This is my first ever story. Please be kind on the comments and feedback. Constructive criticism is welcome. I know there are issues with grammar. It is an important part of writing, but for this piece, I tried to concentrate more on the story. This story is meant to read like a memory, so it does switch back and forth to someone telling a story and being in the story; hopefully it is clear. You may or may not notice that I didn't include any physical descriptions. The stories I tend to like are vague on this, so you can imagine what you want these people to look like. Also, I would like to know if I should continue with this; if so I would really appreciate an editor. If you are interested please let me know. Thanks for reading.
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We met years ago, 11 years ago actually. I was in fifth grade with his brother and he was in second grade. Aidan's brother, Dustin has been my best friend since our first class together in fifth grade all those years ago. Our senior year in high school, Dustin and I drifted apart some, and Aidan and I became closer.
Neither Aidan nor I ever admitted to having feelings for each other, but several people in our lives think we are perfect for each other. My best friend, Hazel, insisted (only to me) that I was in love with him throughout my senior year in high school and up until present day (the end of my sophomore year in college).
I met my first serious boyfriend during my sophomore year; we seemed perfect for each other. That all ended after I found him in bed with some dumb freshman. Naturally, I ran to Aidan for comfort. He was my rock that I could always lean on. Yeah, I know what you are thinking a 20 year-old woman leaning on an 18 year-old school boy, but what can I say. He has always been there for me, and I think I am there for him.
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In the middle of Wal-Mart, I dial Aidan's number, praying he picks up while literally throwing the things on my list into the basket; I bake when I'm upset.
"Hey Adele! What's up?" Aidan asked.
After taking a very deep breathe and slowly flushing the tears out of my eyes I say "I can't talk about it right now. Can I come over? I'm at the store picking up things for Oreo-stuffed chocolate chip cookies."
"Yeah, of course you can. How soon will you be here?"
"Probably not for another 45 minutes or so"
"Ok, I will see you then. Oh, and drive safe please."
" I will. Thanks for caring." Aidan knows me so well, well enough to know I tend to speed when I'm upset.
Pulling in his driveway, I noticed his truck was the only vehicle there, thankfully. I truly love his whole family, especially his mom, but right now they would be entirely too much.
"Hey, glad to see you made it without a ticket" he said, while pulling me into a bear hug.
"Thanks, I really needed that. Help me with my stuff."
We carried my stuff into his house and straight to the kitchen. As always, everything was already sitting out; I bake for him enough, he knows what I need for most things. Quietly, we make small talk while he watches me prepare the cookies for baking, making me laugh with his cute jokes.
After the cookies finished baking, we went to his room to lie on his bed and talk about everything. I told him the seemingly long story about how I tried to surprise my boyfriend with an awesome home-cooked meal when he got home, only to find him home hours early and buck-naked with another woman. The tears I held back for those few hours rushed forward and filled my eyes. Aidan pulled me up against him, cradling my head to his chest, just holding me. Every once in a while I would feel a soft kiss on the crown of my head, while his hands stroked my hair and back.
When I started really sobbing, he pulled me tighter: