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It's the first Friday in December and naturally, since this is Western Washington, it's pouring. I'm driving home from work, exhausted—as I always am at the end of the week. The lovely Mr. Kahr had decided to approach me fifteen minutes before the weekend was supposed to begin with his arms full of paperwork that "just needed to get done" before I could be allowed home for my well-deserved two days of freedom. And of course I—never one to stand up for myself—had pasted on a smile and told him I didn't have plans anyway.
It wasn't really a lie. It's not as if I
did
have plans. I hardly ever do these days. But an evening of nothing would have been amazing.
Now, it'll be a miracle if I make it home before midnight. With another ten miles to go, I have to drive well under the highway's speed limit to keep from hydroplaning. Even for the Seattle area, the weather is disgusting.
Just as I flip the windshield wipers to their fastest setting, my headlights illuminate a peculiar shape just off the shoulder. Is it an animal? A bicyclist with no reflectors? A pile of garbage? Idiots have been dumping their old trash along the highway lately...
I slow down and begin to pull over, recognizing a man hunched over his motorcycle. A very old looking motorcycle. He's obviously drenched and looks up as I approach, a glint of hope evident in his eyes.
I roll down the passenger window as he begins to walk over. I take the few moments to eye him appreciatively... Despite my horrifically boring and safe appearance, I've always had a weakness for this type. He looks to be in his mid to late twenties. He's wearing a leather jacket, dark jeans and boots. His medium-length hair looks black, due to the fact that he's been out in monsoon-like conditions for god knows how long. It's dripping water onto his face and shoulders. He looks like a model. I don't know for what though. For anything. I'd buy anything he told me to.
I need to stop eyeing him like he's a sex god before he gets to the window. That would not go over well.
"Hello," he says, resting his hands on my car and leaning in slightly. He has a low, smooth voice. A British accent. Pleasant, unexpected. I can't tear my eyes from his bright, bright blue ones.
"Uh, hi. Are you okay?" I ask. "Do you need help?"
"I seem to be a bit stranded," he admits, his eyebrow piercing glistening in the dim light. "I thought I'd fixed my bike up pretty well, but apparently it's not quite satisfied with my handiwork."
He's beautiful and stranded. Oh, god.
I keep it professional. Not in my head, though. "Well, would you like a ride into town? Where are you headed?"
He tells me, and I'm careful not to react. It seems he lives on the same block as I do.
Freaky coincidence? Serial killer? Who cares?
I lick my lips nervously. "I'm headed that way, too. Come on in." I try to sound nonchalant, and even flash him a little smile. I'm not prepared for the gorgeous way a lopsided, dimpled smile of his own gathers at the corners of his lips, though. I begin fiddling with my radio as he hurries back to his bike to collect his pack and helmet.
And then he's lowering himself gracefully into the passenger seat, gently pulling the door closed. His smell, probably somewhat diluted by the storm, is so manly and clean that I nearly lean in to him. He's holding his helmet in his lap in a very endearing way.
"Thank you so much,..." he drags it out, obviously expecting me to supply my name.
"Eve," I say.
"Of course," he murmurs. I glare at him as he snickers. I don't look
that
chaste.
Except I'm afraid that I do—to him, at least. I'm pretty sure a demure black dress, pewter cardigan and oxford flats aren't what attract guys like him. At least I had opted for patterned tights that could be seen as at least somewhat sexy.
But then he turns to meet my gaze, and I feel my short-lived anger slipping away again.
Those eyes
! I quickly avert my own, pretending to concentrate on the road while taking a shaky breath. He shouldn't be having such a big effect on me. I never feel this way.
I don't realize I've forgotten to ask him his own name until he tells me. "I'm Gabriel."
"Not Adam," I respond without thinking. It doesn't sound as playful as I wanted it to. Instead, there's a poorly hidden element of disappointment.
He laughs again, but his tone is far too serious for my already uneasy stomach. "It's too bad, really."
