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"I'm dying"
"You're dying?"
"I'm dying. It's something you, being a stubborn prude that you are, wouldn't understand. A mans' needs." Twenty-nine year old, Jack, grinned from behind the desk. He leaned back in his chair and kicked his feet up onto the desk.
"Prude! Why you..." Jenna stuttered in shock, "I'll cut your balls off and feed them to a...a...a..."
"A what, babe?" He chuckled.
'The nerve of this guy!' Jenna thought to herself. "I'll feed them to a rabbit!"
"Babe." He broke out in laughter.
"I'm not your babe!" She spat back with a red face. "I wouldn't ever stoop that low."
Jack swore she had steam coming out her ears, but boy did she look hot when she was mad. He grinned an evil grin and whispered in a suductive voice. "In my dreams you are."
"Liar! You have some nerve, coming in my place of business, and throwing yourself around like you own the place!" She stamped her foot on the ground for effect. Jack just laughed. Here was this 25 year-old, five foot two, redhead of course, trying to scare him away. He had to admit she was turning him on. He didn't know if it was her hair or her temper, that did the trick for him.
"I'm not a prude!" she yelled at him, then turned to leave.
"Oh no you don't missy!" He jumped up and made a grab for her.
"Get away from me!"
"After I have my evil way with you, m'dear." He chuckled as he drew nearer.
"You touch me...I'll...I'll..."
"Honey, you wont do anything. You wont be able to after I cure the prude in you. You'll be so spent, you won't be able to move for a week!" He smiled that damn smile that made you believe it.
At six foot four, he was certainly the taller one. Jack's green eyes caught her attention when he'd come in. His sandy brown hair was kept short, he had it that way since he'd been a sherrif. He wasn't employed as one anymore, which was why he had ended up working for this fireball of a woman, who was trying to run a hardware store that her dying father had left her. This woman didn't know a screw from a nut. She needed a man to run her store, and much to her discontent, she needed one in her life too.
She gasped and tried to run out the office door. Jack was fast, she'd give him that much. He caught up with her in two quick strides. "Don't touch me!" She glared at him.
He reached a finger out and flicked her nose. "Darlin' , admit it, you're in lust. My hot body is making yours ache in that special spot, hmm?" He answered huskily.
"Stop trying to seduce me or I'll fire you."
"No need. I quit." He embraced her.
Needless to say, she didn't go into the hug willingly. In fact Jenna was downright pissed. She tried to wiggle out of it. "Let me go asshole!"
"Never babe, I'm a gentleman. I won't hurt you when I take you. You'll find you will like it. And you will beg for more." He gripped her squirming body tighter.