... but please have patience. I trust the new material and ending will make it worth your effort to read again.
Thank you. M_E
Lydia's Dream
Chapter 1
Where did she come from?
I glanced at the car's clock. It was almost 1:00 am. It'd taken much too long to get there. Atlanta's Friday evening rush hour was horrendous, and I had to stop for groceries and gasoline.
Arriving, I drove up the steep gravel lane to the cabin overlooking Lake Lanier. After pulling into the guest parking spot near the front door, I turned the engine off, took a deep breath and yawned. I was very tired and ready for bed but still had work to do. It was a dark moonless night and very quiet. The only sound was a splash when a fish jumped in the lake below.
Using a small flashlight to illuminate the lock, I opened the door and turned on the interior and porch lights. When entering the cabin, I was surprised to see two beer cans sitting on the kitchen counter. The kitchen was spotless when I'd left two months earlier and no one should have been here. The room was warmer than I expected, and I noticed several other items out of place. The sofa cushions were piled up, not in their normal position and someone had moved an armchair to the family room. It should be in the guest bedroom.
I walked to the fireplace and saw a few glowing embers. There'd been a fire just in the last few hours. There was a light smell of hickory smoke still present. Somebody was here and tingling fear shot through me. The poker from the fireplace was the only weapon I could find. Picking it up, I walked softly to the guest bedroom.
After slowly opening the door, I switched on the room light. All was in order. When I opened the master bedroom door and switched on the light, someone started screaming and screaming. It was obviously a woman and she could really scream; and scream, she did. She pulled the covers up around her and just peeked out as she screamed. The whole bed was shaking as she tried to protect herself with the blanket.
I held up my hands and said, "Please, lady, please stop screaming. I'm not going to hurt you. Please calm down."
"GET OUT!" she yelled as loud as any human voice I'd heard.
"Okay, okay, but please calm down. I'm not going to touch you. I'm very sorry I scared you."
She peeked out and said, "Well, you should be. What are you doing here?"
"I own this cabin."
She studied my face for a moment. I suppose she concluded I was telling the truth.
"Oh, I'm sorry," she said. "If you'll leave me alone for a few minutes, I'll gather my stuff and get out."
I shook my head and replied, "It's much too late at night for you to leave. Why are you here?"
"That's none of your business."
"Okay. Maybe we can sort things out in the morning. I've groceries and supplies to bring in. Stay where you are and try to get back to sleep. You're welcome to stay here for now." She stared at me over the top of her bedcovers. At least she was quiet. I turned the room light off and closed the door.
While walking to the kitchen, I heard her footsteps running to the bedroom door. She locked it and I could hear the unmistakable sound of a chair being dragged across the floor and wedged against the door.
After storing the food and other supplies, I went to the guest bedroom. At least it had a full bath so I could shower... except there was no hot water. I guessed the pilot light had gone out again. I wondered if she had been taking cold showers?
I lay awake in bed for a long time, unable to get her presence out of my mind. What was she doing here and how did she get in?
I finally fell asleep sometime in the middle of the night; and wouldn't you know it, I dreamed about her. For some reason, the name "Pam" kept coming to me in the dream. I didn't know anyone named Pam, but the dream seemed very real and, unlike most dreams, I remembered it when I woke.
The sun was just coming up and I needed to start a fire. The house was cold. I hurriedly put on trousers, a t-shirt and a robe I found in the guestroom closet. As I went through the motions of laying the fire and making the coffee, she was all I could think about. I didn't even get a good look at her, except the top of her head and eyes. Where did she come from?
Shortly after the coffee was ready, I heard her bedroom door open. She slowly came out carrying a suitcase and wearing a winter coat. I smiled but she glanced only briefly at me as she walked toward the front door. "I'm sorry," she said.
"Would you like coffee? I just made it."
She stopped and glanced at me and appeared to be uncertain of what to do.
"No, I'd better just go," she replied.
"I'd like you to stay and have breakfast. Can you at least do that? I promise not to touch you. Please stay."
Her resolve to leave seemed to slowly ease. After a moment she agreed. "Okay, maybe for just a little while." She removed her coat and laid it across the back of the sofa.
I poured a cup of coffee and sat it on the counter. "Do you take cream and sugar?"
"No, just black please." She walked to the counter, picked up the cup and stepped back. She was obviously scared.
She was a beautiful young woman, in very good shape, with long wavy blonde hair that fell well below her shoulders. I could see the outline of a very nice bosom and a narrow waist that flared into a firm and pert bottom restrained by her tight jeans. Her sultry eyes were an amazing blue color that gave a sparkle to her facial features.
I said, "We didn't get off to a good start last night and I'm sorry for that. My name is Tom. Can you at least tell me your name?"
"I'm Pam."
My heart seemed to stop. This scared me and a sudden rush of tingling chills raced through my body. I felt lightheaded.
She said, "You don't look well. Are you about to faint?"
Holding onto the counter, I breathed deeply and slowly regained control. "I'm okay. Just hungry and tired, I suppose. I didn't get much sleep last night."
"I didn't either after you opened the door."
"I'm sorry for that. I didn't expect anyone to be here. Believe it or not, I'm glad to meet you Pam."
"Why?"
"Because you seem like a nice young lady that maybe needs a little help."
"I don't need anybody's help." Her eyes showed defiance.
I smiled and replied, "What can I fix you for breakfast? I've bacon, ham, smoked sausage and eggs. I can do pancakes or waffles or oatmeal."
"You're like an IHOP." She finally grinned, but just barely, and then looked away when our eyes touched.
"Well, I wouldn't say that but I think my pancakes are better than theirs. You want to try them?"
"Sure."
"And what about a few bacon strips?"
"That'd be good."
"Why don't you have a seat at the table and I'll get going."
"I think I'll go over next to the fire. It's very cool in here."
"Good, can you put another stick on?"
"Of course."
I worked in silence to mix the batter and heat the griddle while the bacon sizzled in a skillet. She stood with her back to the fire and watched, never seeming to take her eyes off me. I glanced at her a couple of times and smiled. She remained stone-faced.
In a few minutes, the first batch of pancakes was ready and the bacon was crisp. I heated maple syrup in the microwave in a small cream pitcher my wife had always used.
"I think it's ready. Come on over." She walked to the kitchen but kept the island counter between us. I respected that and put the platter with the food on the counter, along with her plate and utensils. I busied myself with the next batch while she filled her plate and sat at the table. She seemed to have a good appetite.
After a few moments, Pam said, "These are very good. What do you do to make them taste so much better than normal?"
"I add cornmeal to the batter mix. That gives them texture and adds a roasted corn flavor that's good with the syrup."
"I'm going to remember that."
"Can I ask a question?"
Her guard quickly went up but she eventually replied, "I guess."
"How did you get in the cabin? I didn't see anything to indicate a break-in."
"I found a key under the flower pot on the front porch."
I smiled and recalled, "I let a friend use the cabin last spring. I forgot to retrieve the key I left for him."
She asked, "Why did you come so late last night?"