"Yeah. You don't seem very angelic to me." My cheeks are on fire. Why the hell had I said that? Something else feels warm, too. Something that hasn't felt this way in a very long time. I'm not flirtatious. This is bad, bad news.
I can feel his eyes on me. I squint at the road, willing my nerves to calm.
"The bike and jacket are just part of the disguise, darling."
Oh, holy fuck. What have I gotten myself into?
Sensing my discomfort, Gabriel clears his throat and then his deep voice fills my car again. "I almost was named Adam, actually... But my mum had some sort of obsession with archangels, and of course she won the discussion. My father still doesn't get the final say whenever she's around."
I smile at him, grateful for his humor as well as for the change in subject. Parents, I could deal with. "Are they still in Britain?"
He looks at me curiously, and I remember that he hasn't actually told me where he's from.
"Oh...I just assumed, you know, because of your accent."
His eyes crinkle into another grin, and he nods knowingly. "Yes, still in the home I grew up in. In the countryside near Manchester. I doubt they'll ever move. Which is nice, I guess, because I can go back and feel like a little kid whenever I want to..." He turns to me again. "How about your family?"
That sobers me up a bit. "Just my brother and I." I don't supply anything more, and he's smart enough not to press the issue.
We sit in silence. The squeak of my windshield wipers and the pounding of the rain are enough of an interruption to keep the lack of conversation from becoming awkward.
The feelings I'm battling are very awkward, however. Yeah, I've gone on a few first dates in the past few years, and even a couple of second ones. But never have I felt this sort of...attraction...to someone I haven't said a hundred words to. It isn't natural, is it? Or is this how it's
supposed
to feel?
If it is, I've certainly been missing out. I'm way too aware of his presence, the fact that his left arm is mere inches from my own. The moisture from his clothes and hair has fogged up the windows, so I turn up the air. I can think of other things that could make the windows cloud over. I feel giddy.
If he's surprised that I don't have to ask further directions to his house, he doesn't show it. Maybe this is an area of town everyone knows well, and the mention of a couple street names is enough to orient most people. I wouldn't know these things, since I have the worst sense of direction of anyone I've encountered. I still have to recall my first grade teacher's "Never Eat Soggy Waffles" phrase to differentiate East from West.
"It's just to the right," he says quietly. "You can drop me off here if you'd like."
Now I'm genuinely surprised. The houses he's pointing to are just that—houses, not apartments. Worth a
lot
of money, even though they have no front yard whatsoever. I always gaze at them enviously from across the street.
I park under the streetlight. Too late, I realize that I've turned the car off completely, the windshield wiper stuck halfway through its revolution. The rain's still pouring down—it's louder now that the engine's off, and looks even more impressive because of the streetlight above us.
"Eve."
I look up at him, suddenly very nervous. Is he leaning towards me slightly? Or was he always this close?
"Gabriel." My voice isn't as steady as his.
I can see his individual lashes. Dark, long. Really long. Still wet. Framing his brilliant blue eyes.
"Thank you so much for the ride."
I nod, not trusting myself to speak without further embarrassing myself. He pulls a well-used wallet from his backpack and tries to give me a ten.
"No, no," I shake my head in emphasis. "God, no. I live really close anyway."
He smiles, tries one more time, and then opens the door. He's getting out...
Of course he's leaving. What did I think would happen? What the hell was I hoping would happen?
He's taken a few steps toward his apartment, and I'm turning the key in the ignition, when he seems to change his mind and stride quickly back over to my car. He opens the door. My heart stutters before beating twice as quickly as it ought to be.
"Could I at least thank you with a cup of tea?" he's asking. "I've got decaf."
I know I've been called innocent, traditional, careful. But never have I been pegged as a decaf type of girl. I mean, I was raised in
Seattle
, for God's sake. Here that's actually a bit of an insult.
"Why, do you think I can't handle caffeine?" I ask. It might sound a little harsher than I intended.
"Well..." he's smiling. Why is he smiling? He's looking at his wrist... "It's after midnight. I figured no one really needs a boost at this time of night."
Oh. Oh, oh,
oh