Hello everyone! This is my first submission. I wrote it in one sitting. Don't be kind with it. Be truthful in your opinion without resorting to bashing. Please feel free to rate and comment. This is not a stand alone story. Other parts will follow soon. And yes i have no editor. Your patience will be rewarded.
This is a work of fiction. This is my original story.
"Jack!" shouted an exasperated Grace, "Stop it."
The room became silent if not for their heavy breathing. It was too loud for warmth and familiarity. They could only stare at each other. Jack's was one of anger and frustration, whereas Grace's was one of helplessness instead of anger.
"Honey," Grace began as she move forward and gently caress Jack's face with her palm, "You know I love only you, and I would never do anything to hurt you. I got carried away. It was just a dance."
Jack numbly nodded, still seething with frustration. He refused to meet her eyes.
"What I did tonight was wrong," Grace continued in a sweet and caring tone, almost in a hushed whisper that belies her own frustration.
"Why do you have to flirt with guys all the time?" Jack simply spat back. He wasn't letting it g
Grace remained composed and gently replied, "No honey, I don't flirt with guys all the time" emphasising all the time, "besides, I know all of them, they are not random men."
Jack removing her hands, stared hard at her, his mouth twitching to the point of frothing, and in a resigned grunting voice that carries all his anger and frustration said, "Grace just because you know them doesn't meant its alright to flirt with them, besides, you have already fucked one of them."
Grace simply looked on as Jack walked away.
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Jack couldn't believe what he saw when he walked in. For a while there, he simply stared at the scene hardly able to contain his anger.
The crowd was alive and everyone seemed to be high on party spirit, especially his girlfriend, he noticed, horrified at his own thoughts. Grace look beautiful as always, and as always she look radiant in her dancing shoe. She was dancing with
him
too.
He could have walked away, but he simply stood there waiting for what could have happened. It was almost as if he wanted his thoughts to be true. He couldn't move even if he wanted to. His feet remained fixed to where it was, and his mind ran the same thoughts over and over again.
Why, and How, on earth was
he
here?
Minutes passed. He saw that Grace had plonked down on one of the couch to catch her breath.
He
was standing close by, talking to some guy. She with another woman.
"Hey Jack!!!"
He felt someone's hand on his back. Jack turn around to face a grinning, drunk Marilyn, looking like she had just gotten fucked. And it turned out to be true. A guy, he didn't know, followed her, and embraced her from behind.
If they weren't drunk they would have noticed they were talking rather loud for a close whisper.
"You are fabulous," he said, "an amazing woman, a woman after my own heart"
"Oh really!" Marilyn cooed back with a salacious grin.
Any other time their kiss would have been sweet, but in their drunken state it was sloppy and slightly horrendous to be a spectacle of.
"You are a great fuck too," the man remarked with a satisfied smugness.
At that, they giggle much to the astonishment of Jack, who was feeling uncomfortable and slightly amuse at the exchange of 'pleasantries'.
It was a few seconds later, Marilyn turned to look at Jack
"This is Jack, Grace's boyfriend", She said to the man.
"Alfred." The man said as he extend his right hand for a hand shake.
"Your boyfriend?" Jack asked after the man had gone off to fetch them drinks.
"God No!" Marilyn replied, looking rather incredulously at the suggestion that Alfred could be his boyfriend.
"Some of the girls in the office talked about his penis and i had to find it out for myself it was just a rumour or truth."
"And?"
"Truth." Marilyn said with a satisfied smile as he looked on at Alfred bringing them their drinks.
"Too much of a player for a boyfriend," whispered Marilyn as Alfred reached them.
"Thanks man" Jack said as he took his drink.