This is my first writing of this kind. constructive criticism is welcome <3
"Caleb? You want me to go on a 'date' with your
brother
?" I asked of my giddy best friend as we sat on the cold hardwood floors of my half-assedly put-together living room. I stared at Lilith with an incredulous look, pushing my silver hair behind my right year. "You do realize that we're besties, right? Askin' me to date your brother's like you tellin' me you think I'm horribly single," I told her with a chuckle.
Lilith looked at me, as serious as the plague. "I
am
serious Gem!" she exclaimed. "Caleb is a
really
good guy, for real. Like, you know we've been living together for a year now, and he's been a
ghoul
around the house. He sits mopping around the house all day! Sighing and sulking, and shit," she said with an equal amount of sisterly concern and dramatic flair.
I had met Caleb on very few occasions, typically when Lilith and I were on our way out to whatever club or bar we frequented most weekends. I even had dinner with him 4 months ago. Well, not
with
him, but he was there. Lilith had invited me over in the stereotypical 'get to know my new friend' way, and I had
met
him for the first time.
The night of the dinner and when I truly Caleb, I had arrived at the twin's lavish manor at 7:45. Dinner was at 8 o'clock, but I hated being late. I drove my new, black Hyundai Elantra through the wrought iron gates to the front entrance, passing intricate pink and red rose flower beds, a perfectly manicured lawn, and an elegant fountain that was alit with a golden hue. How they were able to keep the roses looking so lively with the dropping temperatures of October, I couldn't guess. I parked, got out of my car, and grabbed the gift I had brought for them, a candle I made in my shop named "Vampire Lust." I walked up the front staircase, making sure to practice smiling and adjusting the brown knit sweater dress and black trench coat I wore. Then, I rang the doorbell. I could hear indie music playing. I hoped someone would be able to hear the doorbell in the expanse of the mansion. I could hear Lilith run to the door and stop just short, making sure to collect herself. She swung open the door with a huge smile and a, "You made it!" She took the gift from my hands and brought it to her nose, inhaling deeply before lowering it.
"This candle smells like the best sex you'll ever have," she remarked before taking me by the arm and walking me down the hallway to the dining room, explaining how they had come to their new abode. Apparently, they inherited a sizeable estate from an uncle and decided to stay in the house instead of selling it.
As we walked through the house, I could not help but be impressed by the interior. The house was floored with gleaming white marble with light golden veins. My black leather knee-high boots clicked across the floor as we walked, passing a music room with a blood-red grand piano lit with candles, a library with floor-to-ceiling bookshelves stuffed with books and tomes, and a state-of-the-art kitchen that looked modern but had an old feel. Lilith and I entered the dining room, giggling over some joke she made about sticking a toe into someone's butt. The dining room was just as impressive as the rest of the house. It was black and white, with checkered marble floors, and featured a floor-to-ceiling mirrored accent wall that greeted you when you entered. The table was white, long, and royal-looking, an eight-seater with only 3 guests. Lilith let go of my arm and went to the fully stocked bar to the left on the entrance to pour herself a drink and place the candle on the table. I stood and looked around, my eyes drawn to the paintings of dark and moody landscapes. Some paintings of ships on harsh ocean waves, crashing into them with such ferocity, that you felt yourself holding your breath for fear of the boats shattering into a million pieces, to sinking to the ocean floor. I noticed the grand tablescape when I brought my attention to the table. Black on white linens, gold saucers, and rimmed glasses, with hints of red through the rose floral arrangements centered on the table. Their dining room, alone, screamed, "This is
old, ancient
money, bitch!"
I felt something, or someone, staring at me as I admired a particular painting of a siren pulling a pirate into the water as he was struggling to stay afloat on a sinking ship. I slightly turned my head to the right and met eyes so icy they looked like silver. I knew exactly who he was. Lilith had shown me pictures of her twin brother, of course, and I had caught glimpses of him when I visited her. But, it was odd seeing
him